Ashalita Phoenix
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I rewrote this because I wasn't satisfied... I am planning on finishing it afterwards. I hope you all like it. It is based on my OC. It takes place 100 years ago after the war.
In the Moon Kingdom, King Hiro and Queen Akira were overjoyed with their newborn baby girl. They already have three gifted sons. Kimochi is the oldest son and the future heir to the throne. He is very wise and skilled for his age and a fast learner. He quickly gets down any jutsu just by evaluating his opponents. Kaze, the second son is the lazy but smart. He is usually found napping under the shade, avoiding his tutor and so forth. Both sons attained their mother’s bloodline trait. This trait is called the Piercing Eye Technique or the Tenchigan. This technique allows the user to pour this chakra into the subject’s body, destroying internal body parts like for an example the heart. The last son is Kyohei, the hyperactive one. He always pulled pranks on his babysitter and tutor. He attained the Bloodline from his father, the Frozen Heaven. This bloodline triggers by bloodlust. This bloodline can manipulate ice. Then the last child is Kitalena.
When Kitaru came into the world, her parents held a special ball in her honor. All their loyal subjects cheered and praised the new princess. Music filled the room and people dance with happiness. It was indeed a glorious event but happy days can have a dark cloud.
“She is so beautiful.” Queen Akira said, rocking her daughter in her embrace. The baby girl had shimmering baby blue eyes that sparkled like sapphires. Her white hair was like pure as snow. She was a beauty.
“Yes, just like her mother.” King Hiro said, kissing his Queen on the forehead. “The kingdom has been blessed.”
“She will make a fine princess and wife in the future.” The Queen said, smiling at her child. “Kitalena, the princess of the Moon…” Her daughter grabbed her mother’s face with her small smooth hands, and letting out a childish giggle. “I love you my dearest.” Then her three sons walked towards them.
“Mom, I want to see Kita.” Kyohei said, smiling. He was so eager to see his little sister.
“Kyohei, you might hurt her.” Kaze said lazily, scratching his raven black hair.
“NO!!!! I want to see her.” Kyohei snapped.
“And why is that?” Kimochi said, running his fingers through Kyo’s red hair. “Is it because you are not the youngest anymore?”
“No, well… part of it…” Kyo said, moving his hand away. “It also means I can do what you and Kaze do to me. I can work hard to be strong so I can protect the youngest. I can protect Kita with my life.”
“It doesn’t mean you are the youngest, you can’t protect anyone Kyo.” His father said. “Anyone can protect a person, however, it must be someone worth your own life.”
“My own life???” Kyohei said.
“What he means is that, you should protect someone that you cherish the most in your life.” His mother explained. “Your father protects all of you and me.”
“Then I am going to work even harder to help dad protect everyone…” Kyohei said. Everyone smiled at him. Kitalena tried to reach him. He moved closer and she lightly grabbed his hair. “Hmmm???”
“Kyo…” Kitalena said happily. “Kyo…”
“She seems she likes you a lot. She even said her first word…” The King said, smiling at his family. This is the life I have always wanted. Then darkness filled the room. This chakra…It can’t be… Then a red flashing light appeared and a man with an evil grin walked towards them. “Hayate, what are you doing here?”
“I came to see my new niece…” He said. “I figured that I lost my invitation in the mail, a common mistake.”
“It was no mistake… You are banished Hayate…” Hiro snapped. “Get out…”
“Is that any way to treat family big brother? After all, we are twins.” Hayate said, dashing towards Akira and snatching the baby. He fell back, keeping his distance from his brother.
“GIVE HER BACK…” Akira screamed. “GIVE BACK MY DAUGHTER!!!”
“GIVE BACK MY SISTER!!!” Kyohei screamed as well.
“What a beautiful child… She has your beauty Akira…” Hayate said, staring at her. Yet she has those eyes….his eyes…
“Don’t hurt her Hayate…” Hiro pleaded.
“You better not hurt her…” Kimochi said, getting ready to release his bloodline trait.
“You better not do that my dear nephew.” Hayate said, placing a knife on the infant’s neck. “Or the princess will never breathe again.”
