Rap Thread-Winner Wins Title

[jiraiya lives]

OKAY GUYS... HERE IS WHAT BACKS UP MY DAMN THEORY IF YOU DON'T BELIEVE ME NOW IDK WHATS UR PROBLEM!!!!!

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Im not even goin to try but

1 **** you
2 **** your theory
3 **** this
4 ive ****ed your bitch
5 **** your fish
6 suck a ****
7 get the **** out of hear
8 you a ****ing quire
10 you be ****ing deers
11 **** you ear
12 **** you ****ing shit
13 Y
14 O
15 U
16 S
16 U
18 C
19 K
20 BITCH

 

[NaruGoku]

Ant this is comin from the guy who earlier criticized me of using similes
yeah but keep going cause you sure didnt use any similes

Lol, these are battles bro, don't get upset. Call me on it with another verse. however, to be fair, i was saying ur similies were generic, i wasn't criticizing the actual use of similies because they are one of the backbones of good rap. they just have to be good, know what i mean? and honestly it's not like i think you're bad or anything, but it IS a battle and talking shit it part of what we do, so that's what i said. i mean people have said some F***ED up shit to me man, but you just blow it off and keep going. i didn't mean any disrespect either, that's just what came to me at the time

 

[NaruAwesome]

Im not even goin to try but

1 **** you
2 **** your theory
3 **** this
4 ive ****ed your bitch
5 **** your fish
6 suck a ****
7 get the **** out of hear
8 you a ****ing quire
10 you be ****ing deers
11 **** you ear
12 **** you ****ing shit
13 Y
14 O
15 U
16 S
16 U
18 C
19 K
20 BITCH

wow bro, nice , i put that guy in his place, thanks for doing the same

 

[jiraiya lives]

wow bro, nice , i put that guy in his place, thanks for doing the same

no problem at all

 

[NaruAwesome]

no problem at all

well lets continue
i put an order on ya ass
like a ****ing menu
french fries and a burger
call me the terminator
i'll be back
smoking weed, eating crack
dat shit wack
be above the influence
that's ma motto
ma cars park themselves
got dat shit auto
car insurance you say
yeah i got that
slapped you once
think twice b4 u slap back

 

[NaruGoku]

this is rap 101
lets do the basics
first of all you suck
bout time u face it
secondly you need even bars
learn iambic pentameter
and you need better rhymes
use words like diameter
basically use better words
and not the norm
don't rap against me
you'll wish you weren't born

i know iambic pentameter better than anybody here
can u even explain the difference between chaucer and shakespeare?
didn't think so, and you suggest i use words like "diameter"
what's wrong, couldn't find anything else to rhyme with pentameter?
get out of here with that shit, all ur words are generic
develop some vocab and come back when u can define esoteric.
you use weak rhymes and no metaphors at all
talkin shit about my last verse means to got a lotta gall
and no knowledge at all about what makes a good rap
so go ahead and talk your shit, it's all just ignorant crap

 

[Jazzy..]

LOL dude you suck you arent black

Dude are you freakin serious? You ignorant fool.
Alright, come on, grab the mic and let's duel.
Let me be honest, you don't amuse me at all
And by the end of my rap, you'll be begging for a draw.

I hope people like you stop with the ignorance.
You see joking and stereotypes are very distanced.
Black people aren't the only ones that can rap.
Now read the last line again, and memorize that fact.

 

[NaruAwesome]

i know iambic pentameter better than anybody here
can u even explain the difference between chaucer and shakespeare?
didn't think so, and you suggest i use words like "diameter"
what's wrong, couldn't find anything else to rhyme with pentameter?
get out of here with that shit, all ur words are generic
develop some vocab then come back when u can define esoteric.
you use weak rhymes and no metaphors at all
talkin shit about my last verse means to got a lotta gall
and no knowledge at all about what makes a good rap
so go ahead and talk your shit, it's all just ignorant crap

chaucer's ma homie
canterbury tales
shakespeare's ma dog
"only love will tell"
i know ma shit
u know yours
anglo-saxian tales
buy beowulf at stores
good rap comes from the soul
dig deep inside
heat it up like a stove
don't let the bars hide
imagine a beat
the pace and the time
then raise the bass
to create the ryhme

