Rematch- shonnen vs Best
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You rustled jimmies mate, what do you expext?
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That's impossible. 
Dodai stood in the grassy-field, across from his opponent (at mid-range), while calmly observing his every move. He felt the tension in the atmosphere, yet remained calm. Suddenly, he closed his eyes, inhaled and exhaled, then opening his eyes and begin darting to the left, arcing slightly (of a 10 meter radius) of his opponents right. While doing so, in his movements, he readily (with his right hand) taken out a scroll and hold it out in front himself, whilst unraveling it, summoning (using chakra to activate the seal) a shuriken to his aid. The shuriken appeared out a poof of smoke, and wield by Dodai soon after, with him simultaneously infusing chakra to in large the shuriken size. With his left hand, he used a translucent wire to attach to the shuriken. Approaching mid-arc of his opponent, he halted his movements and face their right side; then, he fling his giant shuriken. Should it land, it will cut through his mid-section, but should it miss, Dodai would control its trajectory (with the wire) and revert it back onto the opponent's blind spot.
Dodai stood in the grassy-field, across from his opponent (at mid-range), while calmly observing his every move. He felt the tension in the atmosphere, yet remained calm. Suddenly, he closed his eyes, inhaled and exhaled, then opening his eyes and begin darting to the left, arcing slightly (of a 10 meter radius) of his opponents right. While doing so, in his movements, he readily (with his right hand) taken out a scroll and hold it out in front himself, whilst unraveling it, summoning (using chakra to activate the seal) a shuriken to his aid. The shuriken appeared out a poof of smoke, and wield by Dodai soon after, with him simultaneously infusing chakra to in large the shuriken size. With his left hand, he used a translucent wire to attach to the shuriken. Approaching mid-arc of his opponent, he halted his movements and face their right side; then, he fling his giant shuriken. Should it land, it will cut through his mid-section, but should it miss, Dodai would control its trajectory (with the wire) and revert it back onto the opponent's blind spot.
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Amen Godly
As Shun sees the incoming giant shuriken, Shun quickly changes position with a log of wood locate 7 metres to the left(in an arc direction) then he quickly spits out a massive wall of flames that covers the whole length and breadth of the battle field to melt the giant shuriken and continue towards dodai. Shun then finishes by shooting 8 fire balls upwards to move in an arc through the air and come raining down on Dodai.
(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack. The technique is a mix between high speed movement and the use of the transformation technique but has its limits.
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(Katon: Gōka Mekkyaku) - Fire release: Great Fire Majestic Annihilation
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: A technique where the user makes the horse hand seal and then kneads chakra inside his body which is then converted into fire and expelled from the mouth as a massive wall of intense flames, which covers an expansive range in both vertical and horizontal dimensions, making it extremely difficult to avoid. However, due to its massive width and height, the technique is not one of the fastest seen so far.
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(Katon: Gōkakyū Hitoame no Jutsu)Fire Release: Great Fireball Shower
Type: Offensive
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description:
Kneading his chakra and then converting it to fire, the user will do the Horse → Tiger → Snake → Ram hand seals as he inhales, exhaling into the sky a multitude of great fireballs (up to 8) at the same time which then rain down on the target from above causing severe, widespread damage around the field. These fireballs have explosive and concussive abilities, similar to other fire techniques.
As Shun sees the incoming giant shuriken, Shun quickly changes position with a log of wood locate 7 metres to the left(in an arc direction) then he quickly spits out a massive wall of flames that covers the whole length and breadth of the battle field to melt the giant shuriken and continue towards dodai. Shun then finishes by shooting 8 fire balls upwards to move in an arc through the air and come raining down on Dodai.
(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack. The technique is a mix between high speed movement and the use of the transformation technique but has its limits.
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(Katon: Gōka Mekkyaku) - Fire release: Great Fire Majestic Annihilation
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: A technique where the user makes the horse hand seal and then kneads chakra inside his body which is then converted into fire and expelled from the mouth as a massive wall of intense flames, which covers an expansive range in both vertical and horizontal dimensions, making it extremely difficult to avoid. However, due to its massive width and height, the technique is not one of the fastest seen so far.
