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(Authors Note: I'd love as much feedback as possible, I tried my best to keep Sasuke as the same attitude as when team Taka fought Killer-Bee but a bit more nicer, I will post the second part of this within a few days, of course this is only a fanfiction, for fun. I love the idea of Sasuke killing Madara, so I decided I wanted to write a fanfic on it. But anyway, like I said, if possible I'd love some feedback from everyone who read this, tell me what you think. Please and thank you in return, enjoy reading. :) )





(Prologue)

‘The 3 Taka members were standing on the Kage building of Konoha, right after the speech of the 4 Kages, Orochimaru had sealed them back to the afterlife and returned to his lab, after telling Sasuke the truth, the boy was no long a boy no more, he was a man with an answer that he could never come up with on his own; he now had the rightful intentions he should've had all along, they knew this war was going on, and they were gonna take part in this war, and finally complete their Organizations goal of vengeance.’​

"Do you really think we can do this Sasuke?" Suigetsu asked as his questioning began to annoy Sasuke, as he closed his eyes, Juugo looked at his ally, smiling, "Kimimaro, I know you're in there, Sasuke has turned a bit more over to the dark than you did, maybe he finally found his answer.. That was actually quite the speech from those 4 Kage, I have always wanted to see the 1st.." he thought.

As Sasuke opened his eyes, a ripple begun to pulse around his pupils awakening the full power of the Rinnegan, covering his entire eyes in nothing but ripples, like a ripple in the water, however engulfed in a purplish gray tint in his eyes. "I have fully achieved the secrets to our clans eyes Itachi, I finally understand who is to blame for all of this, my way was the right path, however I was doing it wrong.. Danzo's death was justified, but this new person I will end,will set our clan to rest, I promise brother.."

Juugo then patted Sasuke on the shoulder, "I know we can do this, me and Suigetsu are right behind you, we may not possess the same powers as you do, but we can do this; we've got this covered, we're team Taka, with a new goal.."Suigetsu grinned, "I don't like how we're all goodie goodie but I guess there's always that saying there's a first time for everything." Sasuke chuckled a little, showing a bit out of character was shocking to both Juugo and Suigetsu as their eyes widened, Sasuke turned around as he looked them both in the eyes.

"I don't know why, but I feel different, these eyes have given me a new path, my goal doesn't lay in the darkness anymore, I was only a kid with a confused path, I am now an adult, with a path to choose of my own; Taka has evolved from the feathers of the hawk and snake, we are now the fire that burns bright, the flame that will ignite anytime we want to.. Our final evolution, we are team Phoenix!"

Juugo and Suigetsu couldn't help but grin, they too have grown; none of them were kids anymore, they were the adults formed of those kids who everyone hated, just like the Uchiha Clans Hatred curse, all three of them overcame themselves, and begun a new. "That person, that the 1st told us about, that is our goal.. We will crush him, he will regret turning my clan into its hatred that he caused, it's the Uchiha clans time now, I can now complete my goal as an avenger, the final goal, WE WILL KILL MADARA UCHIHA!!!!"

Jumping from the building, the sun glared down on Sasuke, showing the shine of the sun that filled his black cloak as it bristled in the wind, Juugo and Suigetsu followed, landing on buildings as they hopped from building to building effortlessly. "This reminds me of the old life in Konoha, what if I never left that day, would my path have changed? Would Itachi be alive? Would I have got the secrets I wanted? Everything happens for a reason; maybe this is why I chose this path, because if I didn't, I wouldn't be as strong as I am now...” Sasuke thought, reaching the gate of the Leaf.

All three of them hopped off the gate, leaving the Leaf village behind in their peripheral vision, thoughts of Sasuke's old life in Konoha swam through his mind, and didn't leave until his sight of Konoha left, he had a goal he had to futfill and he didn't need old memories blocking him from his true potential, it's his weakness, and he knew it. As Itachi always said, a strong man is willing to admit his weakness, that is what makes him strong, and Sasuke knew this; he finally understood Itachi, and he planned to use the combination of his eyes, and his new Rinnegan he called "Eyes of avenger" to take down the menace responsible for the hatred.

Still jumping from tree to tree, Suigetsu and Juugo were slightly behind him, as they sparked a conversation of they're own. "Sasuke's different.” Suigetsu said, as his voice seemed quiet, showing a bit of annoyance in his voice. Juugo sighed, "Suigetsu, Sasuke finally has the answer he was looking for all this time, his path isn't consumed in darkness anymore, he's different than he ever was; I'm liking this change, he speaks the truth, and speaks it like he means it. I don't know if Kimimaro can tell the future, but he was right, Sasuke is just like him, and I will protect Sasuke until the very end, as you should too; like you did when we fought the Hachibi, be more lenient on Sasuke's decision."

