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I wait for Better so I can get better at the element Better is teaching me to get better in. However Better doesn't like these better puns and wants them to be better. I better not say anymore better puns as Better could stop making me better.
 
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lol i wasn't serious xD

(Doton: Tsuchi Kairō) - Earth Release: Earth Corridor
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will first perform the snake hand seal and then cause the earth in the surrounding area to rise up and over a target and create a cavern, imprisoning the target. The user can leave an opening to allow attacks to go in to strike down the trapped adversaries, or close it up completely to prevent escape.

Peform the snake hand seal and then cause the earth around my clone to begin to surrounding him and create a tavern imprisoning him.

(creates clones)

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2 Advantages
2 Disadvantage
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LOL, you scared me. XD
I guess I better stop it with the puns.

I perform the snake hand seal and focus my doton chakra into the ground and condense it into the earth around your clone. As the chakra is condensed into the earth I cause it to rise suddenly forming a large cavern around you. I then manipulate the earth so as its almost in the shape of a corridor and then I seal it off leaving your clone trapped inside.
Adv-Doesn't require any handseals and the cavern can be adjusted.
Dis-Easy to break through.
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some spaces would be nice xD

(Doton: Arijigoku no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Antlion Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user performs the Ram hand seal and causes causes the ground and everything on and around it to be sucked in towards the middle of a large pit, much like the method an antlion uses to catch prey. Upon being dragged to the centre, the victim will then be sucked underground. There the victim, depending on how deep the user makes them sink, will be trapped and/or suffocated. The range of the pit is determined by how much chakra is put into the technique.

Form the hand seal and release your chakra into the ground underneath my clone and cause it to create a pit and sink my clone into the antlion.

(Creates Clone)

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(Doton: Doryū Jōheki) - Earth Release: Earth Flow Rampart
Rank: B
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: By performing the Tiger hand seal the user then makes a gigantic rampart rise up beneath the user's feet, by shaping the ground and increasing the amount of earth with chakra. Depending on what the user imagines, the shape of the rampart can be anything from level ground to a steep, needle-like mountain. If the user increases the volume of earth too much, he can be forced to keep his chakra consumption down. The user can combine this jutsu with Water Style: Waterfall Basin Technique to create a waterfall.

Form the tiger hand seal and release your chakra underneath you, then cause giant rampart to rise you up. If you remember Yamato did this when Naruto was learning rasenshuriken.
 

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LOL, you scared me. XD
I guess I better stop it with the puns.

I perform the snake hand seal and focus my doton chakra into the ground and condense it into the earth around your clone. As the chakra is condensed into the earth I cause it to rise suddenly forming a large cavern around you. I then manipulate the earth so as its almost in the shape of a corridor and then I seal it off leaving your clone trapped inside.
Adv-Doesn't require any handseals and the cavern can be adjusted.
Dis-Easy to break through.
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... Danzo, teach me the ways of the pun @_@...
 

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LOL, its quite hard to master.

I make the ram hand seal and focus my Doton chakra under your clone and keep it contained there slowly letting it spread outwards until the ground below is filled with my chakra. I then cause the ground under the clone to be sucked towards the middle of a large pit and the clone is sucked in as well until it reaches the center and then crushes it underground.

Adv- Can be used at mid-long range so the user cannot be affected, it would work on multiple targets at once.
Dis- Can be avoided before the ground is sucked in or by jutsus that send you into the air; Hurricane Fist.

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I perform the Tiger hand seal then I focus my Doton chakra into the ground below me and spread it around carefully. I then concentrate the chakra and make the chakra-infused ground rise upwards lifting me upwards. I then use shape manipulation to change the form of the rampart into a large needle-like mountain which I stand at the very tip of by concentrating chakra into my feet.

Adv- The form of the rised earth can be changed to suit different situations. It also can be used to avoid certain jutsus.
Dis- The ground doesn't rise instantly and I can still be targeted by large range jutsus.

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good moving on,

(Doton: Doryō Dango) - Earth Release: Earth Mausoleum Dumping
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user With chakra work and superhuman strength, lifts up the very surface of the Earth. The lump of earth is gigantic and, the destructive power is obvious, but even just the visual impact can be enough to make enemies lose their fighting spirits and run away. The ball of earth is then hurled it at his opponent, flattening everything in its path.

I want you to focus your chakra and make it strong, then lift the very surface of earth of Earth. Then hurl it over at the forest.

