A poem i wrote after getting bored with skyrim. what u guys think?
Ring
It was the start of the morning
and there she lay.
Her beauty intensified
under the sun's ray.
I hope she hasn't noticed
that I was nervous and quiet
I didn't eat breakfast
I told her i'm on a diet
Today was the day
I couldn't wait longer
The feeling in my heart
I wish I was stronger
Our friends came over
a party was held
she was laughing in the kitchen
In the bathroom I dwelled
I soaked my face
and stared into the mirror
It was just about time
and that couldn't be clearer
I walked out from my cockpit
and plowed into the crowd
Everything got silent
as I took a bow
It was hard for me to admit
she is the world to me
Before I was blind
she made me see
To be with her
I'll give up everything
I reached into my pocket
and pulled out a ring
With complete confidence
I proposed
My Heart went thump, thump thump,
and then it froze
I could tell by my shaky hand
that I was a mess
But it was all worth it
when she said YES
Ring
It was the start of the morning
and there she lay.
Her beauty intensified
under the sun's ray.
I hope she hasn't noticed
that I was nervous and quiet
I didn't eat breakfast
I told her i'm on a diet
Today was the day
I couldn't wait longer
The feeling in my heart
I wish I was stronger
Our friends came over
a party was held
she was laughing in the kitchen
In the bathroom I dwelled
I soaked my face
and stared into the mirror
It was just about time
and that couldn't be clearer
I walked out from my cockpit
and plowed into the crowd
Everything got silent
as I took a bow
It was hard for me to admit
she is the world to me
Before I was blind
she made me see
To be with her
I'll give up everything
I reached into my pocket
and pulled out a ring
With complete confidence
I proposed
My Heart went thump, thump thump,
and then it froze
I could tell by my shaky hand
that I was a mess
But it was all worth it
when she said YES