Rap Thread-Winner Wins Title

[jiraiya lives]

How the hell do you see who voted for who

 

[Expeditious]

who u callin a puss you f***in f*gg*t?
ur pissed i'm winning the poll and u can't stand it
yeah i saw ur convo with NaruAwesome bitchin how u r pissed
"the guy winning this so far is bad, this poll has to be fixed"
just quit bitchin, why u hatin so much
take a chill pill and just shut the f*** up
before now i wasn't battling, in fact i was on nicer shit
now i gotta get my hog and make u my biker bitch
yeah ur flows are sick, but not it a good way
they're sick like suckin d*** for some dope in a city subway
u got lines for days? drinking lyrics like lemonade?
where'd u learn to rhyme? ur jokes are dumber than David Spade

that's all you got??? mad weak, I have a question, how will u be able to rap that on a beat?? Right there you hav no flow at all real talk

Look im sharper then a thumbtack
i'l skit on her spine but don't call it a cumback
yea i can end ur career within one track
front line general telling you to get the fck back

 

[Expeditious]

How the hell do you see who voted for who

u can't, wanna battle?

 

[NaruGoku]

that's all you got??? mad weak, I have a question, how will u be able to rap that on a beat?? Right there you hav no flow at all real talk

Look im sharper then a thumbtack
i'l skit on her spine but don't call it a cumback
yea i can end ur career within one track
front line general telling you to get the fck back

man, u just talk shit. the rhythm is fine, if you heard me do it to a beat u'd hear how it flows. just reading lyrics doesn't always give you the whole picture of whats going on. and then u didn't even battle!? after all that time, u call me out, VM me, call me a p***y, i did 2 posts and u come up with this? come on man if ur gonna talk shit at least back it up. don't just say "oh this sucks" then do a four-line rap that wasn't even a battle back when ur the one calling me out, calling me a p****, and now u puss out while saying i suck...

 

[Expeditious]

man, u just talk shit. the rhythm is fine, if you heard me do it to a beat u'd hear how it flows. just reading lyrics doesn't always give you the whole picture of whats going on. and then u didn't even battle!? after all that time, u call me out, VM me, call me a p***y, i did 2 posts and u come up with this? come on man if ur gonna talk shit at least back it up. don't just say "oh this sucks" then do a four-line rap that wasn't even a battle back when ur the one calling me out, calling me a p****, and now u puss out while saying i suck...

alright fine should we continue?

 

[NaruGoku]

alright fine should we continue?

man, what is with you? all BS aside, real shit, the real you. are u purposely being like this just to get someone to battle or do u really act like this? i mean call me out, call me a p***y, I post at 10:35 and again shortly after that and you don't reply til 11:10 and u VM me saying "don't take forever." and ur reply wasnt even a battle and i don't think u even read the second one or what i wrote at the bottom of it... talk to me for real right now, leave the rap out. i respect u just fine for real as a fellow rapper cuz in my eyes we've all got a love of rap in common--we should be friends for that, not hatin for it. but out of nowhere you start BS'ing me around and acting like i did something to u. what's up? i'm fine with battling but this really isn't how to do it. there's a mutual understanding of respect and an acknowledgement that battles are nothing personal, but this feels personal and i don't like that. I'm sending u a friend request, so that'll answer a lot my questions if you accept it

and btw, go online and read the lyrics of songs you don't know the words to and u won't be able to get the rhythm except for someone like Rakim who uses an almost perfectly steady rhythm or if its someone u listen to ALOT and ur familiar with their flow--then u can more or less guess for the most part how it should go. so there are certain disadvantages to the fact that we can't hear what's being said over a beat

 

[Expeditious]

man, what is with you? all BS aside, real shit, the real you. are u purposely being like this just to get someone to battle or do u really act like this? i mean call me out, call me a p***y, I post at 10:35 and again shortly after that and you don't reply til 11:10 and u VM me saying "don't take forever." and ur reply wasnt even a battle and i don't think u even read the second one or what i wrote at the bottom of it... talk to me for real right now, leave the rap out. i respect u just fine for real as a fellow rapper cuz in my eyes we've all got a love of rap in common--we should be friends for that, not hatin for it. but out of nowhere you start BS'ing me around and acting like i did something to u. what's up?

