Rap Thread-Winner Wins Title

[NaruAwesome]

Welcome me in now It's my first thread post.
I'll just strut my stuff, then later i'll boast.
I saw the thread title and it got my attention.
25 now, started rapping in detention.
Speaking of detention, i'm at work!
About the same thing - but there's a perk.
You can sit at home typing up your rap.
I'm getting payed to do it, how u like that crap?
Enough about me I'd rather respond to you.
With lyrics sicker than Hopsin with the flu.
You guys are rapping back and forth... "who's on top?"
Well good news. I'm here so you can stop.
Read through my lines, not once or twice.
Find a weekness? nope sucka, it's all nice.
But I'm a nice guy - i'll just take the gold.
Silver and bronze too, but they can be sold.
Bronze for 10 bucks? You got a deal.
Now I get a foot long and a happy meal.
Any of you fools want silver? I'll sell it for twenty.
Use that money for fun, cuz i've got plenty.
Ur defense is like Gaara's? Dog we've seen that fail.
Plus I've got more power than Obama sip'n the Holy Grail.
Just read and enjoy, kid you're done.
I'll see what you reply with - have fun.
Oh well I just saw he made a poll to vote.
Oh well this was fun, *waves bye emote*

if u came earlier
i would have put u on the poll
who would win
in 2 days we'll know
vote for the best
the good the great
believe in your choices
choose them and have fate

 

[ShishaMastah420]

Lmao.. NaruAwesome voted for pretty much everybody and himself

 

[NaruAwesome]

Lmao.. NaruAwesome voted for pretty much everybody and himself

yeah, i voted for people that i felt were good. since i went up against everyone i felt they were good

u can vote for more than 1 person too, soo it'll be faster to know who won

 

[jiraiya lives]

The poll has been made. vote now, u can vote for more than 1 person

That dont mean we have to stop battling :flaw:

 

[NaruAwesome]

That dont mean we have to stop battling :flaw:

bro, i'll battle anyday, vote and let's go

 

[jiraiya lives]

bro, i'll battle anyday, vote and let's go

ok i see the battle still raging
and everybody hatin
your time will come just be patient
but im taking, the moment
my bars will cut like a shogun, you choking
you can run, but ill chase you like a fugitive,
im a make it big
this a battle to the death
only one person can win
you gon need help
this the end
it's a flood no noah's ark, you better swim

 

[NaruAwesome]

ok i see the battle still raging
and everybody hatin
your time will come just be patient
but im taking, the moment
my bars will cut like a shogun, you choking
you can run, but ill chase you like a fugitive,
im a make it big
this a battle to the death
only one person can win
you gon need help
this the end
it's a flood no noah's ark, you better swim

here i go, kids need to be put in there place
wtf boy
you're a total waste of space
not needed, u don't matter
if you're the pitcher
then i'm the batter
ready hit everything u got
i'm king of this base
peasants being something there not

 

[Yashin]

ok i see the battle still raging
and everybody hatin
your time will come just be patient
but im taking, the moment
my bars will cut like a shogun, you choking
you can run, but ill chase you like a fugitive,
im a make it big
this a battle to the death
only one person can win
you gon need help
this the end
it's a flood no noah's ark, you better swim

Seriously,you guys arnt black
and you better run cause theres no turning back.
When i take out my rhymes,and your reading my lines,
you better think twice,cus i wont be nice,
No theres no saftey when Mc Drench is on the mic.

Ill burn you so hard you'll need some Aloe,
cus theres no place for me thats too shallow,
Im a G on the mic, and im guessing this you dislike,
but lets be fair your probably a dyke.

Im gunna wrap this up, and pop out a cup,
watch you squirm as try to reply, but face it,
im just too fly

 

[Expeditious]

Seriously,you guys arnt black
and you better run cause theres no turning back.
When i take out my rhymes,and your reading my lines,
you better think twice,cus i wont be nice,
No theres no saftey when Mc Drench is on the mic.

Ill burn you so hard you'll need some Aloe,
cus theres no place for me thats too shallow,
Im a G on the mic, and im guessing this you dislike,
but lets be fair your probably a dyke.

Im gunna wrap this up, and pop out a cup,
watch you squirm as try to reply, but face it,
im just too fly

stone cold heart harder then a steel chair
if he play's superman put em in a wheel chair
see wen we b getting hammered it's blam blam everywhere
when they be getting hammered it's beer cans everywhere
u don't wanna battle me keep your distance
it will be a mortality but no it's not mortal combat
you aint even near threat
put holes in this nigga like a fish net
im ballin your barley making minimum wage
your grill in my face cuz you got feminine ways
and for the record ur ratchet don't got shit to speak bout
for you we gonna put garbage niggas keep out.

