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Bright Master

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Yall really cant call yallself rhymin,
i hear it all the time n
I could eat yall whole game up
call it naruto vs ramen
Who you think I look like, you cant come at my shit
Im chillin in the crib,
Might as well be every corner,
Im broke like a joke
Barley eatin in morning
But I gtta stay real,
yall brothers gotta chill,
not one day of yya'll life have you payed an honest bill,
So dont put money in this equation
But i'll know ill make it one day
While yall nigggas linkjin park and faint
Ima make my one shot
Like pau gasol in the paint
my mom told me i'll go far
and ill listen to those words like jesus said it all...
bars.....
U_U
 

Littlefinger.

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Well what do we have here, a kid with hopes and dreams
Loves his momma so much he never wanna hear her scream
So now he's got an ambition right on the edge like a seam
Right from the day he saw me on the neighbour's TV screen
Get it right
Sit up tight
I saw the light
Before I broke the night
So don't lose sight
I be right there before you make your flight.
 

NaruGoku

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nigga your not good lol, so don't criticize. My flow sound nothing like Wayne's lol whatever tho.

Check how can i get married?
if Benjamin my best man
even in my 4th year of high school im still a fresh man
haters do the side talk im on to the next fam
enough of the tiny cham unplug the webcam
catch me in the cut
lighting up the bud
piddy pack is the only time you had some diamonds in the club
keep that cash on me credits cards i don't like them
in the mall Dora The Explorer ''No" ''Swiping"

lol dude don't take offense, it's battle-rap, why u mad? and what i meant was the line "i'm in the game EA" that's exactly the kind of thing wayne says in his flows.
 

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Yall really cant call yallself rhymin,
i hear it all the time n
I could eat yall whole game up
call it naruto vs ramen
Who you think I look like, you cant come at my shit
Im chillin in the crib,
Might as well be every corner,
Im broke like a joke
Barley eatin in morning
But I gtta stay real,
yall brothers gotta chill,
not one day of yya'll life have you payed an honest bill,
So dont put money in this equation
But i'll know ill make it one day
While yall nigggas linkjin park and faint
Ima make my one shot
Like pau gasol in the paint
my mom told me i'll go far
and ill listen to those words like jesus said it all...
bars.....
U_U

look i b that pretty mutha****a Philly what im reppin
If u aint ****ing with us u can get the stepping
Looks like i need to teach u cuz u didn't learn your lesson
Battle me and you still aint dead that's a blessing
steadying talk shit looks like ima pull out the weapon

all your lyrics r all jokes
claiming shit u don't got
u make bad moves like a Philly cop
I ain't gonna stop till i hear that semi pop
i b steady mobbin
roll up to ya hood yea we steady Robbin
i was on the block tryna to catch a lick
pulled up to club with a hundered ****ing bricks
I **** with hoes and bad chicks
But wen shit gets critical ima put a bullet inside every fcking individual
 

jiraiya lives

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look i b that pretty mutha****a Philly what im reppin
If u aint ****ing with us u can get the stepping
Looks like i need to teach u cuz u didn't learn your lesson
Battle me and you still aint dead that's a blessing
steadying talk shit looks like ima pull out the weapon

all your lyrics r all jokes
claiming shit u don't got
u make bad moves like a Philly cop
I ain't gonna stop till i hear that semi pop
i b steady mobbin
roll up to ya hood yea we steady Robbin
i was on the block tryna to catch a lick
pulled up to club with a hundered ****ing bricks
I **** with hoes and bad chicks
But wen shit gets critical ima put a bullet inside every fcking individual

that first verse was tooo predictable
 

NaruGoku

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these motha****a's are scary so i don't even get it
when they run up on me with a gun and i don't even sweat it
this new year's i made a resolution:
ur garbage so i'ma rid the game of pollution
with the lyrical skills to give 'em fear and the chills
until their sick and they spill, retching like they OD'd on some beer and some pills
in a cypher their soft and let their slow flow linger
for me the crowd throws up their hands like they swallowed their fingers
i can get in your dreams like Freddie do, not kiddin' you
and even if i stuttered i would still sh-sh-shit on you

this wasn't a battle aimed at anyone, just a generic freestyle-type verse
 
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OKAY GUYS... HERE IS WHAT BACKS UP MY DAMN THEORY IF YOU DON'T BELIEVE ME NOW IDK WHATS UR PROBLEM!!!!!
 