and btw, go online and read the lyrics of songs you don't know the words to and u won't be able to get the rhythm except for someone like Rakim who uses an almost perfectly steady rhythm or if its someone u listen to ALOT and ur familiar with their flow--then u can more or less guess for the most part how it should go. so there are certain disadvantages to the fact that we can't hear what's being said over a beat

stick to discussion naruto
cuz raping aint for u
i been doing this shi* since i was able to tie my shoes
i'm slaughter yall like hilter did the jews
now im on my serious shit
u beating me?
u on some delirious shit
selling rocks just to make a living
bring ya bitch to show her how im living
yea im nice, but now it's time to be mean
sippin rosa and smoking lean
ima hall of famer kareem
ima monster
everyday is halloween.

 

[Littlefinger.]

I'd probably lose against you >_< D:

Lmao! Okay^...^

 

[Littlefinger.]

u can't, wanna battle?

You can-_- Just click on the numbers.
That's why the poll isn't really fair. And you can vote more than once...Not fair!

 

[NaruGoku]

stick to discussion naruto
cuz raping aint for u
i been doing this shi* since i was able to tie my shoes
i'm slaughter yall like hilter did the jews
now im on my serious shit
u beating me?
u on some delirious shit
selling rocks just to make a living
bring ya bitch to show her how im living
yea im nice, but now it's time to be mean
sippin rosa and smoking lean
ima hall of famer kareem
ima monster
everyday is halloween.

talk about a whack flow, what the **** is this jive?
is this the best u got? ur better off just not alive
don't quit your day job, if your broke ass even got one
my one-two's not like a boxer it's more like a shotgun
u cant rap for shit, talking shit now that's your forte kid
i've been doin this longer than u have even lived
White Mic 5-time West Modesto battle champ, that's right
ur a chump not worth my change, ur shine is weaker than your nightlight
you got bullshit little jokes, half of which just don't make sense
call u MC Humpty Dumpty, ur flow is broke and can't be fixed

 

[Expeditious]

talk about a whack flow, what the **** is this jive?
is this the best u got? ur better off just not alive
don't quit your day job, if your broke ass even got one
my one-two's not like a boxer it's more like a shotgun
u cant rap for shit, talking shit now that's your forte kid
i've been doin this longer than u have even lived
White Mic 5-time West Modesto battle champ, that's right
ur a chump not worth my change, ur shine is weaker than your nightlight
you got bullshit little jokes, half of which just don't make sense
call u MC Humpty Dumpty, ur flow is broke and can't be fixed

good shit man. But let's continue this shit some other time cuz im going to bed.

 

[NaruGoku]

good shit man. But let's continue this shit some other time cuz im going to bed.

hold up, before you go, you meant that? saying "good shit man?" cuz if so, i misjudged you by what you said and i'll have much more fun battling you next time... and thanks for accepting my friend request

 

[LBeezy]

This n*gga said "smoking lean" ?

LMFAO!!!!!

WOW!

Either you're super young.
Or super dumb.
Lol

Real sh*t.

 

[NaruGoku]

hold up, before you go, you meant that? saying "good shit man?" cuz if so, i misjudged you by what you said and i'll have much more fun battling you next time... and thanks for accepting my friend request

lol, u still there bro?
well even if you don't reply, what i said stands: if u meant it, thanks for what u said and i really am glad u accepted my friend request. so if ur in bed or sleepin or whatever, just wanna let u know that.

 

[NaruAwesome]

The winner for this week is NaruGoku. Thank you for everyone that joined and voted. I will do another rap thread in 2 weeks on Wednesdayif you want to be notified
befriend me or NaruGoku for the next one.we'll tell you when its on.