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(Doton: Doryuheki) - Earth Release: Earth Style Wall Jutsu
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will first perform the Tiger → Hare → Boar → Dog and then creates a solid wall of earth as a form of defence. Chakra is either converted to earth within the body and then spat out to form the wall or the user can manipulate pre-existing earth to form the wall. The earth then instantly rises up and takes form. The barrier itself is also coated with chakra, making its strength incomparable to that of a normal mud wall. Because of the earth's special characteristics, the wall is highly resistant against, for instance, fire and water. Hizuren Sarutobi spits mud from his mouth to perform the jutsu whilst Kakashi creates a wall composed of bulldog sculptures to box-in Pain.'

I want you to form the Tiger → Hare → Boar → Dog hand seals and manipulate the earth your standing on, to rise up a wall block these kunais. You can also use your mouth and spit a mud wall from that.

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(Doton: Iwagakure no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Hiding in Rock Technique
Rank: B
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This is a technique that allows its user to blend into rocks and then move in and out of other rocks undetected.
Note: Can only blend through on B rank and below Earth Techniques

After you form the earth wall and it blocks the kunai, i want you to blend in with the earth wall.
 

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I focus my Doton chakra into the ground and condense the chakra and send it to a large chunk of earth in the ground. I then grip the ground under my feet and send a large amount of Doton chakra through it. I then condense the chakra one more and lift the large chunk of earth up and hurl it at the forest nearby.
Adv- Requires no hand seals and can be used easily
Dis- The technique isn't really fast so can easily be countered.


I perform the Tiger → Hare → Boar → Dog hand seals and concentrate my Doton chakra into the ground directly under my feet as you throw your kunai. I then condense the Doton chakra and focus on slowly making the earth rise using chakra manipulation and it rises up as a wall with me standing on top of it and your kunai just hit it uselessly.
Adv- The wall can block against projectiles and enemy jutsu
Dis-Requires hand seals so if the jutsu is fast its best not to use this to evade it
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I build up my doton chakra in my body and this time I let the chakra circulate throughout my body. I then jump down and stand facing you with my back to the wall. I try to spread the collected chakra into the wall behind me and then I suddenly start to blend with the large earth wall and am almost impossible to see.
Adv- Useful camouflage technique in the right location, a rocky place or a mountain.
Dis- Can only be used with rocks and the opponent can destroy the rocks or attack were you last were to make you move away from the rocks.
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good moving on,

(Doton: Doryūsō) - Earth Release: Earth Flow Spears
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user first performs the Bird hand seal and the user condense mud or stone, from the ground, and shape them into spikes that will protrude from the ground in order to skewer the target. The spikes cannot penetrate targets of greater density.

Form the Bird Hand Seal and then condense the mud and stones from the ground and shape them into spikes that will rise from the ground and impale my clone.

(Doton: Iwayado Kuzushi) - Earth Style: Rock Lodging Destruction
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user performs the required hand seals Tiger → Rat → Snake and they then causes a cave-in by destroying the equilibrium that holds the cave together. Just removing a single vital stone throws off the balance of the cave, making it unexpectedly fragile and causing a domino effect that destroys the entire cave. The shinobi from Iwagakure use this technique in their pride tactic, luring several enemies into a cave to kill them all at once.

Form the hand seals Tiger → Rat → Snake, and my clone over there magically in a cave, manipulate the earth and cause an important stone to dislodge, causing the whole cave to come down.

(Doton: Yōdo Ranfunka no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Molten Earth Wild Eruption Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will send chunks of rock at the opponent and then using a fire style technique and cause them to explode on contact with the enemy.

Throw chunks of rock at my clone and then use a fire style jutsu (yes, a separate jutsu) and cause them to explode on contact with my clone.
 

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I focus my Doton chakra as I make the bird hand seal and concentrate my chakra into the ground under the clone and condense the mud and ground that is under your clones feet. I then use shape manipulation to make spikes protrude out of the ground and skewer your clone.

Adv- Would surprise the opponent since it comes directly under his feet and he wouldn't be expecting it.
Dis- The spikes are not that powerful and can be easily destroyed by Nagashi.

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I perform the Tiger → Rat → Snake hand seals and focus my Doton chakra, I then turn around to see your clone who is in a cave which so conveniently appeared. I then manipulate the chakra into a nearby cave and cause an important stone to become dislodged and the whole cave falls inwards.

Adv: Would take out a large amount of enemies at once.
Dis- Very very situational and I doubt there will be a cave in a normal fight.