 

[jiraiya lives]

here i go, kids need to be put in there place
wtf boy
you're a total waste of space
not needed, u don't matter
if you're the pitcher
then i'm the batter
ready hit everything u got
i'm king of this base
peasants being something there not

huh, you still havent learned
get the **** out, your of no concern
when will you listen
throwing my balls at your girl
is the only time im pitching

 

[Yashin]

stone cold heart harder then a steel chair
if he play's superman put em in a wheel chair
see wen we b getting hammered it's blam blam everywhere
when they be getting hammered it's beer cans everywhere
u don't wanna battle me keep your distance
it will be a mortality but no it's not mortal combat
you aint even near threat
put holes in this nigga like a fish net
im ballin your barley making minimum wage
your grill in my face cuz you got feminine ways
and for the record ur ratchet don't got shit to speak bout
for you we gonna put garbage niggas keep out.

Look kid, i dont like your swagger
since when did being racist make you a rapper?
:|

 

[Punk Hazard]

Seriously,you guys arnt black
and you better run cause theres no turning back.
When i take out my rhymes,and your reading my lines,
you better think twice,cus i wont be nice,
No theres no saftey when Mc Drench is on the mic.

Ill burn you so hard you'll need some Aloe,
cus theres no place for me thats too shallow,
Im a G on the mic, and im guessing this you dislike,
but lets be fair your probably a dyke.

Im gunna wrap this up, and pop out a cup,
watch you squirm as try to reply, but face it,
im just too fly

neither is he

 

[NaruAwesome]

look kid, i dont like your swagger
since when did being racist make you a rapper?
:|

sweet rhymes

 

[jiraiya lives]

Seriously,you guys arnt black
and you better run cause theres no turning back.
When i take out my rhymes,and your reading my lines,
you better think twice,cus i wont be nice,
No theres no saftey when Mc Drench is on the mic.

Ill burn you so hard you'll need some Aloe,
cus theres no place for me thats too shallow,
Im a G on the mic, and im guessing this you dislike,
but lets be fair your probably a dyke.

Im gunna wrap this up, and pop out a cup,
watch you squirm as try to reply, but face it,
im just too fly

First i am black
but what does color have to do with it
ive battled black, white, mexican, african, chinesse etc.. rappers
have you even heard of eminem

 

[NaruGoku]

Damn, I'm late to the party, but that's ok
i've been smokin-n-pokin these bitches holes all day
just livin life and havin fun and never acting meek
this party started today my party started last week
time flies when you're havin fun but when your flyin homie
time practically stops like in Itachi's Tsukiyomi


edit
yo, i don't wanna double post so i suppose i have to edit
luckily that don't mean censor if it did i'd just forget it
the freedom to express yourself with rhythm and flow
is as important as the wars against world hunger and woe
all of our basic rights shall be upheld is what we're told
while the Feds pick at our corpses like a carrion crow
they don't care they just play us, we're a F***in puppet show
that the goverment puts on to just uphold the status quo
f*****g pricks

 

[Expeditious]

Look kid, i dont like your swagger
since when did being racist make you a rapper?
:|

keep tools on deck, home depo
yeah i be on cameras operation repo
yes silly with the rhymes and silly with the hooks
stove on my waist nigga we cook
and i say ballin like aaron brooks



Yea smoking heavy kush
ruunin over hoes call me reggie bush
u say im being racist?
i put metal in ur mouth like braces
smoking weed by the cases
Jeremy Piven on u hoes
smoking aces.

 

[NaruGoku]

when i get goin on the mic i could be flowin forever
with my clever rhetoric that can seamlessly weave together
syntax and cemantics in an effortless endeavor
to create a master flow that is altogether fresher
than your average MC, what would the world be
without those who can spit harder than chewing tobacky?
i think that me and all the homies who have flooded this forum
are pure MC's with the right to say "f*** the haters" and floor 'em

 

[NaruGoku]

hey yo, I rhyme religiously but i spit viciously
think of Punisher "in the middle of little italy"
its a silly MC to challenge me, even a little
i make the most "ferocious" of them seem like they're broken and brittle
the harder they think they are, the more their dreams I bash
it's like im Ussain Bolt and they still challenge me to dash

if anyone comes back to thread or whatever, i'll be back real soon

 

[NaruAwesome]

hey guys, i'm back
who will win
NaruGoku, that's a fact
he's in the lead
killing the game
surpassing these rappers
there some lames
he might get the title
depends on how it go
keep on posting
so this thread can grow

 

[NaruAwesome]

lets rap guys