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these motha****a's are scary so i don't even get it
when they run up on me with a gun and i don't even sweat it
this new year's i made a resolution:
ur garbage so i'ma rid the game of pollution
with the lyrical skills to give 'em fear and the chills
until their sick and they spill, retching like they OD'd on some beer and some pills
in a cypher their soft and let their slow flow linger
for me the crowd throws up their hands like they swallowed their fingers
i can get in your dreams like Freddie do, not kidding you
and even if i stuttered i would still sh-sh-shit on you

this wasn't a battle aimed at anyone, just a generic freestyle-type verse

the battle just began
so u better watch ya back
you can't keep up with me bro
you too damn fat
you can't handle the heat
so just stay out the kitchen
stay down like gravity
slow down like friction
boy, i just pulled science on ya ass
i'm bout to be all over u
like a mother****ing rash
too good to catch
calling me bugs bunny
too great to be
cause ya life funny
 

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these motha****a's are scary so i don't even get it
when they run up on me with a gun and i don't even sweat it
this new year's i made a resolution:
ur garbage so i'ma rid the game of pollution
with the lyrical skills to give 'em fear and the chills
until their sick and they spill, retching like they OD'd on some beer and some pills
in a cypher their soft and let their slow flow linger
for me the crowd throws up their hands like they swallowed their fingers
i can get in your dreams like Freddie do, not kidding you
and even if i stuttered i would still sh-sh-shit on you

this wasn't a battle aimed at anyone, just a generic freestyle-type verse

Ant this is comin from the guy who earlier criticized me of using similes
yeah but keep going cause you sure didnt use any similes
 

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OKAY GUYS... HERE IS WHAT BACKS UP MY DAMN THEORY IF YOU DON'T BELIEVE ME NOW IDK WHATS UR PROBLEM!!!!!

i don't care about ya theory
you just the fire
adding the fuel ta ma fiery
if ya ass good
then come at me bro
calling me lame
i'm go at u toe to toe
tired of this shit
ya ass w-w-wack
u mad bro
ma nb boys got ma back
 

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i don't care about ya theory
you just the fire
adding the fuel ta ma fiery
if ya ass good
then come at me bro
calling me lame
i'm go at u toe to toe
tired of this shit
ya ass w-w-wack
u mad bro
ma nb boys got ma back

this kid this kid
he gave me brain
wasn't that good
so i called him lame
took his ass out
for dinner and a movie
came back and he tried
to give me mushy *****
im like damn cuz'
what you tryna do
i dont love you
or your nasty dodo
draws!
Tryna send me a signal?
Nawh man im not
joinin dat lingo
you straight up *****
so give me head
i get bread nigga
you straight up sad
you bad you mad nigga
just get glad because
in the end you just
a plastic bag!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 

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Ant this is comin from the guy who earlier criticized me of using similes
yeah but keep going cause you sure didnt use any similes

hey bro let battle
i'm getting kinda bored
let's handle this shit
ya raps kinda sore
but lets get serious
cause it game over
holy shit, you're delirious
unlucky like a 3 leaf clover
looking like some shit
i'll find in my toilet
looking like some bitch
but let's go, i'm for it
 

AJisRaw

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hey bro let battle
i'm getting kinda bored
let's handle this shit
ya raps kinda sore
but lets get serious
cause it game over
holy shit, you're delirious
unlucky like a 3 leaf clover
looking like some shit
i'll find in my toilet
looking like some bitch
but let's go, i'm for it

Dis me and i'll dis you back
you shit man just like yo mama rack
You was Sittin on my **** the other day
I didn't say shit you needed it hey
Today i saw you, yo mom was so fine
tomorrow I might **** that bitch is all mine!
 

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this kid this kid
he gave me brain
wasn't that good
so i called him lame
took his ass out
for dinner and a movie
came back and he tried
to give me mushy *****
im like damn cuz'
what you tryna do
i dont love you
or your nasty dodo
draws!
Tryna send me a signal?
Nawh man im not
joinin dat lingo
you straight up *****
so give me head
i get bread nigga
you straight up sad
you bad you mad nigga
just get glad because
in the end you just
a plastic bag!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

what the hell, what the hell
why are u so bad
like a tootsie roll,
only time will tell
once i'm finished with u
you'll be sorry
nigga i'm rich
got a triple platinum Ferrari
riding with girls
traveling the world
living life like it should be
yeah that's ma motto
you wanna live life
but you aint go see tomorrow
nigga you dead
but you ain't seeing it coming
killing people life the grim reaper
it over kiddo, got ya ass running
 

