Review of chapter 641

[Byron123]

Now this chapter wasn't from the best because it didn't really have any development plot-wise but rather it showed us some excellent teamwork.

SO...

Positives​

-Tobirama is a beast, the way he looked at Naruto and how he corrected him on who was copying who was just priceless:leaf:

-The collaboration between Naruto with Sasuke and Minato with Tobirama was really cool. Clever way to catch Obito off guard (not that it will do anything but ok).

-Generally nice for showing the potential of second who till now was a complete mystery.

-We finally got a clue for madara's plan, he tries to stall Hashirama for a reason.

Negatives​

-The chapter felt really short, there was no further development

-Too much time wasted on Shikamaru. I like that guy and he does have potential but I think that Kishi talked a bit too much for him.

-Nameless people looking clueless as in general. I'm beginning to think that Kishi puts them to add a comedic effect to lighten the situation, LOL.



Based on this review I would mark this chapter with 3-3.5/5

BUT​

There was something that preety much compensated for everything:

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The genuine smiles from both Naruto and Sasuke was a thing that I haven't seen for ages, litterally, it really felt nostalgic:flowers

For that reason I give it 4.5/5=D

 

[Vstatic]

Excellent I wouldn't give it anything else

 

[apscruffy]

confused on what happened when minato switched with obito can anyone explain

 

[Mr Hiru]

I agree. Quite the analysis. Thanked.

 

[Byron123]

confused on what happened when minato switched with obito can anyone explain

The effect of Naruto's and Sasuke's collaboration while it was about to hit first Minato, in the end it hit Obito because Minato changed positions wiht Obito by working with Tobirama. In this way, Obito was caught off gurard.

 

[Byron123]

Excellent I wouldn't give it anything else

Thanks=D

I agree. Quite the analysis. Thanked.

Glad you liked it=D=D

 

[PureGold]

confused on what happened when minato switched with obito can anyone explain

Tobirama put a mark on Minato before the attack, he then went up to Obito and put another mark on him. At this point we can tell that his jutsu allows him to switch places for the objects he marked.

 

[Manicherryblossom33]

I agree completely. Did that attack do anything? For how much longer will they fight juubito? And where the heck are Kakashi and kages? Did Kakashi faint or just run out of chakra? I did enjoy the smiles though. But next week, seeing how Kushi likes to jerk us around, they'll probably be gone.

 

[H a n]

Just about right with the review.

 

[Byron123]

I agree completely. Did that attack do anything? For how much longer will they fight juubito? And where the heck are Kakashi and kages? Did Kakashi faint or just run out of chakra? I did enjoy the smiles though. But next week, seeing how Kushi likes to jerk us around, they'll probably be gone.

Lol the attack didn't do a thing, Obito was about fall asleep from his indifference:leaf::leaf::leaf:
The kages will probably arrive next week, Kakashi is still out of chakra so he better stay there and rest for a while , as for much longer they're going to fight, for a preety long if you ask me.

Just about right with the review.

Thank you=D

 

[kalles]

grande chapter

 

[Byron123]

grande chapter

true=D=D=D

 

[bigboi]

i thought it was a good chapter and liked seeing Tobirama's skills but would like to see more of Hiruzen

 

[Byron123]

i thought it was a good chapter and liked seeing Tobirama's skills but would like to see more of Hiruzen

True but then again we will have the chance in th future=D

 

[apscruffy]

oh so it was a new jutsu bt tobirama that makes sense

 

[Byron123]

oh so it was a new jutsu bt tobirama that makes sense

To which jutsu are you referring to?