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Ok... so the last jutsu you learned was the water fang bullet correct? Then the next one is:

Hidden Mist Eye Sight Deprevation
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15(-3 each turn to keep it active) Damage Points: N/A Description: Using the hidden mist jutsu the user reflects the natural light an a way that it blinds there opponent temporarily as long as the opponent is in the mist.
Note: Must have already used hidden mist jutsu

Alright, so to start, use the Hidden Mist technique.
 

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Channeling Water Chakra I use.

(Kirigakure No Jutsu) - Hidden Mist Jutsu
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user creates a thick, dense mist that covers the surrounding area.

(I actually have a custom similiar to this but set more to me. here it is.)
Suiton Release: Unsanmushou no Jutsu (Water Release: Vanishing Mist)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short/Mid/
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Doing two handseals, Oraan creates a slightly dense mist that can conceal his and his Summoning’s Chakra for 3 turns only. While this is in effect, Oraan also cannot use any Jutsu. An A Ranked or Higher Wind Technique may dispel the Mist. Can only be used once per battle, and Oraan can dispel the mist at will by doing the two handseals in reverse order. Dispelling the Technique does not count as one of the 3 moves in one turn. The mist is made of extremely dense water chakra, so the mist's own chakra signature cloaks Oraan's and his Summon's chakra. When the mist is in effect, Oraan cannot sense his opponent's chakra.
 

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Channeling Water Chakra I use.

(Kirigakure No Jutsu) - Hidden Mist Jutsu
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user creates a thick, dense mist that covers the surrounding area.

(I actually have a custom similiar to this but set more to me. here it is.)
Suiton Release: Unsanmushou no Jutsu (Water Release: Vanishing Mist)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short/Mid/
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Doing two handseals, Oraan creates a slightly dense mist that can conceal his and his Summoning’s Chakra for 3 turns only. While this is in effect, Oraan also cannot use any Jutsu. An A Ranked or Higher Wind Technique may dispel the Mist. Can only be used once per battle, and Oraan can dispel the mist at will by doing the two handseals in reverse order. Dispelling the Technique does not count as one of the 3 moves in one turn. The mist is made of extremely dense water chakra, so the mist's own chakra signature cloaks Oraan's and his Summon's chakra. When the mist is in effect, Oraan cannot sense his opponent's chakra.
Nice custom I guess lol. o.o

Anyway, basically, what you want to do with this is alter the mist so that it becomes less dense to the point where it isn't transparent, but is light enough to reflect the sun's rays. Use it on me. You have to make the mist above me less dense, so that my line of sight to the sun is more defined and so that the mist around me is light enough so that it reflects the mist.
 

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Nice custom I guess lol. o.o

Anyway, basically, what you want to do with this is alter the mist so that it becomes less dense to the point where it isn't transparent, but is light enough to reflect the sun's rays. Use it on me. You have to make the mist above me less dense, so that my line of sight to the sun is more defined and so that the mist around me is light enough so that it reflects the mist.
:eek: You want me to use it on you Riku Sensei? Ok. If your sure.

{Thanks, the reason I posted is because I have a Question: Since my technique is a form of Hidden Mist (Complete Vanishment) can I use the Hidden Mist Eye Sight Deprevation, or do I need to make a Vanishing Mist Eye Sight Deprevation?}

Hidden Mist Eye Sight Deprevation
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15(-3 each turn to keep it active)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Using the hidden mist jutsu the user reflects the natural light an a way that it blinds there opponent temporarily as long as the opponent is in the mist.
Note: Must have already used hidden mist jutsu

After having completed the Hidden Mist Jutsu, I concentrate on making the mist above Riku Sensei to be lighter, less dense, and more transparent, thus allowing the suns rays to shine through and blind Riku Sensei.
 

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:eek: You want me to use it on you Riku Sensei? Ok. If your sure.

