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Chapter 1 -

Never regret something that once made you smile.

"Naruto... I have Something to say... I am in love with you." Sakura said. They where in the forest the sun was bright and shining down a beautiful light on to them, Naruto and Sakura where staring into each others eyes for a while after Sakura spoke. They had decided to walk here earlier just as friends wanting to take a walk. But to sakura it was an opportunity, an once in a lifetime opportunity to see if she could possibly still be together with Naruto.

When her words were met by silence she blushed an even deeper shade of red " I understand if you have lost feeling for me" she looked down at her feet fighting back tears. She had known he would reject her, he couldn't possibly still care for her. Still she still had to apologize for all she had done to him so she opened her mouth again.

" I know how mean i have been to you." tears now flowed freely down her face and she could not meet his eyes. " Ive yelled at you and ignored you, when you had been nothing but nice to me. You always protected me even though you thought i never cared about you. But i do care now. After sasuke left i realized something. that my feelings for him were fake he is nothing to me now." she laughed bitterly. "he never even noticed me. But you.. you were always there. And i am sorry... i don't deserve you, why would you like me any way? I am ugly, i am annoying, i am stupid. You should hate me."

"i don't hate you sakura" naruto said. Sakura tried not to let her hopes rise at these words. After all he could just be lying, being that stupid, nice, amazing guy again. She knew that if her hope rose they would just fall twice as fast, and she would be hurt so much more. so she just shook her head no.

" I don't hate you Sakura" He repeated more firmly. " How could I? Your smart, talented, beautiful, kind. Ive loved you since the first time i laid eyes on you. And i feel so... Elated that you feel the same way now."Sakura looked up now shocked, could it be true? did he still like her? And then a smile broke across her face At the truth she heard loud and clear in his voice. Her tears stopped flowing, and butterflies began moving around in her stomach.

Naruto took a step closer, a look of fondness on his face as he studied her. Her short pink hair, her green eyes, her red headband,shirt and pants, and the soft blush that had the space between them was no more. Then Naruto kissed sakura. She kissed back immediately, her surge of passion making him kiss all the harder. Sakura put her arms around his shoulders, leaning into him even more. When the kiss broke off they were breathing hard. their foreheads were pressed against each other, their eyes looking into the others. Inside they knew what they were feeling, true love. They both felt... the intensity... it was overwhelming.

Sakura brought his face to hers again. Naruto groaned Sakuras body was squished against his and she somehow found a way to press even tighter to him, keeping them in a steady ended up being the one that stopped kissing, being in need of air. "Sakura... Ive never felt this way before... I love you." He said. " I know... I love you too." Sakura responded then laughed out of pure joy,who would've thought that we would end up together?"

Naruto tightened his arms around Sakura and they were just about to engage again when someone stumbled out of the trees. It was Sai, when he saw them he stopped walking and just said "Oh...I am so sorry am i interrupting something? I saw you two walking in here earlier and i was coming to go find you because i was bored and i wanted someone to talk to. Um... Well this is kind of awkward isn't it?"

Naruto and Sakura sprang apart. Their faces were beet red and they both seemed incapable of speaking. " you know i read a book once that said sometimes a boy and a girl that have been friends for a long time can end up together. I guess it was right...um i am gonna go get something to eat. your welcome to join me if you want to... or you could stay here and... do whatever you were headed to."Sai turned and walked back through the trees. Naruto and Sakura looked at each other, grabbed each others hand and ran after him. They were both pretty hungry, and besides they could always pick up were they left of later.

The End of chapter 1

Please review if interested..
mew your not the first people to read this so don't chew my ass off
 
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Chapter 2:

Sometimes we know we shouldn't and thats exactly why we do.

~Flashback~

~At Ichiraku~

They were presented with the ramen they ordered. Naruto was probably going to eat far more than he needed, but Sakura didn't care. She loved being with him, like she knew he loved being with her. She giggled when he downed his first bowl in a matter of seconds and encouraged her to do the same. Sakura had also grown to like the food there

"Hinata, I, uh..." Naruto didn't quite know how to say it. He had a boquet in his left hand. White roses. Her favorite." N-Naruto-kun!" was all Hinata could say. Had he come back to accept her feelings?"I...I wanted to give you these. I was really surprised when you said you loved me, so it was the least I could do!" He grinned that foolish grin she always loved.

Hinata couldn't speak. This is what she spent her whole life as a ninja waiting for."I wanted you to know. I wanted you to know that I stopped lying to myself."Oh God. Here it came."I chose Sakura."Hinata was devastated. That was the furthest thing from what she expected. What kind of guy gave the girl he didn't love flowers? Her kind.

~End Flashback~

I saw them together recently two days ago, though I was walking by Ichiraku Ramen. Naruto's favorite place. I smiled when I saw him there, thinking I might talk to him if I could get the courage. But there she was. They were both laughing at some joke Naruto made; they were in love. I decided to leave them alone, but watch from a distance. Maybe she'd leave with Ino, or Sai! They were good friends, right?

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I'm standing in the alleyway behind ichiraku's ramen shop. My day started off normal, it was warm and sunny, like most of the day's here in Konoha, I had a shift at the hospital, but lady Tsunade let me off early because I've been working my butt off for the past few days, so i went to meet him.

I feel the hard wall against my back, as Naruto gently pushes me up against it. His hand gently tucking my pink hair behind my ear.I've been waiting for this moment, dreaming about it, constantly thinking about it for the past few years and its finally here, I can feel his soft lips on my own, he tastes like ramen, though I predicted that. Its all over his breath too. I love him so much...

Naruto slowly parts his lips from mine, panting slightly from the intense kiss we shared, we both been a two days since everybody's favorite blond knucklehead shinobi started dating me,Slowly I open my eyes, I'm met with a brilliant shade of warm blue orbs looking back at me.

I hear something fall to the ground somewhere to the side, but my eyes are glued to Naruto as his head shifts towards the unexpected noise. A feeling of dread washes over me as Naruto's eyes .I slowly turn my head in the same direction, and there she is Hinata Hyuga the blue haired kunoichi. Wide pale lavender eyes filled with hurt, there's spilled ramen all over the ground, no doubt for Naruto. She looks so betrayed, and broken and... Angry.

''Hinata.'' The blond before me whimpers and slowly takes a step back, and another. Before she starts running. In the direction opposite of us. No doubt trying to get as far as possible.''HINATA!" Naruto shouts after her. Before bolting in the same direction as Hinata, with the speed of a trained shinobi.I wrap my arms around myself .I can feel the guilt hit me like a ton of bricks."What have I done?"

The End of chapter 2 Mew bye bye tune in next time for Chapter 3 r maybe not muhahahah:flaw:
 

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not bad although i loath narusaku
but this is a fanfic people have a right to create from their idea and i love it because of how well thought it is but its not my kind of format though
this is though


but anyway +rep, a thank you and 5 stars in your future
 

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Well written, though my heart is broken for Hinata *leaves room and punches trees to regain manliness* I am a NaruHina fan through and through! +rep though as it is well written
 
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