“You bastard…” Kimochi snapped. Then the baby started to giggle.
“What do you want with her?” Kaze snapped.
“Give her back you bully…” Kyohei snapped. Kitalena giggled even more.
“She likes me…” Hayate teased, smoothing her cheek with the knife.
“Please don’t hurt her…” Akira said, crying. “Please don’t….”
“My dearest Akira, I have never thought to see tears rolling down your pretty cheeks.” Hayate said, walking towards her and circling around her. “You are still a beauty that I fell deeply in love with. Pure as snow….” He grabbed a strand of her hair and sniffed it. “Your beauty is intoxicated.” He then moved away. “However, you have to marry my brother. You have to fall in love with that idiot.”
“My heart was already his.” Akira replied.
“Well my love, I guess this is when you get punished for doing the wrong thing.” Hayate said, staring at the infant. He then chanted some words. His hands glowed crimson red. “Your eyes will never be like the stars again.”
“WHAT ARE YOU DOING?” Hiro screamed. After Hayate was done, he tossed the baby towards them and Hiro caught it. “You careless fool…”
“A parting gift for your daughter…” Hayate said, laughing. He disappeared after that. Hiro checked her daughter and found demonic red eyes instead of sapphires.
“No…” Hiro said. “What have he done?”
Six years as past and the curse was still not lifted. The Kingdom was afraid of their Princess and soon after threatened the king to kill his own daughter. The King debated his way through the bellowing crowd but nothing helped. “Daddy, are you okay?” Kitalena asked, staring at her father.
“I am fine my dear…” Hiro said, scooping his little girl in his arms.
“It is about my eyes…” She said sadly. “People don’t like them.”
“Your eyes are always beautiful to me.” King Hiro said. “People just don’t see it like I do.”
“But they call me a monster.” She replied, crying. “Do I really look like a monster?”
“Oh, my dearest Kitalena…” He said, lifting his daughter into his embrace. “You are not a monster. You are the most beautiful princess in the world.” Then they heard loud screams outside the palace. Kitalena raced towards the window.
“Daddy, there are a lot of people outside.” Kitalena said. Hiro took a look and found an angry mob. “What is going on?”
“FATHER, THEY ARE INVADING THE PALACE.” Kimochi said, racing towards the room with Kyohei and Kaze. “The people have gone mad.”
“Get your mother now…” Hiro said. This day as come… I have never thought that it will come to this… that my own people will assailed us. The people attacked the palace, destroying everything in their path. “Kaze…Kyohei…Take your sister…”
“Yes… Come on Kitalena…” Kyohei said, grabbing her hand. They raced away but there were some villages already the second floor.
“DEMON… KILL THE DEMON…” The people screamed, racing after them. They took her into a room and locked the doors. They pushed the furniture towards it to give them more time.
“Kitalena, in here…” Kaze said, opening a secret door. “NOW…” They pushed her into the room. “Kitalena, stay quiet…”
“Please come with me…” She cried, gripping him tightly. “Don’t leave me…”
“I am sorry…” Kaze said, smiling. He hugged her tightly. “We love you little sister…”
“We are your big brothers…. We are supposed to protect you with our lives.” Kyohei said, smiling.
“Please, I don’t want to be alone.” Kitalena said, crying.
“Kita, this is our propose, our reason to live. We can’t ignore it.” Kyohei said, hugging her. “So my little sister, this is goodbye.” Kyohei then hit her on the head, causing her to go unconscious. Her brothers hide her in a secret room and waited for their fate.
“I never thought I will die young…” Kaze said, letting out a sigh.
“Well, at least you are not dying alone.” Kyohei said, smiling. This is how it feels to be an older brother… The door burst open and they fought through the crowd, giving everything they have. “Frozen Heaven….” He covered the invaders with ice, freezing them. Somehow, even know I am going to die… I feel very happy… “Kaze, I am happy to fight alongside of you big brother.”
“Same with you Kyo…” Kaze said, activating his Tenshigan. He crushed their organs with just one glare. Goodbye little sister… They fought endlessly. Kimochi and his father were fighting on the first floor. Akira was in the garden, kneeling and praying to the lord for protection.