{Thanks, the reason I posted is because I have a Question: Since my technique is a form of Hidden Mist (Complete Vanishment) can I use the Hidden Mist Eye Sight Deprevation, or do I need to make a Vanishing Mist Eye Sight Deprevation?}

Hidden Mist Eye Sight Deprevation
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15(-3 each turn to keep it active)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Using the hidden mist jutsu the user reflects the natural light an a way that it blinds there opponent temporarily as long as the opponent is in the mist.
Note: Must have already used hidden mist jutsu

After having completed the Hidden Mist Jutsu, I concentrate on making the mist above Riku Sensei to be lighter, less dense, and more transparent, thus allowing the suns rays to shine through and blind Riku Sensei.
Honestly I wouldn't know. All you're really doing in this jutsu is changing the density of the mist, so I wouldn't argue if you did that in a battle, but... other people might. Especially since your custom says nothing about the user being able to change how dense it is. =/

Anyway...

*the mist completely disperses, becoming light to a point where it is nonexistent*

That's the tricky part of this jutsu. You have to find a middle ground. You can't make the mist too light or it will disappear as it just did, but you still must lessen its density enough to the point where it reflects light. Try it again, but this time, focus more in order to maintain the form of the mist while still controlling how thick it is in certain areas.
 

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Honestly I wouldn't know. All you're really doing in this jutsu is changing the density of the mist, so I wouldn't argue if you did that in a battle, but... other people might. Especially since your custom says nothing about the user being able to change how dense it is. =/

Anyway...

*the mist completely disperses, becoming light to a point where it is nonexistent*

That's the tricky part of this jutsu. You have to find a middle ground. You can't make the mist too light or it will disappear as it just did, but you still must lessen its density enough to the point where it reflects light. Try it again, but this time, focus more in order to maintain the form of the mist while still controlling how thick it is in certain areas.
Lets try this again shall we. First I will

(Kirigakure No Jutsu) - Hidden Mist Jutsu
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user creates a thick, dense mist that covers the surrounding area

Then
Hidden Mist Eye Sight Deprevation
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15(-3 each turn to keep it active)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Using the hidden mist jutsu the user reflects the natural light an a way that it blinds there opponent temporarily as long as the opponent is in the mist.
Note: Must have already used hidden mist jutsu

I concentrate on the mist above Riku's head, Decreasing the density in that area just enough to allow the suns ray's to shine through. At the same time, I am pushing extra chakra into the mist itself to maintain a firm hold of the mist, so that it does not disperse as I change a section inside of the mist's density.
 

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Lets try this again shall we. First I will

(Kirigakure No Jutsu) - Hidden Mist Jutsu
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user creates a thick, dense mist that covers the surrounding area

Then
Hidden Mist Eye Sight Deprevation
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15(-3 each turn to keep it active)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Using the hidden mist jutsu the user reflects the natural light an a way that it blinds there opponent temporarily as long as the opponent is in the mist.
Note: Must have already used hidden mist jutsu

I concentrate on the mist above Riku's head, Decreasing the density in that area just enough to allow the suns ray's to shine through. At the same time, I am pushing extra chakra into the mist itself to maintain a firm hold of the mist, so that it does not disperse as I change a section inside of the mist's density.
*When I notice that the light is beginning to be reflected, I burst of wind expels from me from all directions, dispersing the mist.*

o.o You see, when you're training with people, you get to use totally cheap escapes that make no sense whatsoever. .-.

Annnywho... nice job.

(Suiton: Mizu No Tatsumaki) - Water Style: Water Tornado
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Descripton: Utilizes water to create a spinning water vortex around the ninja. The water acts both as a barrier and attack mechanism. The power of the vortex is enough to knock an opponent unconscious. Can only be performed if there is a water source near by.

Alright, well basically you gather water chakra from any nearby source, such as the lake right next to us, and focus your chakra into it. From that point, you use your chakra within the water to make it rapidly spin around you until you are surrounded by a vortex of water that should blow back anyone near you.