 

[Expeditious]

i know iambic pentameter better than anybody here
can u even explain the difference between chaucer and shakespeare?
didn't think so, and you suggest i use words like "diameter"
what's wrong, couldn't find anything else to rhyme with pentameter?
get out of here with that shit, all ur words are generic
develop some vocab then come back when u can define esoteric.
you use weak rhymes and no metaphors at all
talkin shit about my last verse means to got a lotta gall
and no knowledge at all about what makes a good rap
so go ahead and talk your shit, it's all just ignorant crap

flow 2 raw call it uncook meat
bitches and the money where i make the ends meet
Killin all yall niggas in ur sleep like freddie
keep a gun tuck so u know a nigga ready


check they like at Expeditious and they start to get dizzy
cuz im fly like a vampire just bit me
racing no relay
i spaz on the e way
and i gets busy like i never had three way
chicks tell me they love me and they saying it quick
im the future
im the only roaster laying with chicks
wake her up in the morning she say im not through with you
i just throw my hands up and let the **** do the do
who want it?

 

[NaruAwesome]

Dude are you freakin serious? You ignorant fool.
Alright, come on, grab the mic and let's duel.
Let me be honest, you don't amuse me at all
And by the end of my rap, you'll be begging for a draw.

I hope people like you stop with the ignorance.
You see joking and stereotypes are very distanced.
Black people aren't the only ones that can rap.
Now read the last line again, and memorize that fact.

hey, u know what
i like u girl
like micheal jackson
u rock ma world
+ rep to you
+rep to all
bitch i'm the grinch
ma heart aint that small
but that little girl sindy lu who
ain't never change me
cause u girl
is the only one i can see
u changed ma heart
3 times its size
i hope that u
think about it and realize

haha, that was nice, jk okay

 

[jiraiya lives]

well lets continue
i put an order on ya ass
like a ****ing menu
french fries and a burger
call me the terminator
i'll be back
smoking weed, eating crack
dat shit wack
be above the influence
that's ma motto
ma cars park themselves
got dat shit auto
car insurance you say
yeah i got that
slapped you once
think twice b4 u slap back

I see you still not done
this shit been going on for a day,
and you still havent won
Im ****ing babes
you bussin to porn
katrina wasnt shit
im 2 storms
fresher than a new born
my money will still be taller than you with your shoes on
i dont have to finish, ill be back in a minute...........................................................................................................................................
im back bitch
ill serve you like a snack bitch
sorry for the wait i was crappin
and i flushed you
even if i got gloves on i want touch you
even a blind bitch want **** you
yo raps are trash ball em up like a nuckle
im done with you back to the hustle

 

[NaruGoku]

chaucer's ma homie
canterbury tales
shakespeare's ma dog
"only love will tell"
i know ma shit
u know yours
anglo-saxian tales
buy beowulf at stores
good rap comes from the soul
dig deep inside
heat it up like a stove
don't let the bars hide
imagine a beat
the pace and the time
then raise the bass
to create the ryhme

lol, as a non-battle, i like most of what you said here. I totally love Chaucer, Shakespeare--what i meant by their difference is that they both use iambic pentameter but they use it in a different way--i've read Beowulf, i love the Greek and the American classics and olde english classics like Shakespeare and his rival Christopher Barlowe

 

[jiraiya lives]

Someone start i back up im tired

 

[Littlefinger.]

Well it's da classic
Flow sick, diabetic
Make you call up a medic, headache
Geddit? No forgeddit!
I make headlines like Drizzy on the front page of the New York Times
Bustin' §#!T like a nursery rhyme
Makin' niggas fly away sublime.
Buzz kill
Kill joy
Make a hole
Twist drill
Eat a hoe
Nice meal
Forever yours
Ace thrills!

 

[Expeditious]

Well it's da classic
Flow sick, diabetic
Make you call up a medic, headache
Geddit? No forgeddit!
I make headlines like Drizzy on the front page of the New York Times
Bustin' §#!T like a nursery rhyme
Makin' niggas fly away sublime.
Buzz kill
Kill joy
Make a hole
Twist drill
Eat a hoe
Nice meal
Forever yours
Ace thrills!

look ima young rebel
so i get in trouble
if i tell you to do something do it on the double
but a bullet in your cranium
Selling out crowds and stadiums
im just stating facts
wen im in the clubs you know im spending 5 racks
eat you wannabes rappers for a snack.
It's Christmas time so you know it's a wrap.

