[CJ] Rise of the Saiya-jin!!

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( Burakku Doragon no Gōon hiji ) - Black Dragon's Roaring Elbow
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This strike was honed and refined by incorporating the same principles learned by studying NB Taijutsu. The user strikes toward the opponent in close range and shifts his foot slightly forwards turning his body in that same direction spinning themselves 360 degrees, continuing this motion quickly to add tremendous momentum to the final blow. As they do this, the user taps into the most basic of whichever elemental release which can be used to aid in taijutsu strikes, and coats his arm from the elbow down in either elemental chakra or raw chakra following similar principles as Five Animal Five Element Fist, however instead of using each of the 5 basic elemental releases in the attack one after the other, the user applies only the one nature they wish, using chakra control to focus the chakra to striking area for the purpose of this one brutal blow. Raising their arm and elbow up as they release the chakra, they complete the spin to smash elbow/forearm first into the target, as the circle motion of the attack is completed driving the blow forwards by pushing off their back foot, using this with centrifugal motion to aid in powering the elbow strike, making it much more powerful and potentially lethal than just a simple elbow strike. This delivers not only the blunt force trauma from the blow but also different effects from whichever chakra nature was used. If Fire is used burns will occur blistering the skin, if Water is used along with the blow it will leave water covering the area struck, if Earth is used the blow could cause the area to collapse in upon being struck, if Lightning is used the opponent will experience a shocking electrical explosion, if Wind is used they will experience slicing winds and the blow will send them flying back 10 meters, and if Raw chakra is used it will cause the blow to be blunt and traumatic similar to Earth's just not quite on the same scale. This is a devastating blow if performed properly and landed square, and could easily render someone unconscious or worse from the blunt force combined with the elemental nature imbued with the strike.

~Notes~
- Must have trained in basic NB Taijutsu to use
- Usable 2x per battle
- Must be taught by -Vegeta
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No i dont have any questions. This would make a great follow up strike to a counter attack. Now it is my turn.

(Saiyajin Jakketo)-Saiyan Armor
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short-mid
Chakra: 40
Damage:
Description: The Saiyan Armor is fabled to comprised of both ninja wire and chakra metal which is the reason for being very light stretchy as the wire through out is in layers which give it manouvorability, yet, at the same time really durable. Because of the armor’s unique characteristics it makes the wearer Immune to C-rank taijutsu and immune to D-rank ninjutsu. The armour when forged was inlaid with doton chakra similar to the cannon light weight technique making it so it doesn't hinder the users speed while granting Another ability the Armor grants the user is that the armor can release an instant surge of S rank earth chakra into the users body for a split second similar to the (Doton: Chōkeijūgan no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Earth Release: Ultra Light-Weight Rock Technique, allowing the users speed to increase for a sudden movement in a linear direction up to mid range (2x speed), where their speed returns to normal. This ability activates instantly, lasting for one movement, and can be used only twice per battle. Another aspect of the armor is the user can release their chakra into it using it to harden the armor similar to the cannon B rank earth Hardening technique, increasing the defensive powers of the armor to that of A rank earth following the s/w of earth release.
Note: Reducing the weight costs a move, can be used twice, with two turns between uses and can only move up to mid range.
Note: Hardening the armor can be used 3 times, is A ranked, can be used once per turn, protecting the users body where the armor covers.

Not only does this technique makes you immune to c-rank taijutsu and d-rank ninjutsu, it also has a hardening ability and a light weight ability. both would cause you to consume the amount of chakra based on the rank of the ability. This CW is defence based but with creativity in the use of your techniques it can also be used for offensive purposes. since this requires a full body surge of chakra you can also use the weapon to easily escape immobilizing genjutsu and avoid follow up techniques in the same move depending on the size and strength of the technique.

any comments questions or concerns?
 
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No i dont have any questions. This would make a great follow up strike to a counter attack. Now it is my turn.

(Saiyajin Jakketo)-Saiyan Armor
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short-mid
Chakra: 40
Damage:
Description: The Saiyan Armor is fabled to comprised of both ninja wire and chakra metal which is the reason for being very light stretchy as the wire through out is in layers which give it manouvorability, yet, at the same time really durable. Because of the armor’s unique characteristics it makes the wearer Immune to C-rank taijutsu and immune to D-rank ninjutsu. The armour when forged was inlaid with doton chakra similar to the cannon light weight technique making it so it doesn't hinder the users speed while granting Another ability the Armor grants the user is that the armor can release an instant surge of S rank earth chakra into the users body for a split second similar to the (Doton: Chōkeijūgan no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Earth Release: Ultra Light-Weight Rock Technique, allowing the users speed to increase for a sudden movement in a linear direction up to mid range (2x speed), where their speed returns to normal. This ability activates instantly, lasting for one movement, and can be used only twice per battle. Another aspect of the armor is the user can release their chakra into it using it to harden the armor similar to the cannon B rank earth Hardening technique, increasing the defensive powers of the armor to that of A rank earth following the s/w of earth release.
Note: Reducing the weight costs a move, can be used twice, with two turns between uses and can only move up to mid range.
Note: Hardening the armor can be used 3 times, is A ranked, can be used once per turn, protecting the users body where the armor covers.

Not only does this technique makes you immune to c-rank taijutsu and d-rank ninjutsu, it also has a hardening ability and a light weight ability. both would cause you to consume the amount of chakra based on the rank of the ability. This CW is defence based but with creativity in the use of your techniques it can also be used for offensive purposes. since this requires a full body surge of chakra you can also use the weapon to easily escape immobilizing genjutsu and avoid follow up techniques in the same move depending on the size and strength of the technique.

any comments questions or concerns?
No questions, and awesome CW! Thanks again ^^

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