[Horror] Remedy...

[BazzBee]

Remedy... ​

Down the tunnel caves, running for the only lightness visible in this mass of darkness, The more closer they reach the more harder it is to Move....Breath...Blink...The only thing possible to do right now is fear. Death was 2 seconds away from a brink, Desperate to live but can't live, desperate to protect but can't protect, on the brink of insanity lies Peace... what is peace ? will it ever exist, or does it exist and we are all blinded by hatred to sense its exist in this universe....or do we never acknowledge it, we all think that we can and will be saved by your own existence, but whats mystery is that our own existence is trying to hunt us down, it may seem like an obvious reliable but its just a liability we take with confidence.... it may seem strange but at the same time, its called humanity.

Hearing slightly barely hear-able voices saying 'Wake up Runto'

Runto : H-huh what just happened
Vidle : What do you mean 'what just happened' you just woke up and you've been sleep throughout the whole class, we had to bring you home, they called mom and dad.
Runto : R-Really ? .... sorry sis i was just having a weird dream.
Vidle : huh !? hey ! whats wrong with you... why are you trembling !?
Runto : W-w-what are you talking abou....*faints*
Vidle : Huh !? HEY ! MOM ! somethings wrong with Runto he just fainted !?

3 hours later...
Runto : *Starts to wake up* W-where am i, ugh my brain hurts and what happened ?
Vidle : You fainted right between our conversation you idiot.
Juaro(Runto's mother) :What happened you have been acting very weird lately ?
Runto : I don't know, its that have been having these weird dreams... i remember, but seems i can't remember.
Vidle : What are you saying ? You can remember but you can't ? makes no sense at all.
Runto : Uhhh leave me alone for a few hours please.
Juaro : That maybe a good idea, you should get some sleep.

Moments later...
Runto : Struggling in sleep* Wakes up* W-what is happening to me !??
Voice : Death appears run for the falling...
Runto : ..Who is this, REVEAL YOURSELF !!
Voice : Death appears run for the falling...
Runto : Death appears ? what are you saying ? it makes no sense.

Earth starts to shake and a sound of an explosion is heard out side of Runto's room
Runto :*rushes out of his room...No matter how fast he runs he can't reach the door* Ugh why can't i move, it feels as if i'm moving as fast as i can but reaching no where, its like i am falling and not dropping to the surface.
Voice : You can feel it too right ...
Runto :Huh......What do you mean..
Voice : The Remedy...

Until the next chapter...

Remedy(Definition): Remedy is known as an medical treatment(noun) and can also be used as an undesired situation(Verb) But the Remedy... used in this fanfiction is nothing related to these definitions.

I will be delaying my previous Fanfic(Sound of that evil that exists) for 2 weeks(Minimum) and will be continuing this FanFic for the moment.

 

[hyuuga teddy]

Great. Loved the beginning

 

[AllomnisymbolsparttwoT]

Dude!! *O* that was an AWESOME BEGINNING!! :I nice work bro! I loved the death part! it brings that feeling every human being gets and hopelessness dont matter much you run, it always finds its victims and reap them I give this fic a

10/10 sweet beginning!

 

[hyuuga teddy]

Thanks man

 

[The7thHokage]

This thing is just as good as the other FF even thou this is a one shot, but really nice to read.

 

[BazzBee]

This thing is just as good as the other FF even thou this is a one shot, but really nice to read.

this is not a oneshot U_U i am continuing it.

 

[KuroKaze]

Awesome start....<3'ed it

 

[~Zonta~]

Great read bro.....=D Plus rep for the excellent read
I liked it even though I am not in horror but I am eager to know about this one for sure :bouncy:

 

[Chakra Wizard]

Grammar needs a little work, but it looks good, man I like the way you format yours=D

 

[Vilvake]

Do people like shorter things? Or do they recognize your name or something? Whenever I write anything, usually only one person will reply... or nobody at all will. You always get a bunch of comments

I want to write a serious story, but I feel like it would be a waste of time... nobody would read it

 

[BazzBee]

Do people like shorter things? Or do they recognize your name or something? Whenever I write anything, usually only one person will reply... or nobody at all will. You always get a bunch of comments

I want to write a serious story, but I feel like it would be a waste of time... nobody would read it

I will read it

 

[P3ĮÑ]

Nice read as always, and what a nice start 10/10

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According to plan

 

[Sherlock.]

Great Read.... It's an interesting start....

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

I have to start by giving you props for beginning another FF

I definitely can feel the horror sense of this FF. It is a very weird FF but at the same time intriguing. I’m looking forward to see how this story unfolds, plot/character-wise. Overall great job for the first chapter. Also, your note at the end was interesting and I can understand why you would delay as you would like to give your all and juggling two at the same time isn’t easy. Well good luck my friend ^^

 

[YokoKurama]

Oh man this is going to be a good one, I can tell! I dunno about juggling two stories at one time but I do like reading both of your FFs. Can't wait to see what happens next! Keep it up!