Rap Battle

[Lytes]

Rulez
No flipping, biting or lifting
8 bars, 16lines
Criteria:
-Opener -1pt
-Punchline -3pt
-Pun -2pt
-Metaphor -2pt
-Rhymes -2pt
-Flow/Continuity/Rhythm -1pt
-Humor -1pt
-Closer -1pt
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This rap is Mako vs Priest, but basically, its all about you, a man who's gone be dissed, of course you'll be pissedbut I dont give a f*ck, my arse you can kiss ( Just Warming Up)

 

[Priest]

Drops in. Post dawg!

 

[Lytes]

This rap is Mako vs Priest|, but basically, its all about you, a man who's gone be dissed|, of course you'll be pissed|but I dont give a f*ck, my arse you can kiss|my raps so cool so dope|your brain so slow| you couldnt cope ( Had to use something that rhymes), all you can do is hope, I've got the fame|, all you are is just an orange named b*tch, no matter the colour, you freaks are the same| yeah, you gone be slained.

 

[Priest]

Black Verse


Yea, mako's gonna diss a priest.
Realy? Its not what I see.
Could've been better if you lick his feet
or eat his shit. Guess shit is real.
Shit's gonna pierce you, aint gonna die another day.
Its same result if you try another day.
You famous? Okay maybe after this match.
For instance, mako is a weak tard,
a wee lass had his weak ass,
grind like Priest was a gizzard.

You can't match up loser.
Run after me, you won't catch up loser.
I'm jes freestyling looser.
Behind every succesful man, there is a woman.
You are the woman loser?
When they see reds on your head, you aint brunette.
Its blood cos I'll tick tock gunshot, bullet!
At the end, they'll say Priest is wicked
cos Mako came tall but left as a midget...




You drop short verse, so have I...

Lets see them voters...

 

[NarutoB]

Sorry to interrupt but what do you mean by "No flipping, biting or lifting"? XD