Sasuke stopped, "LOOK OUT!" he yelled as he pounced off the tree branched into the air, Suigetsu jumped farther to his left, Juugo jumped farther to his right, as a fire ball flew through the forest, sending the trees to nothingness as the environment reacted to its temperature. "Missed, to bad huh? Sorry kid." a familiar voice could be heard, as steam filled the area, "****... It's the Mizukage again, that steam jutsu of hers is ha-" jumping to the branch of the tree above Sasuke beside Juugo, he was cut off by the shock of the steam clearing, through the steam he saw Sasuke and the Mizukage, however, a long spike like object could be seen as it almost touched her throat, but didn’t push his blade any further. “Listen, I don’t need to kill you. You’re not my goal, Madara Uchiha is my goal. Now leave us be, and we will be on our way.”

The Mizukage stood there in shock, staring directly into the eyes of the Rinnegan, to her, these eyes were only processed by the Sage Of The 6 Paths himself and Madara Uchiha, Gods among Shinobi, the one who had stopped the Juubi dead in its tracks and Madara who took down the Kage’s with just playing with his new powers, the Juubi who could slam its tail down and destroy a continent, she didn’t know if this was farfetched or not, but she wasn’t planning to take any chances, and she knew that the Rinnegan was a godly technique, and should be approached by those with a Kage rank to stop it.

“Your eyes are different, but how?” she asked, Sasuke’s glance stayed the same, without moving an inch. “That is none of your concern; I am on my way to end the one named Madara Uchiha that is all you need to know. “
She chuckled at his tone, reminding her of a usual Uchiha, however he had confidence in his voice. “Last time I saw you; you interrupted a Kage meeting, killed many Samurai, and attempted to kill us all. You honestly think I’m going to just let you off the hook because you want to kill a common enemy? I don’t think so. You even went to join the Akatsuki and attempted to seal the 8 Tailed beasts, assisting in the revival of the 10 Tailed Demon, the Juubi. This is summoned now thanks to you!”

Sasuke’s eyes closed for a split second, reverting back to their original onyx colored state widening his eyes, letting his blade slowly descend down, as it rested at his thigh, sheathing it back into its holder slowly. “The Juubi huh..?” within his mind, he remembered Tobi telling him about the Ten Tails, the beast who could wipe out continents in a single swipe of one of his tails, and could send even the strongest of Ninja’s into the ground dead the second they hit the ground.

“I’m sorry that I did those things, sorry isn’t going to cut it. Being skilled isn't all that's it's made out to be. When you're strong, you become arrogant and withdrawn. Even if what you sought after was your dream." Remembering those were the exact words that his older brother had told him when he recognized his descent into darkness.
The Mizukage looked at him; an emotionless expression was in her eyes. “Perhaps you finally learned, or you’re just pulling my leg thinking I’ll let you pass through. But now that I think about it, the point of your blade was about a hair away from my throat, you could’ve easily just followed that through and took my head off. I underestimated your eyes… I guess the Uchiha shouldn’t ever be underestimated, and you don’t need to underestimate Madara Uchiha, he is the god of the Uchiha, and trust me, you wouldn’t want to take your powers to far.”

Sasuke smiled, as he hadn’t smiled in a long time, “I know how Madara Uchiha is, my brother once told me he was an immortal, however that Madara was an imposter, and he will be next after my fight with the man who started the hatred for my clan, it’s his fault that the Uchiha are frowned upon, and I will make him pay dearly and I know I can do this.”

She looked at him one last time, to make sure her eyes were seeing correctly, this kid has grown into a man she thought, his way of reality had changed, his sanity was kept intact, and his goals were that similar to those who stuck to the path of light.“You can go Sasuke, I will inform the rest of the Kage’s of what happened here, they are currently being healed from the battle with Madara, and by the way..”

Sasuke paused, “Hmm?”
“Give him hell.” She said.

Sasuke smirked, instantly pouncing into the air as his cape flew off into the sky of the destroyed forest, shedding the cloak of darkness Suigetsu and Juugo quickly followed, surprised on what just happened themselves.
“Sasuke really has changed from his answer… didn’t he?” Suigetsu asked one final time to make sure he wasn’t dreaming, or if the fire didn’t spark some of his brain cells from the heat that he was still sweating from. “I told you Suigetsu, his way of reality changed, he now knows the real truth of his clan and the village of their home, I’m not sure where we will go after Madara is defeated and this war is over, but only time will tell.. But I will follow Sasuke no matter what.”

Suigetsu paused for a moment, trying to take in that Sasuke wasn’t the arrogant evil avenger they knew anymore, closing his eyes jumping from branch to branch slightly behind Sasuke, keeping pace with Juugo. “Me too!” he yelled. Sasuke grinned, reaching the end of the forest, he reached the warzone as they finally could slow down and land on the ground.

Having his back to them, Sasuke turned his head slightly to the left, “I heard the entire conversation you and Juugo had, you two are my team mates, and members of team Phoenix, we will roar and fly towards Madara Uchiha as one, and work as one; this is what Madara doesn’t have, friends..” as he said this, Naruto instantly popped into his mind, still remembering the day at the Final Valley, remembering they were equal as he smiled, because he spared him that day.

