Ren, the noob.

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Name: Ren
Nickname: n/a
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Clan: n/a

Looks: Ren is relatively tall, he has slightly reddish eyes and auburn hair.
Around the village he wears gray pants, a black shirt and a gray jacket.
While on missions Ren wears black pants and a black long sleeve shirt with the Uzumaki symbol on the shoulder, a green Konoha flak jacket, a pouch for ninja tools and bandages on his leg with a shuriken container.


Personality: Ren acts overly serious around most of the time.
He acts goofy around those of lower rank and tries to produce a comfortable atmosphere for those around him.
When fighting Ren has the mind of a river, taking in everything and not stopping and being distracted.


Village Info

Village of Birth:
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Konoha.

Village of Alliance:
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Konoha.


Rank//Chakra Info

Ninja Rank: S-Jonin
Specialty: n/a
Elements:
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Wind - Needs training.
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Fire - Needs training.

Your ninjutsu:

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

Background Info

History:
Both parents were jonin and were killed during the nine tails attack.
Spends time perfecting jutsu.
Ren is a typical konoha ninja with not much of an interesting history.
Passed all ninja exams with average scores at the average age.
Doesn't have anything else to do so Ren is mostly interested in shinobi duties.
Ren could be considered a genius ninja but he can get by with the standard easily.
By making an effort to learn from other ninja in the town of konoha Ren is attempting to break old habits.
Ren's interests are teaching jutsu and sitting around doing nothing as well as joining the anbu.



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Theme Song and Background Music:
[video=youtube;pLwFmryO-Yg]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pLwFmryO-Yg[/video]

Battles

Won: 0
Lost: 0

~Approved~
 
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Yanks

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Your history needs more than 1 sentence..
 

Nardo

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You just need alot more history, and add some pictures.
 

Edward

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Nice bio...I guess xD welcome to the RP
 

Nathan

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You need to follow the whole template.

Put some effort into your bio. .-.

Looks: Normal konoha uniform with flak jacket.

What does your bio look like? More than what clothes he is wearing.

Personality: Serious...

More then one word maybe?

And, as the others said. History has to be longer.
 
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Nebula

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Thanks for the advice, do you think this is enough?
For some reason the other pic I was using was being dumb.
 

Nathan

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Thanks for the advice, do you think this is enough?
For some reason the other pic I was using was being dumb.

Still with the looks, if you don't like typing.

Copy the image and post it in the looks section. Some people do that.
You still need to have the whole template there.
 

Nebula

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Still with the looks, if you don't like typing.

Copy the image and post it in the looks section. Some people do that.
You still need to have the whole template there.

Gave it another go.:mad:_@:
Thanks for the patience.
 

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History needs work, make it not sound and look like a bullet list in the future.
 
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