Rap Thread-Winner Wins Title

[Airjustu]

Try breaking up your lines it would be more easy to read
but Im not going to say it's real good but it's not bad for a first rap
atleast it's better than my first rap
just keep practicing and you will get better

thanks i was thinking it looked pretty long I'll space it out next time

 

[NarutoVsGoku]

damn its as if this thread is dead now.. guess i came on too late..

 

[Bright Master]

look i b that pretty mutha****a Philly what im reppin
If u aint ****ing with us u can get the stepping
Looks like i need to teach u cuz u didn't learn your lesson
Battle me and you still aint dead that's a blessing
steadying talk shit looks like ima pull out the weapon

all your lyrics r all jokes
claiming shit u don't got
u make bad moves like a Philly cop
I ain't gonna stop till i hear that semi pop
i b steady mobbin
roll up to ya hood yea we steady Robbin
i was on the block tryna to catch a lick
pulled up to club with a hundered ****ing bricks
I **** with hoes and bad chicks
But wen shit gets critical ima put a bullet inside every fcking individual

lol,
what the hell is you talkin bout?
cud tell wif outta doubt
you from philly but wth s you talkin bout?
cuz u dnt noe what its about
talkin bout robbin and holdin up sum bricks?
Sun cummmon get on your real shi t
cuz that fake shi t, im not fellin it
You dat niqqa from philly nd you actin like you hood rich?
You tryin catch a lick?
well get on ur knees bro if u really want that ****.
U on that ****** shit
You aint never touch a brick, your game is below par
cuz u be frontin you be frontin like the trunk of a sports car.
Dont ever come @ my life style.
But i'll make it worth a while
cuz I cud pick your momz as s up then feed her up, call that bit ch a chao.
Im not frontin now.
cuz honestly you not bout
livin in ghetto or makin a drop off of that blue agic then when them boys n blue come up put that pedal to the medal, when you just tryin to survive a little bit or feed your daughter and get enough money to one day get settled but for now u just tryin to get that little girl some pampers, but you gtta make sure nobody stoppin u so you gtta put a grip on the hammer,
And if it means bodin a officer by all means get up on ur santana.
cuz idgaf about it like my txtin grammar.
So do you you see now,
You a effin liar, im tired of fake niggas actin like they got sum boys 4 hire that wont get on no stoppie to make in the end is you gettin bodied.
Im sorry!


Brooklyn till I die...

 

[NarutoVsGoku]

cmon guy keep this going
dont stop rapping dont stop flowing

 

[Airjustu]

cmon guy keep this going
dont stop rapping dont stop flowing

The next contest should bring people back

 

[NarutoVsGoku]

The next contest should bring people back

i think i wll start the next contest. i think i can be a great host and make it more interesting. but i will give it some time and start it when i have time

 

[sage1999]

yo, yo. Dont piss me, prick
****, how about sucking ur dads stick
I'M a hit
And u r a prick

No offense to anyone.

 

[TheJaktplan]

SHIT


Didn’t even know this existed
Too bad, cause you know I woulda ****in enlisted
Get in line little ladies
The gentleman’s here
Make you wet as Euphrates
Shits in a whole new tier
Get off of your pedestal
Shit’s barely perceptible
Weak and one-dimensional
Entirely forgettable
Now the game is on, wanna put up a fight?
The door’s wide open, gonna be here all night


/end rap
YOUTH
Is this thing still happening?