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"i start focusing my earth chakra, and gathering it throughout my whole body, while i am doing that, i channel the chakra into the ground, so i manipulate the ground and make it become a fine sand, so i submerge into it and then travel through the ground, and i turn the hole i made into it's original form, then i travel in the ground and i can feel what's going on in the surface"
advantage: using this technique makes me like a shark against a human in the middle of the ocean.
disadvantage: i must keep my chakra focused, second thing if the enemy spotted me, he'll be able to use a lightning jutsu to defeat me, so i must hide myself before doing it.
 

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Good job but remember, never use this technique if your opponent can see you or might be able to figure out you're underground because then a lightning technique is the least of your concern since those can't hit you if you're deep underground but if the opponent uses swamp of the underworld you're dead.

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Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: This technique lets the user create a few rock pillars that will protrude from the ground to skew the target. The rock pillars will even pass through obstacles to reach their target


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For this technique I want you to gather earth chakra and channel it through the ground and then once it reaches my clone mold the chakra in the ground beneath him. Then through manipulation cause several sharp spikes to rise up around and below my clone skewering him within the mass of spikes effectively killing him.

List atleast one advantage/disadvantage and tell me how you would use this technique in an actual fight.
 

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"i focus and gather my earth chakra, then i channel it into the ground, once it reaches your clone's ground, i mold it, through manipulation, i create several shape spikes that stabs your clone and finish him for good."
advantage: this jutsu is useful and i can win the battle with it.
disadvantage: the enemy can dodge it if he was fast, or he can simply defend himself using a C/B rank lightning jutsu
 

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Good enough, though keep in mind one can't simply 'dodge' a technique by jumping or anything if that's what you're implying. Also, when using the technique be sure to state where the spikes come from.

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Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will concentrate and release their chakra into the ground to create a small tremer that can result in harming the enemy target.



Gather your earth chakra and channel it into the ground below your opponent, then through manipulation cause a small tremor below your opponent's feet, eventually causing them to tremble and fall down causing damage and leaving them wide open for another attack.

Now, if this technique were to be used on you, how do you think you can prevent yourself from falling face down?
 

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"i start gathering and focusing my earth chakra, then i channel it into the ground below your clone, then i manipulate the ground, and make a tremor at his feet, so the opponent fall to the ground, and i jump on him and whack his stupid ass xd"
to defend my self against this jutsu i'd use this to escape :D , and make an other move:
Summoning Technique: (souseiki harinezumi) Phaze
Rank- S
Range-Short
Chakra Cost-40
Chakra Damage-80
Description- The user cuts his palm till blood drips. Once that, he then does 5 hand seals and slams his/her hands on the ground.. Phaze (My summon) Will Appears in mid air (short range) above the user circling him/her. Phaze Speaclizes in S rank Fire . And can fly at high speeds (= to Sasuke's Hawk).Phaze Beak is Incredibly Strong. This summon is the same size as Sauske Hawk. so easy rideable. This summon can also talkk, so just incase a situation happen.
 

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Hmm.. would you have the time to summon that bird? The ground is already shaking and while it's shaking you have to bite your own thumb and slam the ground.. keep in mind that it's only a small tremor so it doesn't last very long but will cause you to fall over if you don't properly keep yourself up. Anyway, when I have a sword drawn and the ground starts to shake I crouch down so that it's harder for me to fall over and while crouching I thrust my sword into the ground holding onto it to maintain my balance. Any other way to quickly lose contact with the ground works too though like Hurricane fist o-o

Anyway, let's move on;



Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 10
Description: The user spits a thick globule of mud at the target. If aimed correctly, it can blind the target's vision and choke them. It can also be used to create a sticky patch on the ground.


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Gather your earth chakra within your mouth while gathering some saliva and mix it together with the earth chakra to create mud in your mouth. Then spit the created mud towards my clone and as you spit it out apply manipulation in order to expand it and add force to it forming a thick globule of mud which would roughly be the size of a coconut.

State atleast 1 advantage/disadvantage for this technique.
 

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"i start gathering and focusing my earth style chakra, then i mix it with some saliva, so i create mud in my mouth, once i'm done, i spit the mud at your clone's face, but in the same time i manipulate it to expand it and make it more effective, then i cover the clone's face with the globule of mud"
advantage: i can blind my opponent with this technique and win the match with an other move, so this jutsu is is very effective and it doesn't require so much chakra.
disadvantage: i need to be close to the enemy's face to perform it, what makes it very dangerous because the enemy might do a lot of things in that distance.
 

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disadvantage: i need to be close to the enemy's face to perform it, what makes it very dangerous because the enemy might do a lot of things in that distance.
The technique itsself is mid-range, so from there you would be able to aim it towards the opponent's face although chances it makes contact are slim.

Let's move on;


Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Descripton: This technique allows the ninja to control nearby stone and rock. This can be especially useful if in a cave or a stone lodging. The technique can loosen the rocks and cause them to come raining down on whomever is trapped inside.



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Get towards that cave over there and gather your earth chakra. Then channel your earth chakra throughout the interior of the cave. Most earth-based construction have one or two weaknesses in them and by using your earth chakra scan the inside of the cave and find one of those weaknesses, a spot which if messed with would cause the entire cave to cave in. Once you have found the weak spot loosen it causing the cave to cave in.

State atleast 1 advantage/disadvantage for this technique.
 