“He is not going to save you Akira…” A voice said. She turned and found Hayate.
“Hayate, so this is your doing…” Akira said, standing back on her feet.
“I see you were expecting me Akira…” He said, smiling. “You are a beauty as always.”
“Hayate, why are you doing this?” Akira snapped. “What do you want?”
“Akira my sweet…” He said, appearing behind her. “I have always wanted you.”
“Hayate, you know my heart belongs to only Hiro…” Akira replied.
“I envy you Akira… You are the only living soul that is immune to my spell.” Hayate said, grabbing her shoulders and sniffing her skin. “The only person that put me into a spell…”
Goodbye everyone… Akira thought, closing her eyes. “Hayate, I won’t let you hurt my family…”
“What a waste then…”
“Kitalena…. Kitalena…” A voice said.
“Hmmm…” I said, walking in pitch black. “Where am I???”
“Kitalena… Kitalena… The time is near…” The voice said.
“Time??? The time for what???” I said.
“Time for you to bloom….” The voice said. It was owned by a girl. It looked like me but not me. She had pale whit skin and her eyes were red has blood. Her teeth were sharp as razor blades.
She then woke up, looking around the safe room. “Where am I?” She said, rubbing her eyes. Then a thought strike her mind. “KYO… KAZE….” She raced out the door and found blood everywhere. “Kyo… Kaze…” The place is a complete mess. She walked out the room and found her brothers lying inertly on the ground. “BROTHERS…” She raced towards their side. No heartbeat… No pulse… “No, this can’t be happening… Why do you all have to save me?” She started crying. “Kaze…Kyohei… I love you two… Why??? I didn’t want you all to die.” She found a tore up curtain and covered them with it. She then explored the palace and found Kimochi hung at the dining room. “No…” She cut them down and hugged him tightly. “Big brother, not you too…” I can’t believe this is happening to me… She laid his body gently down and walked once more. Then she found her parents in the ground. They were lying on the grass side by side, holding hands. “MOM!!!! DAD!!!” She raced to them and hugged them both. “This… This is all my fault...” Her family was killed from the very people that they swore to serve and protect. And she blamed herself for it.
Chapter One: Curse
In the Moon Kingdom, King Hiro and Queen Akira were overjoyed with their newborn baby girl. They already have three gifted sons. Kimochi is the oldest son and the future heir to the throne. He is very wise and skilled for his age and a fast learner. He quickly gets down any jutsu just by evaluating his opponents. Kaze, the second son is the lazy but smart. He is usually found napping under the shade, avoiding his tutor and so forth. Both sons attained their mother’s bloodline trait. This trait is called the Piercing Eye Technique or the Tenchigan. This technique allows the user to pour this chakra into the subject’s body, destroying internal body parts like for an example the heart. The last son is Kyohei, the hyperactive one. He always pulled pranks on his babysitter and tutor. He attained the Bloodline from his father, the Frozen Heaven. This bloodline triggers by bloodlust. This bloodline can manipulate ice. Then the last child is Kitalena.
When Kitaru came into the world, her parents held a special ball in her honor. All their loyal subjects cheered and praised the new princess. Music filled the room and people dance with happiness. It was indeed a glorious event but happy days can have a dark cloud.
“She is so beautiful.” Queen Akira said, rocking her daughter in her embrace. The baby girl had shimmering baby blue eyes that sparkled like sapphires. Her white hair was like pure as snow. She was a beauty.
“Yes, just like her mother.” King Hiro said, kissing his Queen on the forehead. “The kingdom has been blessed.”
“She will make a fine princess and wife in the future.” The Queen said, smiling at her child. “Kitalena, the princess of the Moon…” Her daughter grabbed her mother’s face with her small smooth hands, and letting out a childish giggle. “I love you my dearest.” Then her three sons walked towards them.
“Mom, I want to see Kita.” Kyohei said, smiling. He was so eager to see his little sister.
“Kyohei, you might hurt her.” Kaze said lazily, scratching his raven black hair.
“NO!!!! I want to see her.” Kyohei snapped.
“And why is that?” Kimochi said, running his fingers through Kyo’s red hair. “Is it because you are not the youngest anymore?”
