[Other] Reality

[Kishi Uzumaki]

What is reality really means,
Is it just a something, we built in time,
Or is it broken down countless times,
And built upon it countless times,
Is it just an illusion that we live,
That can be changed way we want to,
Although I can understand it,
How is it? That it can't be changed.

If change is something that never stops,
So what if it's the same with reality?
If it can be really changed, then why?
We are just trying to cling in to this,
Don't we have enough courage to change it,
Or are we lost in middle of pursuits of life?

Can we say we live in a our own reality,
Maybe you could say I'm a different one,
One who has a unique view of reality,
To believe that it really can be conquered,
Might be an illusion I see with my mind,
But I'm willing to walk that difficult path,
I might fail walking this road of uncertainty,
At least I will say, I'm being honest to myself.

 

[Masterpiece7]

It's good,a lot of English mistakes but I'm not the one to judge haha

 

[sv121]

good work.I cant criticize u bec then i got to do a better job than wat u did

 

[Aomine Daiki]

I liked the poem but it had some english misstakes.

keep up the good work!

 

[KillerbYo]

Nice.............................

 

[Kishi Uzumaki]

It's good,a lot of English mistakes but I'm not the one to judge haha

good work.I cant criticize u bec then i got to do a better job than wat u did

I liked the poem but it had some english misstakes.

keep up the good work!

Thanks guys , i wonder , if it's because this new Spelling and Grammar checker i use anyway i will keep a eye on that :yeah:

Nice.............................

Thanks =D

 

[Zen Uchiha]

nice i liked it

 

[YokoKurama]

<div class="bbWrapper">Nicely done.</div>