 

[Bright Master]

what the hell, what the hell
why are u so bad
like a tootsie roll,
only time will tell
once i'm finished with u
you'll be sorry
nigga i'm rich
got a triple platinum Ferrari
riding with girls
traveling the world
living life like it should be
yeah that's ma motto
you wanna live life
but you aint go see tomorrow
nigga you dead
but you ain't seeing it coming
killing people life the grim reaper
it over kiddo, got ya ass running

Yo... on the real

I look at niqqas like you, then tell them, kiss my ass, thats you
Cause not a 3rd word coming out your mouth, is true.
Haven't killed a single man in your life
And you know it
Ferrari? triplre platnum? its fake and you just showed it.
Thats how you feel, I understand,
But Lying your word, not a man.
Grow up one day, learn where I come from, and what Im coming at,
The day you touch sum hoes? is the day you get slapped.
My niqqas, vs your niggas? win or lose, we speak the truth.
But for u, things might get safer,
If you stayed better off, an internet gangster. stfu

 

[Littlefinger.]

look ima young rebel
so i get in trouble
if i tell you to do something do it on the double
but a bullet in your cranium
Selling out crowds and stadiums
im just stating facts
wen im in the clubs you know im spending 5 racks
eat you wannabes rappers for a snack.
It's Christmas time so you know it's a wrap.

You a young rebel
And you get into trouble
WTF nigga?
Well since you getting into trouble
Imma spank your ass double
Beat it up like Royal Rumble
Cut you open like a surgeon
Control you just push a button
Screw yo bitch like a lab rat
She luv ma cum like a fat cat
She beg for more like she Oliver's sister
I bet she's Olivera Twister
Cuz she squirt whenever I twist her
Mister
Expenditure
You wanna be me in the future
So I tell ya
Don't get closer
Cuz you gonna get burned, churned and stunned
Like a kiddy who experimented on daddy's Whiskey.

 

[Ashflura]

You a young rebel
And you get into trouble
WTF nigga?
Well since you getting into trouble
Imma spank your ass double
Beat it up like Royal Rumble
Cut you open like a surgeon
Control you just push a button
Screw yo bitch like a lab rat
She luv ma cum like a fat cat
She beg for more like she Oliver's sister
I bet she's Olivera Twister
Cuz she squirt whenever I twist her
Mister
Expenditure
You wanna be me in the future
So I tell ya
Don't get closer
Cuz you gonna get burned, churned and stunned
Like a kiddy who experimented on daddy's Whiskey.

Shoot me up!
Hose you down,
step up on the pedastool
your gonna need some benidrill
headaches, cramps
like some women on her
stamps. Tramps!
Anyone with a soul of respect
will be stuck on deck
Dont expect-
your gonna get-
something you never
even had!

 

[Littlefinger.]

Shoot me up!
Hose you down,
step up on the pedastool
your gonna need some benidrill
headaches, cramps
like some women on her
stamps. Tramps!
Anyone with a soul of respect
will be stuck on deck
Dont expect-
your gonna get-
something you never
even had!

Where's yo momma!
I think she abandoned her little daughter
Little hussy tryna get all bossy?
Well sorry, I ain't gonna suck yo ****y
Is that what you came for?
Well get lost!
Bitch please!
We both know you wanna ride me.
That's why you spent all night tryna PM me
Let's be discreet before I expose more of yo dirty secrets!

 

[Ashflura]

Where's yo momma!
I think she abandoned her little daughter
Little hussy tryna get all bossy?
Well sorry, I ain't gonna suck yo ****y
Is that what you came for?
Well get lost!
Bitch please!
We both know you wanna ride me.
That's why you spent all night tryna PM me
Let's be discreet before I expose more of yo dirty secrets!

Wow wow wow
little homeboy thinks he's
got somethin' over me.
Watch me fly! Watch you flee!
Stingin' harder than Mundeen!
Little boy gettin' too cocky
Cook your guts like teriyaki
Dont mind me,
As I watch you beg and plea
For some mercy!