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(Katon: Gōkakyū Hitoame no Jutsu)Fire Release: Great Fireball Shower
Type: Offensive
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description:
Kneading his chakra and then converting it to fire, the user will do the Horse → Tiger → Snake → Ram hand seals as he inhales, exhaling into the sky a multitude of great fireballs (up to 8) at the same time which then rain down on the target from above causing severe, widespread damage around the field. These fireballs have explosive and concussive abilities, similar to other fire techniques.
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"Ah...! A substitution....!?" Dodai said after witnessing the opponent be replace with a block of wood in his stead. He begin scanning the battlefield for the opponent, while retracting his shuriken (by controlling the wire), which change back to its original size, then catching it (from the open circle in the center) with his right hand and holding it outward to his right side. "There!" shouting from his inner thoughts, as he glared at the opponent position to the left at 9'clock (about 7 meters) from where he stood. "My opponent is planning something... I have no time!?" he said, while watching as the opponent gesture an single hand-seal and heavily inhale. At the same time, Dodai's body envelope with a mammoth of dense earth in the form of armor. The armor cause his shuriken to fall from his hand for the full development can take place.
As the fire was exhaled from the opponent's mouth, Dodai sits and awaits the flames to engulf him, however, knowing he was protected due to the earths resistance, he was cautions, so he strength the armor defensive properties by gathering more earth to increase its density. The flames spread wide, although, Dodai was not concern about its destructive power, resulting in burning the grassy field; he press forward utilizing the armor.
The opponent was not finish, Dodai observe as the opponent continued his onslaught - casting fireballs in the sky to rain down on him. Dodai (in the armor) lift his hand above his head and shaped his extended hand into boxy-shield to block against the descending fireballs. He shaped his left hand into a spike-clubber. The fireballs slowed his mobility, but he continued his advance.
Dodai will stride forward (utilizing his armor) to the opponents front and as he approach, lifting his clubber high, and immediately swinging down on the opponent's head, causing the force of clubber to smash his head, with the impact resulting in a severe head injury or fatal death.
As the fire was exhaled from the opponent's mouth, Dodai sits and awaits the flames to engulf him, however, knowing he was protected due to the earths resistance, he was cautions, so he strength the armor defensive properties by gathering more earth to increase its density. The flames spread wide, although, Dodai was not concern about its destructive power, resulting in burning the grassy field; he press forward utilizing the armor.
The opponent was not finish, Dodai observe as the opponent continued his onslaught - casting fireballs in the sky to rain down on him. Dodai (in the armor) lift his hand above his head and shaped his extended hand into boxy-shield to block against the descending fireballs. He shaped his left hand into a spike-clubber. The fireballs slowed his mobility, but he continued his advance.
Dodai will stride forward (utilizing his armor) to the opponents front and as he approach, lifting his clubber high, and immediately swinging down on the opponent's head, causing the force of clubber to smash his head, with the impact resulting in a severe head injury or fatal death.
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I believe that since fire is neutral to earth, two S-rank fire will cancel out two S-rank earth, so the earth hardening technique is completely destroyed.
As Shun notices dodai simply dash through the wall of flames, "arrgh, how can he do that?" he says as he quickly passed his doton chakra into the ground to cause the ground to shake, making Dodai fall to the ground. As Dodai was about to reach the ground(by falling), Shun again passes his doton chakra into the ground under Dodai and makes four earth spike protude from the ground and skew Dodai. Not waiting to see Dodai's reaction, Shun finishes by creating a smoke clone of Dodai(with Dodai's looks). "die you fool"
(Doton: Yochi no Douyou) - Earth Release: World Shaking
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will concentrate and release their chakra into the ground to create a small tremer that can result in making the enemies lose their footing and fall to ground or miss the aim of a given technique.
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(Doton: Ganchūsō) - Earth Release: Stone Spikes
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: This technique lets the user create a few rock pillars that will protrude from the ground to skew the target. The rock pillars will even pass through obstacles to reach their target if these are less dense. The pillars/spikes can be done in any earthen surface, including other earth techniques of the user.
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(Kemuri Bunshin no Jutsu) – Smoke Clone technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user makes a clone made out of smoke. When it is hit, it turns into a smoke similar to the smokescreen the user creates. The smoke clone is mostly used as a diversion tactic like other clone techniques.
Note: can only use smoke related jutsu.
