TheSleepyAkatsuki
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Hey guys, I'm back. I wrote the first two chapters to my fanfic, The akatsuki chapters and here are the links to them:
The day was starting and for once, a blazing sun was coming over the hills of the hidden rain village. Well, more like again, there was a blazing sun. For some reason in the hidden rain, the sun had been coming up and granting them long, hot days. The puddles that normally scattered the landscape had dried up and left the streets dry and humid.
For the past month, nobody was forced to walk hidden and cloaked, people could wear as little as they liked and with this, brought a new trend with the girls. Sunbathing. The girls of the akatsuki where much larger in size now, as where the boys. A total of ten members now filled the ranks of the group, since the day they found their first two girls. Suprisingly, these girls had a knack for medical ninjutsu and had a hideout already that they let the akatsuki use. It was small. A old mine that never made it. It was build next to a river bed, into a mountain. But it travelled down and through much hard work, into what was now Akatsuki HQ. But enough of that, we was on about sunbathing. Konan and the other three girls. Akako, a beautiful girl with red hair and one of the two rescued from the leaf nin, she was twin of the black haired, Keiko. Apart from the hair, that the two had dyed to be able to tell each other apart and that Akako was a tomboy, while Keiko a girly girl. They was indeticle. The final girl was not from the rain village, but from a village hidden in the sand. She had sandy hair and a larger build then the others, but was still striking and very pretty. All the girls, layed out on the river bank, taking in the sun to tan their skin. But to a small group crouching in the bushes, that wasn't what amused them. The girls where only wearing shorts and mesh bra's. Something Yahiko planned to change.
With a flash, the group jumped from the bush. Yahiko taking the lead. four boys followed him. All of them, fellow akatsuki members. There was the smallest, Osamu. A boy who Yahiko had found alone in the woods and had the strange power to control and speak to animals. He claimed he was from the hidden leaf. Then the two middle built, brothers none the less. Satoshi and Ryozo, the demons from the hidden mist as they was know as in the group. They where both muscled with a bush of spikey hair, Ryozo's reaching his hips, while Satoshi's his shoulders. Finally, there was Yuu. A tank of a man, from the hidden stone. He'd joined when he hit Yahiko for getting cheeky and knocked one of his teeth out, suprisingly, he was very good with earth style. With their objective in mind, the group aimmed for the girls. Their hands ready, they all picked their targets and aimmed for the bra's. Yahiko of course went for Konan.
"YAHIKO!"
SMASH, Konan's eyes flashed open and her fist went into Yahiko's face, knocking him backwards as a small amount of blood trickled from his nose. The other boys had stopped, as Konan got up, her eyes filled with rage, as she moved her hand to pull out some paper. At this, all the boys ran for the HQ. Konan gave a smirk, as the other girls laughed and resumed sunbathing.
Nagato had been in his room all day. He'd gotten a letter. A request. That he command the Akatsuki to the hills at the west. But that wasn't what troubled him. It was why and the mark that was left. It said that the sun, was fake and that it was a plot to destroy the Rain village and without leaving a name, the person had left a mark. A pupil with three totem seals around it. A hot memory flashed into Nagato's mind, as he remembered the man that night. What did he want? Nagato hopped out of bed and towards HQ, heading for the dinner hall.
Everyone was chatting. The girls to themselves, the boys to everyone and Yahiko was trying to say sorry to Konan, whom was ignoring him with a smirk across her pale lips. But, as Nagato entered, a gloomy look on his face, the room went silent.
"I have a letter, requesting that we go to the mountains to investigate this recent sun."
The girls all gave a moan, but Yahiko stood up, eyes beaming.
"You mean, we have a job!?"
Nagato nodded. Yahiko Jumped with joy.
"Everyone, meet outside with your gear in five. We haven't had a job in ages, we need to stay sharp people."
For some, this was their first job. But for others, this was such a drag. But, all followed Yahiko's orders and were waiting outside for him in five minutes. Everyone was stocked, the twins on healing powders and the rest on weapons, scrolls and so on. As Yahiko gave the sinal to move out, Nagato was troubled about the mark of the letter. But not as much as Konan. As having a large range, she brought up the rear. But as they left the HQ, she saw a man standing above the door way. He was dark, wearing a cloak and his face was masked. All she could see was a eyehole, with a very strange eye. It was red, with three totem seals around the pupil. Blinking, Konan tried to dismiss this and she did, for when she reopened her eyes, he was gone. Coming too, she saw that she had been left behind and quickly rushed to join the others.