“Don’t get to soft, no need for a *****!” Suigetsu said jokingly as he chuckled a bit, Juugo smiled, noting that he had the same friendship for Sasuke all along. “Now, we need to show Madara who we are, we will take revenge, and he will be laying on the ground, lifeless regretting his mistakes!” Sasuke yelled, “Yeah, Madara will regret ****ing with the Uchiha! Because once you **** with the Uchiha, you **** with team Phoenix!” Suigetsu yelled, “Lets end this long journey, Madara’s death is within our grasps, and I know that we can do it, with team work we will finish this.” All three of the members smiled, dashing forwards for the battle field, Sasuke felt chakra pulses of nothing but red chakra and he knew what was going on, smirking at the thought.

Running through the desert, they saw a forest that looked a bit old and destroyed, the red chakra was forming from there, and that’s where they were headed. Reaching the first trees of the forest, the wind was roaring, causing Sasuke’s hair and clothing to bristle in the strong wind, reaching closer and closer towards the battlefield, he begun to see strands of red chakra flying everywhere.

“Guys, jump into the hair and hop from the top of the trees, we need to use the element of surprise.” He noted, as his team mates nodded in agreement. Hopping into the air, they caught a glimpse of the battlefield. Thousands of Shinobi were spread across a rocky plain, there was a figure standing in front of the alliance, which had a gold cloak, and a jacket that formed on his upper body that rested on his body like clothing usually would do, and red chakra was flowing from his body like as if it were a waterfall of chakra.

“T-that’s N-Naruto?!” Sasuke thought, he finally came to realize that Naruto seemed to have mastered the Kyuubi’s chakra, his sanity and good intentions were kept in control, he then noticed there was a girl beside him, laying his head down as he knew it was Sakura, he’d lost his chance at redemption with the girl that loved him. His eyes widened as he knew it wasn’t Sakura, it was Hinata!

His eyes widened as he caught a glimpse of the Juubi, the creature was way bigger than he ever imagined, the eyes of the beast reminded him of his own Sharingan, and he had a small thought, but decided to save it for later after team Phoenix defeated Madara, Sasuke’s pupils quickly faded into a blood red color, forming a ring around the middle of his pupil, as 3 tomoes rested on the top, east, and west side of the ring completing a 3 tomoe Sharingan.
He then caught a glimpse of two people standing on top of the monster, obviously one of them was no one other than Tobi himself, however he noticed that his mask was off, he tried to recognize the face, the wrinkled side turned out to be a scarred side, and the other side was completely normal. He’d be tricked he thought, but no time to worry about that, the one standing beside him, with the long spiky black hair that reached to his lower back, dressed in armor exactly similar to the 1st, but with a blood red color, symbolizing the Sharingan he thought, and with the Rinnegan that resided in his pupils.

He shook his head as he jumped on the last tree, “here goes nothing…” he whispered, pouncing into the air as he performed his hand seals, setting his index and middle finger up to his bottom lip, yelling out “FIRE STYLE,” he paused for a split second, as Naruto turned around, he knew the voice, he knew the tone, he knew it was Sasuke, but didn’t know who the target was.

“FIRE BALL JUTSU!!” as a small fireball formed on his finger tips, blowing out a small breath of air, it grew ten times its normal size, and this fire ball was aimed for the one who caused all the hatred for the Uchiha clan, Madara Uchiha. As the man jumped into the air, reached behind his back as grasped onto the handle of his Gumbai, swinging it forwards, hitting the fireball dead on as it turned into smoke. “Foolish Uchiha boy.” He said, as he fell on the tree that Sasuke jumped off of, Sasuke quickly landed behind him, with his Katana gripped in his right hand, launching it forwards; Madara rolled his eyes, as the sword penetrated through his stomach.

“U-ugh..” he said, looking down as blood leaked from the blade, looking behind him, he saw a glimpse of a black pupil, with red irides with a black sclerae, that had a upside down shuriken that rested in the middle. “E-eternal M-mangekyou?..” he quickly jumped forwards, as Sasuke allowed Madara to escape his death. “I am an Avenger, you sent our clan into despair, now take flight of the Phoenix as we descend you back into Hell!”

Madara, still shocked that he was wounded in an Edo Tensei state, as if he had his real body, he looked at the blade of his opponent, the blood that rested upon the blade quickly formed into seals that aligned up and down the blade, the same exact seals for Edo Tensei, but at the end, a special symbol that said “Kill” as Madara’s eyes widened in disbelief, “K-kinjutsu?! This.. Is Tobirama’s doing isn’t it?! He is long dead, how did you summon the 2nd Hokage?!?”
Sasuke grinned, letting out a laugh; this laugh was full of confidence, a little bit of excitement, and triumph. “I have no need to tell you, because this battle will be with our eyes, prepare yourself MADARA!”

To be continued…
 
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