*jumps back a few meters away from you*
 

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(Suiton: Mizu No Tatsumaki) - Water Style: Water Tornado
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Descripton: Utilizes water to create a spinning water vortex around the ninja. The water acts both as a barrier and attack mechanism. The power of the vortex is enough to knock an opponent unconscious. Can only be performed if there is a water source near by.

Man. Good thinh I'm standing on water right now and not on a plain field. lol.

I exert Water chakra into my feet. It spreads itself out over the surface of water about a 5 feet Radius with me as its centre point. I concentrate my chakra to make the water rise up and surround me. I then exert some more chakra to make the water more violent by spinning faster, allowing it to blow back my opponent, increasing our range from either short to mid, or mid to long.
 

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(Suiton: Mizu No Tatsumaki) - Water Style: Water Tornado
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Descripton: Utilizes water to create a spinning water vortex around the ninja. The water acts both as a barrier and attack mechanism. The power of the vortex is enough to knock an opponent unconscious. Can only be performed if there is a water source near by.

Man. Good thinh I'm standing on water right now and not on a plain field. lol.

I exert Water chakra into my feet. It spreads itself out over the surface of water about a 5 feet Radius with me as its centre point. I concentrate my chakra to make the water rise up and surround me. I then exert some more chakra to make the water more violent by spinning faster, allowing it to blow back my opponent, increasing our range from either short to mid, or mid to long.
I'm back, sorry about that.

*I throw a torrent of kunai at the water tornado, and they are all easily deflected.*

Nicely done. Next up.

(Suiton: Suishouha) - Water Style: Water Shock wave
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Descripton: causes a large volume of water to materialize out of nowhere. The water can then be directed at his target.

Basically, focus your water chakra at any area, any area at all, on the battlefield. Make it materialize as actual water after doing so. Make sure that all of the chakra is under your control completely, and that the chakra is compressed enough so that it will actually be capable of materializing as water. At that point, use your chakra within the water to direct it toward me.
 

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I focus my water chakra half way between Short and mid range, and make it materialize as water. I am able to control the water with deep concentration, and I compress it so that it water will form. I find this hard, and try to use the Hydrogen and Oxygen particles in the air to aid me. The water forms, and I send it towards Riku Sensei. but sense I don't want to harm him, I make the water drop right in front of him, it only splashes his slippers a little. :)
 

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I focus my water chakra half way between Short and mid range, and make it materialize as water. I am able to control the water with deep concentration, and I compress it so that it water will form. I find this hard, and try to use the Hydrogen and Oxygen particles in the air to aid me. The water forms, and I send it towards Riku Sensei. but sense I don't want to harm him, I make the water drop right in front of him, it only splashes his slippers a little. :)
Don't worry about hurting me lol; come at me with everything you've got during all of our training.

*The water begins coming toward me, and then falls apart completely*

Remember to keep the chakra controlled throughout the duration of the move. From beginning to end, you have to keep it under control. Try again.
 

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Everything? Ok Sensei, here I come.

I focus on pushing my water chakra right above Riku Sensei, and make it materialize as water. I concentrate on compressing it so that it water will form quickly over his head. Although this is hard, I use the Hydrogen and Oxygen particles in the air to aid me. The water forms, and I send it quickly downwards onto Riku Sensei. The impact of the attack slams down onto Riku Sensei's head and gives him an extreme headache while knocking him down to the floor.
 

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Everything? Ok Sensei, here I come.

I focus on pushing my water chakra right above Riku Sensei, and make it materialize as water. I concentrate on compressing it so that it water will form quickly over his head. Although this is hard, I use the Hydrogen and Oxygen particles in the air to aid me. The water forms, and I send it quickly downwards onto Riku Sensei. The impact of the attack slams down onto Riku Sensei's head and gives him an extreme headache while knocking him down to the floor.
*Before the water materializes, since I know the jutsu that you're about to use, I simply clap both hands together making a small earth dome with the strength of a B-rank jutsu over me. When your water comes, I see that you did it correctly as the top of my earth dome is destroyed completely, and I quickly jump out of the dome before it collapses on me, using a small bit of my lightning chakra to destroy a portion of the bottom it as I escape.*

See? Told you I'd be fine. O^O I know every jutsu you're going to use before you use it. .-. But nicely done ^^. We're going to skip the next one (Chakra-Sensing Rain) because last time I checked there were some people trying to get this to be exclusive to actual rain users, so I'll have to check with another rain user before I teach you this (I should probably know since I use rain myself, but I've been a bit out of the loop xd).