“No, well… part of it…” Kyo said, moving his hand away. “It also means I can do what you and Kaze do to me. I can work hard to be strong so I can protect the youngest. I can protect Kita with my life.”
“It doesn’t mean you are the youngest, you can’t protect anyone Kyo.” His father said. “Anyone can protect a person, however, it must be someone worth your own life.”
“My own life???” Kyohei said.
“What he means is that, you should protect someone that you cherish the most in your life.” His mother explained. “Your father protects all of you and me.”
“Then I am going to work even harder to help dad protect everyone…” Kyohei said. Everyone smiled at him. Kitalena tried to reach him. He moved closer and she lightly grabbed his hair. “Hmmm???”
“Kyo…” Kitalena said happily. “Kyo…”
“She seems she likes you a lot. She even said her first word…” The King said, smiling at his family. This is the life I have always wanted. Then darkness filled the room. This chakra…It can’t be… Then a red flashing light appeared and a man with an evil grin walked towards them. “Hayate, what are you doing here?”
“I came to see my new niece…” He said. “I figured that I lost my invitation in the mail, a common mistake.”
“It was no mistake… You are banished Hayate…” Hiro snapped. “Get out…”
“Is that any way to treat family big brother? After all, we are twins.” Hayate said, dashing towards Akira and snatching the baby. He fell back, keeping his distance from his brother.
“GIVE HER BACK…” Akira screamed. “GIVE BACK MY DAUGHTER!!!”
“GIVE BACK MY SISTER!!!” Kyohei screamed as well.
“What a beautiful child… She has your beauty Akira…” Hayate said, staring at her. Yet she has those eyes….his eyes…
“Don’t hurt her Hayate…” Hiro pleaded.
“You better not hurt her…” Kimochi said, getting ready to release his bloodline trait.
“You better not do that my dear nephew.” Hayate said, placing a knife on the infant’s neck. “Or the princess will never breathe again.”
“You bastard…” Kimochi snapped. Then the baby started to giggle.
“What do you want with her?” Kaze snapped.
“Give her back you bully…” Kyohei snapped. Kitalena giggled even more.
“She likes me…” Hayate teased, smoothing her cheek with the knife.
“Please don’t hurt her…” Akira said, crying. “Please don’t….”
“My dearest Akira, I have never thought to see tears rolling down your pretty cheeks.” Hayate said, walking towards her and circling around her. “You are still a beauty that I fell deeply in love with. Pure as snow….” He grabbed a strand of her hair and sniffed it. “Your beauty is intoxicated.” He then moved away. “However, you have to marry my brother. You have to fall in love with that idiot.”
“My heart was already his.” Akira replied.
“Well my love, I guess this is when you get punished for doing the wrong thing.” Hayate said, staring at the infant. He then chanted some words. His hands glowed crimson red. “Your eyes will never be like the stars again.”
“WHAT ARE YOU DOING?” Hiro screamed. After Hayate was done, he tossed the baby towards them and Hiro caught it. “You careless fool…”
“A parting gift for your daughter…” Hayate said, laughing. He disappeared after that. Hiro checked her daughter and found demonic red eyes instead of sapphires.
“No…” Hiro said. “What have he done?”
Six years as past and the curse was still not lifted. The Kingdom was afraid of their Princess and soon after threatened the king to kill his own daughter. The King debated his way through the bellowing crowd but nothing helped. “Daddy, are you okay?” Kitalena asked, staring at her father.
“I am fine my dear…” Hiro said, scooping his little girl in his arms.
“It is about my eyes…” She said sadly. “People don’t like them.”
“Your eyes are always beautiful to me.” King Hiro said. “People just don’t see it like I do.”
“But they call me a monster.” She replied, crying. “Do I really look like a monster?”
“Oh, my dearest Kitalena…” He said, lifting his daughter into his embrace. “You are not a monster. You are the most beautiful princess in the world.” Then they heard loud screams outside the palace. Kitalena raced towards the window.
“Daddy, there are a lot of people outside.” Kitalena said. Hiro took a look and found an angry mob. “What is going on?”