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Dis me and i'll dis you back
you shit man just like yo mama rack
You was Sittin on my **** the other day
I didn't say shit you needed it hey
Today i saw you, yo mom was so fine
tomorrow I might **** that bitch is all mine!

okay sonny, let me tell u
how u were born
i'm was banging ya mama
got that shit ripped and torn
up in there like
mac on cheese
you fuked ma mama
bitch please
i fuked ya girl
up, down, side ta side
in any direction
one moment please
let me make my correction
she was on me
wanting more and more
like you and drug injection
 

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the battle just began
so u better watch ya back
you can't keep up with me bro
you too damn fat
you can't handle the heat
so just stay out the kitchen
stay down like gravity
slow down like friction
boy, i just pulled science on ya ass
i'm bout to be all over u
like a mother****ing rash
too good to catch
calling me bugs bunny
too great to be
cause ya life funny

the battle just begun??? bitch it been started, get to the back of the line
Ive tried to stay away from your disney channel rhymes
the battle just begun??? when did you realise,
the battle just bugun??? you still must be high,
I love the heat meet me in hells kitchen
I got a F in science class, so i wouldnt know much about gravity and friction
i melt rappers i spit battery liquid
get with the business
you buy your raps from me you just a client
looking into the eye of the tyrant
now you scared of the giant
you stay in the nest when the rest of the birds are flying
im not even tryin,
i dont have to
ill eat you like some cashews

this wasnt meant for you at first but i thought is was funny that you said the battle just begun while we've been battling for the past day and you started the thread int he first place
 
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NaruGoku

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the battle just began
so u better watch ya back
you can't keep up with me bro
you too damn fat
you can't handle the heat
so just stay out the kitchen
stay down like gravity
slow down like friction
boy, i just pulled science on ya ass
i'm bout to be all over u
like a mother****ing rash
too good to catch
calling me bugs bunny
too great to be
cause ya life funny

ur right about one thing, i'm phat as hell
and handle the heat? you don't know what heat is!
police put the pressure on, but they can't do shit
ur the one who can't handle the heat that i'm up against
Talk about sciene? i drop science like clumsly professors in auditoriums
and stretch your body out like a motha****in accordian
bitches say i'm a teddy bear though i beat haters with a bat
i'll leave you lookin interracial, half blue and half black
and while ur at work, i'll give your bitch a sloppy d***
i got a hard drive while you, you got a floppy disk
plus you're flows are wack and it's bringing u hardships
while i'm bringing more funk than Bootsy Collins armpits
 

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the battle just begun??? bitch it been started, get to the back of the line
Ive tried to stay away from your disney channel rhymes
the battle just begun??? when did you realise,
the battle just bugun??? you still must be high,
I love the heat meet me in hells kitchen
I got a F in science class, so i wouldnt know much about gravity and friction
i melt rappers i spit battery liquid
get with the business
you buy your raps from me you just a client
looking into the eye of the tyrant
now you scared of the giant
you stay in the nest when the rest of the birds are flying
im not even tryin,
i dont have to
ill eat you like some cashews

this wasnt meant for you at first but i thought is was funny that you said the battle just begun while we've been battling for the past day and you started the thread int he first place

i know bro, i was saying that i enter and was killing the game

wait let me repeat
i'm killing the game
call me jordan
got that glory and fame
but i don't play ball
just raps and make ma lyrics
i'm saying these words
but you still can't hear it
let me speak clearly
ya ass no match
taking it back 200 year
destroying these laws and acts
legislations and allegations
nigga ya ass late
the train been left the station
i win and that fate
 

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ur right about one thing, i'm phat as hell
and handle the heat? you don't know what heat is!
police put the pressure on, but they can't do shit
ur the one who can't handle the heat that i'm up against
Talk about sciene? i drop science like clumsly professors in auditoriums
and stretch your body out like a motha****in accordian
bitches say i'm a teddy bear though i beat haters with a bat
i'll leave you lookin interracial, half blue and half black
and while ur at work, i'll give your bitch a sloppy d***
i got a hard drive while you, you got a floppy disk
plus you're flows are wack and it's bringing u hardships
while i'm bringing more funk than Bootsy Collins armpits

this is rap 101
lets do the basics
first of all you suck
bout time u face it
secondly you need even bars
learn iambic pentameter
and you need better rhymes
use words like diameter
basically use better words
and not the norm
don't rap against me
you'll wish you weren't born
 
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