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I concentrate my chakra into the ground and focus as I manipulate the earth around me so that several chunks of rock are flung at your clone. I then quickly focus my Katon chakra and exhale a small fireball after the rocks coating them in flames and they explode on contact with the clone.

Adv- The opponent is burned along with being damaged by the rocks.
Dis- You might not have enough time to coat the rocks in flames.

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This is harder than I thought. U_U
 

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3 full lines o_O or i can make it four?

(Doton: Denki Iwabashira) - Earth Release: Electric Rock Pillar
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid (Short for electric bolts)
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will make a set of four hand seals and then will place their hand on the ground to create a pillar of earth rise up from the ground. This pillar is also given a electrical charge that causes electric bolts to emit from the pillar up to short range shocking any targets in the vicinity.

Make 4 hand seals and then place you hand on the ground. Then create a pillar of earth to rise up from the ground. The pillar gives off an electrical charge that emits short range in the vicinity shocking all targets.
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(Doton: Ukiwagan no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Floating Ring Rock Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user uses the earth to create large floating rock cubes 2 meters squared to toss at the opponent. The rock cubes spin around the user, doubling as a protection against other attacks.

I want to use the earth and manipulate it to create large floating rock cubes and toss them at your opponent. The cubes spin around you at first which can be a good protection.

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(Doton: Tetsu Keimusho no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Iron Prison Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After first performing the required hand seals Ram → Dog → Rat the user then places their hand on the ground and causing a circular arena to surrend the user with a total distane of 15 meters away from the user and the walls standing up to 4 meters high. If these walls are damaged in any way, they disappear in a puff of smoke.


I want you to form the Ram → Dog → Rat, then place your hand on the ground. You will then manipulate the earth and cause a circular arena to surround yourself. These walls take any damage it will disappears. So it's a one time defense.

(Spits C rank fireball)
 

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I didn't know you wanted 3 full lines. :shy:

I perform the four necessary hand seals and concentrate my Doton chakra as I place my hand on the ground and solidify the chakra and cause an earth pillar to rise steadily. I focus on pumping in more chakra and focus as the pillar rises completely. I then change my chakra nature and concentrate my Raiton chakra into the pillar and it emits an electrical charge which shocks your clone.

Adv- The opponent won't be expecting a shock because its a doton technique
Dis- The technique is quite long.

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I concentrate my Doton chakra and focus and feel the earth under my feet and spread my chakra around the ground while keeping my focus. I concentrate again and manipulate the stored Doton chakra to create several large floating earthen cubes, I spin the cubes around me rapidly creating a makeshift defense for a few seconds. I then fling the spinning cubes at you. :|

Adv- Its a defense as well as offense so would work in different situations
Dis- The rocks are not very strong on there own.

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I perform the Ram → Dog → Rat hand seals and concentrate my Doton chakra and spread it through the ground as I place my hand gently on the earth. I then condense the chakra and watch as you spit a fire ball at me. I then focus and try to make the earth steadily rise and I manipulate it further so that a circular arena surrounds me to defend against the fire ball.

Adv: Its a large defense and could defend against wide range attacks.
Dis: Its pretty stupid because even though its made out of iron it can't withstand more then 1 attack

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yup fullllllllllllllll warya

( Doton: Jimen Bunretsu no Jutsu ) - Earth Release: Ground Splitting Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After forming the necessary hand seals Rabbit → Boar → Rat → Horse → Tiger , the user slams their hands into the ground which causes the earth to erupt below their target's feet. This technique can also effectively create barricades that would take quite some time for a regular person to surmount.

I want you to form the hand seals Rabbit → Boar → Rat → Horse → Tiger and then slam your hands into the ground. This will cause the ground to erupt the below the clone feet. Creating a Barricade.

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( Doton: Iwa Shuriken ) - Earth Release: Rock Sword hidden in the hand
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: By manipulating their chakra and creating large rocks to raise up from the ground, the user sends the huge rocks rotating together at the opponent

I want you to manipulate and create large rocks to rise up from the ground. Then send them at my clone.

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( Doton: Shōnyūseki ) - Earth Release: Stalactite
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage poinnts: 40
Description: The user manipulates their chakra creating three huge rocks infront of them. The user will then unleash the three huge rocks coming from three different angles from infront of the enemy to smash into each other causing segements to start protruding from the collision and damaging the opponent.

I want you to manipulate your chakra and create three huge rocks infront of you, then i want to send them at any angle and have them converge into each other sending the segmants to start protruding from the collision and dispersing my clone.
 
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