(Suiton: Suirou No Jutsu) - Water Style: Water Prison
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Traps opponent in a orb of water that the user must maintain contact with or the jutsu is broken.

Alright, this is a tough one. Come toward me, and focus your water chakra in your hand. When you've focused a massive amount, release it all around me. But you have to do so in a VERY controlled fashion. You can't just blast it out at me. For now, do this relatively slowly and focus on releasing your water chakra in a way that it surrounds me circularly. Similarly, you can do this as Kisame did (if you read the manga) and spit water out around yourself... I wouldn't recommend that unless you're actually Kisame though cause you'd kind of... die. o.o
 

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Running toward Riku, I focus a massive amount of water chakra into my hand. When I get close enough, I slow down my speed and concentrate on releasing all of it from my hands to encompass Riku's entire body in a circle.
 

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Running toward Riku, I focus a massive amount of water chakra into my hand. When I get close enough, I slow down my speed and concentrate on releasing all of it from my hands to encompass Riku's entire body in a circle.
*Water surrounds me, but there is no water actually inside of the circle. You only made a perimeter of water around me but not an actual sphere filled with water.*

Mmm... close. Make sure that your chakra fills the inside of the sphere as well, or else you defeat the purpose of the jutsu. Your chakra has to be both in and outside of the sphere so that I'm actually trapped within the water, not just surrounded by it.
 

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Ahhh.

Now that I am already close to Riku Sensei, I concentrate a massive amount of water chakra into my hands. I release the water chakra from my hands to that it will encompass Riku's entire body, I then push more water chakra from my hand to allow actual water to fill up the circular orb very quickly, causing Riku sensei to be trapped inside the water.
 

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Ahhh.

Now that I am already close to Riku Sensei, I concentrate a massive amount of water chakra into my hands. I release the water chakra from my hands to that it will encompass Riku's entire body, I then push more water chakra from my hand to allow actual water to fill up the circular orb very quickly, causing Riku sensei to be trapped inside the water.
*I am completely encased within a sphere of water and close my mouth before you encase me. I use the Underwater Motion Technique (I don't feel like copying the jutsu lol) to use my chakra to cancel out your's, propelling me out of the water by overpowering your chakra within it. I then land a distance away from you.*

Good. The next one is tricky as well.

(Suiton: Mizu Kawarimi) - Water Style: Water Replacement
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user can freely transform his body into liquid. This form allows him to avoid taking direct damage from many physical attacks but can not attack while in this form.

You have to focus your water chakra completely for this one. Focus it to the point where it is running throughout your entire body, completely filling your body to the point where you're overflowing with water chakra. At that point, you should be capable of making yourself take the form of water if you focus enough just by using the appropriate seal.
 

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I close my eyes, and concentrate solely on water. I focus my water chakra to fill up my entire body, from the soles of my feet to the hair on my head. When my body is filled up with water chakra, I then overfill it, allowing it to spill out of the pores of my body slowly. I then take the form of water.
 

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I close my eyes, and concentrate solely on water. I focus my water chakra to fill up my entire body, from the soles of my feet to the hair on my head. When my body is filled up with water chakra, I then overfill it, allowing it to spill out of the pores of my body slowly. I then take the form of water.
*You seem to radiate with chakra outwardly, but do not change at all.*

Use even more water chakra. This may be a C-rank, but it costs quite a bit of chakra considering you have to get it pumping throughout your entire body. Even when you think that you've focused enough chakra, focus more.
 
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