“FATHER, THEY ARE INVADING THE PALACE.” Kimochi said, racing towards the room with Kyohei and Kaze. “The people have gone mad.”
“Get your mother now…” Hiro said. This day as come… I have never thought that it will come to this… that my own people will assailed us. The people attacked the palace, destroying everything in their path. “Kaze…Kyohei…Take your sister…”
“Yes… Come on Kitalena…” Kyohei said, grabbing her hand. They raced away but there were some villages already the second floor.
“DEMON… KILL THE DEMON…” The people screamed, racing after them. They took her into a room and locked the doors. They pushed the furniture towards it to give them more time.
“Kitalena, in here…” Kaze said, opening a secret door. “NOW…” They pushed her into the room. “Kitalena, stay quiet…”
“Please come with me…” She cried, gripping him tightly. “Don’t leave me…”
“I am sorry…” Kaze said, smiling. He hugged her tightly. “We love you little sister…”
“We are your big brothers…. We are supposed to protect you with our lives.” Kyohei said, smiling.
“Please, I don’t want to be alone.” Kitalena said, crying.
“Kita, this is our propose, our reason to live. We can’t ignore it.” Kyohei said, hugging her. “So my little sister, this is goodbye.” Kyohei then hit her on the head, causing her to go unconscious. Her brothers hide her in a secret room and waited for their fate.
“I never thought I will die young…” Kaze said, letting out a sigh.
“Well, at least you are not dying alone.” Kyohei said, smiling. This is how it feels to be an older brother… The door burst open and they fought through the crowd, giving everything they have. “Frozen Heaven….” He covered the invaders with ice, freezing them. Somehow, even know I am going to die… I feel very happy… “Kaze, I am happy to fight alongside of you big brother.”
“Same with you Kyo…” Kaze said, activating his Tenshigan. He crushed their organs with just one glare. Goodbye little sister… They fought endlessly. Kimochi and his father were fighting on the first floor. Akira was in the garden, kneeling and praying to the lord for protection.
“He is not going to save you Akira…” A voice said. She turned and found Hayate.
“Hayate, so this is your doing…” Akira said, standing back on her feet.
“I see you were expecting me Akira…” He said, smiling. “You are a beauty as always.”
“Hayate, why are you doing this?” Akira snapped. “What do you want?”
“Akira my sweet…” He said, appearing behind her. “I have always wanted you.”
“Hayate, you know my heart belongs to only Hiro…” Akira replied.
“I envy you Akira… You are the only living soul that is immune to my spell.” Hayate said, grabbing her shoulders and sniffing her skin. “The only person that put me into a spell…”
Goodbye everyone… Akira thought, closing her eyes. “Hayate, I won’t let you hurt my family…”
“What a waste then…”
“Kitalena…. Kitalena…” A voice said.
“Hmmm…” I said, walking in pitch black. “Where am I???”
“Kitalena… Kitalena… The time is near…” The voice said.
“Time??? The time for what???” I said.
“Time for you to bloom….” The voice said. It was owned by a girl. It looked like me but not me. She had pale whit skin and her eyes were red has blood. Her teeth were sharp as razor blades.
She then woke up, looking around the safe room. “Where am I?” She said, rubbing her eyes. Then a thought strike her mind. “KYO… KAZE….” She raced out the door and found blood everywhere. “Kyo… Kaze…” The place is a complete mess. She walked out the room and found her brothers lying inertly on the ground. “BROTHERS…” She raced towards their side. No heartbeat… No pulse… “No, this can’t be happening… Why do you all have to save me?” She started crying. “Kaze…Kyohei… I love you two… Why??? I didn’t want you all to die.” She found a tore up curtain and covered them with it. She then explored the palace and found Kimochi hung at the dining room. “No…” She cut them down and hugged him tightly. “Big brother, not you too…” I can’t believe this is happening to me… She laid his body gently down and walked once more. Then she found her parents in the ground. They were lying on the grass side by side, holding hands. “MOM!!!! DAD!!!” She raced to them and hugged them both. “This… This is all my fault...” Her family was killed from the very people that they swore to serve and protect. And she blamed herself for it.