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I know it's been some time, but then again, I have been a busy bee recently and I hope to finish my little story soon, to make up for lost time. The day was starting and for once, a blazing sun was coming over the hills of the hidden rain village. Well, more like again, there was a blazing sun. For some reason in the hidden rain, the sun had been coming up and granting them long, hot days. The puddles that normally scattered the landscape had dried up and left the streets dry and humid.
For the past month, nobody was forced to walk hidden and cloaked, people could wear as little as they liked and with this, brought a new trend with the girls. Sunbathing. The girls of the akatsuki where much larger in size now, as where the boys. A total of ten members now filled the ranks of the group, since the day they found their first two girls. Suprisingly, these girls had a knack for medical ninjutsu and had a hideout already that they let the akatsuki use. It was small. A old mine that never made it. It was build next to a river bed, into a mountain. But it travelled down and through much hard work, into what was now Akatsuki HQ. But enough of that, we was on about sunbathing. Konan and the other three girls. Akako, a beautiful girl with red hair and one of the two rescued from the leaf nin, she was twin of the black haired, Keiko. Apart from the hair, that the two had dyed to be able to tell each other apart and that Akako was a tomboy, while Keiko a girly girl. They was indeticle. The final girl was not from the rain village, but from a village hidden in the sand. She had sandy hair and a larger build then the others, but was still striking and very pretty. All the girls, layed out on the river bank, taking in the sun to tan their skin. But to a small group crouching in the bushes, that wasn't what amused them. The girls where only wearing shorts and mesh bra's. Something Yahiko planned to change.
With a flash, the group jumped from the bush. Yahiko taking the lead. four boys followed him. All of them, fellow akatsuki members. There was the smallest, Osamu. A boy who Yahiko had found alone in the woods and had the strange power to control and speak to animals. He claimed he was from the hidden leaf. Then the two middle built, brothers none the less. Satoshi and Ryozo, the demons from the hidden mist as they was know as in the group. They where both muscled with a bush of spikey hair, Ryozo's reaching his hips, while Satoshi's his shoulders. Finally, there was Yuu. A tank of a man, from the hidden stone. He'd joined when he hit Yahiko for getting cheeky and knocked one of his teeth out, suprisingly, he was very good with earth style. With their objective in mind, the group aimmed for the girls. Their hands ready, they all picked their targets and aimmed for the bra's. Yahiko of course went for Konan.
"YAHIKO!"
SMASH, Konan's eyes flashed open and her fist went into Yahiko's face, knocking him backwards as a small amount of blood trickled from his nose. The other boys had stopped, as Konan got up, her eyes filled with rage, as she moved her hand to pull out some paper. At this, all the boys ran for the HQ. Konan gave a smirk, as the other girls laughed and resumed sunbathing.
Nagato had been in his room all day. He'd gotten a letter. A request. That he command the Akatsuki to the hills at the west. But that wasn't what troubled him. It was why and the mark that was left. It said that the sun, was fake and that it was a plot to destroy the Rain village and without leaving a name, the person had left a mark. A pupil with three totem seals around it. A hot memory flashed into Nagato's mind, as he remembered the man that night. What did he want? Nagato hopped out of bed and towards HQ, heading for the dinner hall.
Everyone was chatting. The girls to themselves, the boys to everyone and Yahiko was trying to say sorry to Konan, whom was ignoring him with a smirk across her pale lips. But, as Nagato entered, a gloomy look on his face, the room went silent.
"I have a letter, requesting that we go to the mountains to investigate this recent sun."
The girls all gave a moan, but Yahiko stood up, eyes beaming.
"You mean, we have a job!?"
Nagato nodded. Yahiko Jumped with joy.
"Everyone, meet outside with your gear in five. We haven't had a job in ages, we need to stay sharp people."
For some, this was their first job. But for others, this was such a drag. But, all followed Yahiko's orders and were waiting outside for him in five minutes. Everyone was stocked, the twins on healing powders and the rest on weapons, scrolls and so on. As Yahiko gave the sinal to move out, Nagato was troubled about the mark of the letter. But not as much as Konan. As having a large range, she brought up the rear. But as they left the HQ, she saw a man standing above the door way. He was dark, wearing a cloak and his face was masked. All she could see was a eyehole, with a very strange eye. It was red, with three totem seals around the pupil. Blinking, Konan tried to dismiss this and she did, for when she reopened her eyes, he was gone. Coming too, she saw that she had been left behind and quickly rushed to join the others.
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