But this thread isn't over , yet. the winner of this week will battle Ninjakid114 today or the next day. get ready guys cause you control who wins

 

[NarutoVsGoku]

don't say ur better them me that's a sign of disrespect
getting all this cash and mailing on these checks
bout to kill you, then it's on to the next

How you claim your banging when you never been a criminal
mortal combat flow i'm about to finish you
neck so clear it makes the rocks look invisible
i can get you touch like
you went to get a physical


bringing heat with out wade
i got rhymes for days
im drinking your lyrics like lemonade
bitch you too sweat minutemade

nigga ur trash it took u about 30 mins just to type something lol




boy i been mobbing
im something like ur farther
murder niggas proper
u can meet this choppa
40 drum will have you screaming like a opera.

took me 30 minutes to rap my ryhmes. Cant rush perfection
you not fit for this rapping game, natural selection
meaning in this rap environment you probably wont survive
without the proper set of skills you'll be eaten up alive
but how you expect to beat me with those wack ass flows?
its like you got them from somewhere else, like hand-me-down-clothes
i read ya ryhmes and think "hmm i know heard this before"
Did you go to a rap garage sale to cop metaphors?
how cheap did you get the one when you said "Mortal Kombat flow"?
and the "heat without Wade", real original -__- (sarcasm)
I raped you last time that explains why im criminal
I murdered you in these ryhmes, but its only principle
you stepped up to me and got a beating thats most near biblical
and its pitiful cuz the effort i put agaisnt you was only minimal
real talk....... not even difficult

 

[~KRF~]

took me 30 minutes to rap my ryhmes. Cant rush perfection
you not fit for this rapping game, natural selection
meaning in this rap environment you probably wont survive
without the proper set of skills you'll be eaten up alive
but how you expect to beat me with those wack ass flows?
its like you got them from somewhere else, like hand-me-down-clothes
i read ya ryhmes and think "hmm i know heard this before"
Did you go to a rap garage sale to cop metaphors?
how cheap did you get the one when you said "Mortal Kombat flow"?
and the "heat without Wade", real original -__- (sarcasm)
I raped you last time that explains why im criminal
I murdered you in these ryhmes, but its only principle
you stepped up to me and got a beating thats most near biblical
and its pitiful cuz the effort i put agaisnt you was only minimal
real talk....... not even difficult

NarutovsGoku that's a pretty stupid name,
just like your never-ending tale,
You hang around here for whole day
And never say anything great,
And English is not my last name,
So no great verses could come from my way,
But still I had some thoughts about your game,
Like how you try to make others seem gay,
And you say your law they all should obey,
And I always rhyme only the last word, okey?
So **** my rhymes, let's have it your way... mothafacka

 

[NarutoVsGoku]

NarutovsGoku that's a pretty stupid name,
just like your never-ending tale,
You hang around here for whole day
And never say anything great,
And English is not my last name,
So no great verses could come from my way,
But still I had some thoughts about your game,
Like how you try to make others seem gay,
And you say your law they all should obey,
And I always rhyme only the last word, okey?
So **** my rhymes, let's have it your way... mothafacka

lol that was cute

your rap reminds me of when i saw that video for the first time on youtube of the baby screaming at his lil brother "Charlie bit me!"
"Awww Charlie that hurtz!"
"Charlie....."

lol yea i got the same warm feeling
thats how ya rap made me feel
it was soft and sweet
like cookies for a meal
but i cant eat you up
i just ate another noob
i already had my fill up
stomach has to wait to make room
besides your raps speak for you
so excuse me as i ignore you
i'll act as if this never happened

 

[Airjustu]

(Okay this is my first rap and it probably sucks but whatever and please tell me how i did)

This is my rap but you better be worried, I put Naru to shame and make him look shady. its time for rookie to you how its done so grab a pen & paper and wait till class is done. If you wanna step to me heck you can try but better grab some tissue and be to cry because my rhymes are Art as deidara would say, so be ready to get blown away

 

[jiraiya lives]

(Okay this is my first rap and it probably sucks but whatever and please tell me how i did)

This is my rap but you better be worried, I put Naru to shame and make him look shady. its time for rookie to you how its done so grab a pen & paper and wait till class is done. If you wanna step to me heck you can try but better grab some tissue and be to cry because my rhymes are Art as deidara would say, so be ready to get blown away

Try breaking up your lines it would be more easy to read
but Im not going to say it's real good but it's not bad for a first rap
atleast it's better than my first rap
just keep practicing and you will get better