Rise Of Kakashi

BlackVegeta

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This is a fanfiction of Kakashi before Naruto's graduation.

()=thinking

Minato and Hiruzen are sitting in the Hokage office.

Hiruzen: Hmm? So you decided to name him after the character in Jiraiya's book?
Minato: Yes. Did you ever get a chance to read it? The main character is a pretty splendid shinobi.

There's a knock on the door.

Minato: Enter

Enters a young Kakashi

Kakashi: Minato sensei may I speak with you? It's very important to me.
Hiruzen: I shall take my leave. We will speak later Minato.

Minato: What is it Kakashi?
Kakashi: I don't want you to die sensei.
Minato: !?
Kakashi: I already lost three important people in my life and I can't loose you too. That's why I came to ask if you could place me on the Anbu team that's helping you guard your wife as she gives birth.

Minato: Kakashi I left you off that team for a reason.
Kakashi: What reason would that be!? huh? I don't-
Minato: Because I don't want you to die either. I've already lost two of my students and i can't stand to loose another. Please Kakashi let me handle this on my own.
Kakashi: Yes sensei.

There's a knock on the door. Enters a young Guy

Guy: Kakashi I'm ready to train now.

With a big grin, Minato: I promise you Kakashi I'll be fine.

Kakashi: (I sure hope so sensei. Look after him Obito and Rin.)

Panel switches to Obito looking at Kakashi at Rin's grace.


What do you guys think?
 

nibilbhai

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Nice prediction :) Well, How did you add that 'show' button?
 

BlackVegeta

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WTH is this sh*t!!!WTH

No but seriously you should just finish it and it would probably make more since also work on making it longer.
Its okay you didn't like it. Any constructive criticism you can give me? It would help.
 
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