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"i gather my earth chakraz, i focus it, then i channel it to the cave by touching the cave from the inside,i find a weak soft rock, i channel the chakra to the soft place so i destroy the cave"
advantage: i can trap and kill the enemy.
disadvantage: must be very fast, otherwise i'd get myself killed.
 

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-A mere speck of dust falls from the cave's ceiling-

You can do better then that >_O and try it without touching the cave, stay outside it and channel your chakra through the ground and then into the cave so you won't have to risk yourself being caught within it.
 

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"i focus the earth chakra, and channel it into the cave from the outside, i find a soft place, so i channel more chakra to it, and cause an explosion, so the dust falls from cave's ceiling, and then the cave falls down on the enemy"
advantage: "same"
disadvantage: the enemy can escape using the hide like a mole technique
 

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Can be better but I won't torture you about it so let's move on;

This time you'll learn two techniques at once as one of them is a requirement to use the other.


Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After forming the needed hand sealTiger, the user transforms the ground underneath their opponent into a river of mud that throws them off balance and away from the user. The mud created by this technique can also be used as a medium for the Earth Release: Earth Dragon Bullet technique.



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Channel your earth chakra into the ground below my clone and form the Tiger handseal. Then by manipulating the earth cause it to soften until it transforms into a river of mud and then use that to throw my clone off balance and send him away from you.


Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: When used with Earth Release: Earth Flow River, the user will then perform the Ram → Horse → Dragon they can create a dragon-like head to fire concentrated mud at an opponent. This can also be combined with a fire jutsu to shoot lava toward an opponent.


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Now for this one form the handseals 'Ram → Horse → Dragon' and manipulate the mud created by the previous technique to raise a dragon-like head from the mud with a gaping jaw and have it shoot concentrated mud towards my clone. You can combine this technique with a fire jutsu turning the concentrated mud shot towards the opponent into concentrated lava.

I want to see how you shape the mud into a dragon head in detail. Not doing that to torture you but to help you with your descriptions.
 

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"first, i start gathering my earth style chakra, and gathering it, then i channel it in the ground below your clone, i perform the tiger hand seal, then using manipulation, i turn the ground into a river of mud, so the first clone falls in it.....
i gather chakra again then i perform the hand seals Ram → Horse → Dragon i channel the chakra into the mud hole then using manipulation i huge mud dragon head appears, the dragon shoots some mud bullets at your second clone.
 

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-A bubble of mud raises and pops- Describe the shape of the dragon head as you create it.
 

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"a big bubble of mud appears and slowly it turns into a shape head, then after some chakra control, i make the bubble because like a real huge head of a Dragon, i use the dragon to shoot a mud ball at your second clone"
 

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I was expecting more, like.. simply describe that you're forming it's jaw and sharp teeth, details like that but keep that in mind for next time we'll move on to the next technique now;


Rank: C
Type: Defence/supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After performing the required hand seals Rat → Horse → Dog → Snake and they then create a large amount of rock pillars from under ground. They can then be controlled to surround their opponent and create a bamboo-like thicket of rock.


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For this technique I want you to first gather your earth chakra and then proceed by weaving the handseals 'Rat → Horse → Dog → Snake' and upon forming the last handseal cause a forest of high pillars to rise up all around my clone. This technique isn't designed to actually use the pillars to attack from below but instead to trap the opponent within the mass of pillars although most lightning-based techniques are able to cause the mass of pillars to crumble but it can be useful as it temporarily deprives the opponent's vision, not completely but still somewhat effective.

State atleast 1 advantage/disadvantage for this technique.
 

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"i start gathering and focusing my earth release chakra, then i execute the followeing hand seals Rat → Horse → Dog → Snake and upon forming the last hand seal i cause a forest of pillars to rise up all around your clone so i trap him inside a prison of rock pillars."
Advantage: i can trap the enemy and finish the fight in the next move.
Disadvantage: D rank Lightning jutsus can break my jutsu.
 

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Moving on;


Rank: C
Type: Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After striking the ground with their hands, the user creates a large wall of earth in front of him/her. The defence is not perfect though, since a hard or drilling impact can puncture the wall. Also, since this technique only guards frontal attacks, the enemy can easily attack from the side or even from above.


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Pretty simple, gather your earth chakra within your hands and then proceed by slamming them onto the ground. Upon contact with the ground send the earth chakra into the ground, mold it and forcefully raise up a large wall of earth infront of you.

Perform it and tell me it's advantages/disadvantages. Do not state that it can be destroyed by lightning as a disadvantage, that's pretty obvious.
 

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"i focus my earth then i gather it within my hands and i slam them out to the ground, i send the earth chakra into the ground i mold it, and using manipulation, a large wall of earth raises from the ground to protect me from attacks."
Advantage: this is helpful jutsu, because i can save myself from strong fire and wind attacks using it.
Disadvantage: this can block only frontal attacks, so the enemy might just attack me from the sides
 

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Moving on;


Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique lets the user summon a river of mud infront of them. This technique can have water added to it to speed up the flow and increase its power.


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For this technique you'll be summoning a river of mud on ground level, not through manipulation of the ground itsself but simply a river summoned out of thin air. Gather your earth chakra and materialize a river of mud infront of you which flows forward at a decent speed and reaches upto long-range. If you know any water technique that might go well together with this one use it to speed up the flow of the river while increasing it's power.

Perform it and tell me it's advantages/disadvantages. Also, in what situation could you use this technique well in a fight?
 
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