Note: can only be used by Kigiri or Smoke users.
As Shun notices dodai simply dash through the wall of flames, "arrgh, how can he do that?" he says as he quickly passed his doton chakra into the ground to cause the ground to shake, making Dodai fall to the ground. As Dodai was about to reach the ground(by falling), Shun again passes his doton chakra into the ground under Dodai and makes four earth spike protude from the ground and skew Dodai. Not waiting to see Dodai's reaction, Shun finishes by creating a smoke clone of Dodai(with Dodai's looks). "die you fool"
(Doton: Yochi no Douyou) - Earth Release: World Shaking
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will concentrate and release their chakra into the ground to create a small tremer that can result in making the enemies lose their footing and fall to ground or miss the aim of a given technique.
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(Doton: Ganchūsō) - Earth Release: Stone Spikes
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: This technique lets the user create a few rock pillars that will protrude from the ground to skew the target. The rock pillars will even pass through obstacles to reach their target if these are less dense. The pillars/spikes can be done in any earthen surface, including other earth techniques of the user.
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(Kemuri Bunshin no Jutsu) – Smoke Clone technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user makes a clone made out of smoke. When it is hit, it turns into a smoke similar to the smokescreen the user creates. The smoke clone is mostly used as a diversion tactic like other clone techniques.
Note: can only use smoke related jutsu.
Note: can only be used by Kigiri or Smoke users.
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Naw..... And since I'm learning.....
Mistake #1: You did not combine the 2 Jutsu into a "stronger" S-rank, you perform them as separate techniques.
Detail Evidence #1: Furthermore, your S-rank fire would have only been able to heat my earth-armor, causing the earth particles to expand, resulting in fractures spreading at the front of the armor.
Detail Evidence #2: However, I strengthen the technique, turning it into a "stronger" S-rank, having resistance.
Mistake #2: Your S-rank technique shoots multiple fireballs, which divide your technique and decrease its ranks based on the amount of fireballs created (yet equaling the rank).
Detail Evidence #3: You shoot 8 fireballs, which is equivalent to B-ranks. ([B+B+B+B+B+B+B+B] = [S-rank])
Detail Evidence #4: My earthen-armor is a "stronger" S-rank, capable of blocking and withstanding against B-rank attacks.
Now to your counter.
Although, you completely ignored utilizing the Fire Release: Fireball Shower Technique and falsely assuming you destroyed my "strong" S-rank earthen-armor, your second technique: Earth Release: Stone Spikes, have no effect. I might have been caught in the tremors, but I would be safe from your spikes because of my armor. However, it only validates if I carry it over to the next turn, I believe, or it could be mistakes on your part, which should change the scenario of the battle. Anyway, I was going to cancel the earth technique and use RasenShuriken afterwards.
....But I'm not going to continue this match. I'll rematch you some other time, without the talking; and let's make it official.
Mistake #1: You did not combine the 2 Jutsu into a "stronger" S-rank, you perform them as separate techniques.
Detail Evidence #1: Furthermore, your S-rank fire would have only been able to heat my earth-armor, causing the earth particles to expand, resulting in fractures spreading at the front of the armor.
Detail Evidence #2: However, I strengthen the technique, turning it into a "stronger" S-rank, having resistance.
Mistake #2: Your S-rank technique shoots multiple fireballs, which divide your technique and decrease its ranks based on the amount of fireballs created (yet equaling the rank).
Detail Evidence #3: You shoot 8 fireballs, which is equivalent to B-ranks. ([B+B+B+B+B+B+B+B] = [S-rank])
Detail Evidence #4: My earthen-armor is a "stronger" S-rank, capable of blocking and withstanding against B-rank attacks.
Now to your counter.
Although, you completely ignored utilizing the Fire Release: Fireball Shower Technique and falsely assuming you destroyed my "strong" S-rank earthen-armor, your second technique: Earth Release: Stone Spikes, have no effect. I might have been caught in the tremors, but I would be safe from your spikes because of my armor. However, it only validates if I carry it over to the next turn, I believe, or it could be mistakes on your part, which should change the scenario of the battle. Anyway, I was going to cancel the earth technique and use RasenShuriken afterwards.
....But I'm not going to continue this match. I'll rematch you some other time, without the talking; and let's make it official.
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