rap battle

[willie0828]

Now let me get this cemented in your eardrum
conquer all fear none!
My swag be rank number one
u call urself sharingan
so6p created the moon
well i created the sun
sorry i cant carry on
got school today
i'll be back son
but as for now im done

Yo call me the rebuttal king..
All your rap will get back at you and smack at your chin.
Yo told that yo swag is number 1.
Yea i believe that but only in your own world son..

(peace yo)

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[shottastarinc99]

so wens the battle gonna begin make it next week or following week cause i hav holidays so i can be on all day

its gonna begin friday 28th and ends monday at 12 am

 

[Victorelder2k13]

Wow Willie looks like somebody didn't pass pre-k English
Be a good boy and eat your Spinach
I killed you off already why even try
I put your raps in a casket and kissed it good bye
I already won no tie
I shut you up like guy
Who is shy
Your rap style rotting
Your such a huge fail they wouldn't even give you a job at Burgerking
Sorry man but you are so sad
With no swag
Like a poor connection ps3 your raps lagg
Don't be mad
Cause you fit in with the Syndrome center
All you do is copy your raps like as if it is a printer
Hey Willie before you blink
Is my words to big for you
Does it make your brain sink
Willing to bet that your brain size is inches
Wash his head clean as if it was dishes
Hey your raps are dead are the sleeping with the fishes
I want to call you sir but you seem more like a miss

 

[shottastarinc99]

hmmmmmm

 

[ITACHIUCHIA101]

ITACHIUCHIA101
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3 days

 

[willie0828]

Wow Willie looks like somebody didn't pass pre-k English
Be a good boy and eat your Spinach
I killed you off already why even try
I put your raps in a casket and kissed it good bye
I already won no tie
I shut you up like guy
Who is shy
Your rap style rotting
Your such a huge fail they wouldn't even give you a job at Burgerking
Sorry man but you are so sad
With no swag
Like a poor connection ps3 your raps lagg
Don't be mad
Cause you fit in with the Syndrome center
All you do is copy your raps like as if it is a printer
Hey Willie before you blink
Is my words to big for you
Does it make your brain sink
Willing to bet that your brain size is inches
Wash his head clean as if it was dishes
Hey your raps are dead are the sleeping with the fishes
I want to call you sir but you seem more like a miss

Yo my rap is natural, it's all pure..
In measurement of intelligence yours is just a miniature..
Yo man, in my lines don't get insecure..
Coz your idiocy has no cure..

Yea I'll eat my spinach and become Popeye..
I'll kick yo a$$, go fly away so bye-bye..
Eat yo foul words and yo foul sh!t pie..
Yo dead already, go to hell, yo rabbi..

Yo my raps are solid..
And yours are just liquid..
Yours is water only and has no additive..
Cry hard now coz i'll insult dawg using all the adjectives..

Yo you don't know rebuttal raps..
Its returning all yo words that $ucks..
Yo face dirty dawg its full of chicken fox..

Your career is pathetic..
No work, no chick, no money and your pure lunatic..
I saw your brain its size is just microscopic..

Yar thoughts are so foolish..
Every word is so childish..
Level your self and your mind please..
Rap battling with you is no piss..

(Peace yo yo!)

 

[Venus]

This isn't a bright idea, people can just go bite lyrics, put em' together and post it up. You should record yourself, upload it to youtube, then post it and make it that you have to state your NB username for proof. Either voice or video, atleast that way it'll be a battle.

 

[ITACHIUCHIA101]

This isn't a bright idea, people can just go bite lyrics, put em' together and post it up. You should record yourself, upload it to youtube, then post it and make it that you have to state your NB username for proof. Either voice or video, atleast that way it'll be a battle.

i try really hard to not rip off songz

 

[wridacule]

This isn't a bright idea, people can just go bite lyrics, put em' together and post it up. You should record yourself, upload it to youtube, then post it and make it that you have to state your NB username for proof. Either voice or video, atleast that way it'll be a battle.

I kind of see what you're saying, but any real mc could just come up with lyrics the are relevant to the person they're battling and the situation. If someone wants to bite rhymes i waste on a message board more power to 'em. my rhymes are mine and mine alone. Only king arthur can wield excalibur so.....:scorps:

 

[willie0828]

Rap battling in real is either with no beat (freestyle/punch lines, pure insults and pure rhymes) or with beat (that is pure freestyle)

 

[willie0828]

I kind of see what you're saying, but any real mc could just come up with lyrics the are relevant to the person they're battling and the situation. If someone wants to bite rhymes i waste on a message board more power to 'em. my rhymes are mine and mine alone. Only kind arthur can wield excalibur so.....:scorps:

this^

Thumbs up

 

[willie0828]

The thread is so silent..
Where are my foes are they retired?
Or can't take me on coz they're retarded..

(peace yo! peace on earth)

 

[SpaceSage]

Rap battling in real is either with no beat (freestyle/punch lines, pure insults and pure rhymes) or with beat (that is pure freestyle)

as if ur raps make sense
i mean no offence
but its true
all im doing is looking out for you

cho chika sho....... bro

 

[willie0828]

as if ur raps make sense
i mean no offence
but its true
all im doing is looking out for you

cho chika sho....... bro

Well dawg, I am not affected..
In the real rap contest you are the disrespected..
In this world you'll be eliminated.
Why you look so uncomfortable are you irritated..
No brains, you're not educated..
My rap and rhymes are elevated..
Coz you know I am dedicated.
And I cannot be imitated.
Rebuttals yow, my words you can't take it..
I'll throw you this like a bomb Sh!t..
Are you crying now? you can't fake it.
Come on, these insults you can't take it.

(Chill and Peace)

 

[Venus]

Well dawg, I aint not affected..
In the real rap contest you are the disrespected..
In this world you'll be eliminated.
Why you look so uncomfortable are you irritated..
No brains, you're not educated..
My rap and rhymes are elevated..
Coz you know I am dedicated.
And I cannot be imitated.
Rebuttals yow, my words you can't take it..
I'll throw you this like a bomb Sh!t..
Are you crying now? you can't fake it.
Come on, these insults you can't take it.

(Chill and Peace)

You think yo lyrics hot
they aint nun but shit
I'll chew you up take a spit
remove the rest with a tooth pick
spit something tighter
your rhymes fake like you
like your glue on grills
and sticker type tattoos.
Just give up cause homie you can't faze this.
I rip the wicked, the fresh and the god damn latest.
So stop talking, typing, making fake shit that aint rhyming
Learn to rhyme, learn to bomb, then fix yo god damn timing.

(Just thought I'd have a go) >.>

 

[SpaceSage]

You think yo lyrics hot
they aint nun but shit
I'll chew you up take a spit
remove the rest with a tooth pick
spit something tighter
your rhymes fake like you
like your glue on grills
and sticker type tattoos.
Just give up cause homie you can't faze this.
I rip the wicked, the fresh and the god damn latest.
So stop talking, typing, making fake shit that aint rhyming
Learn to rhyme, learn to bomb, then fix yo god damn timing.

(Just thought I'd have a go) >.>

Yo raps aight but u lack in flow
U get offended son come at me bro
My rhymes aint tight in fact they hot
just wait till friday and see wat u got

 

[willie0828]

You think yo lyrics hot
they aint nun but shit
I'll chew you up take a spit
remove the rest with a tooth pick
spit something tighter
your rhymes fake like you
like your glue on grills
and sticker type tattoos.
Just give up cause homie you can't faze this.
I rip the wicked, the fresh and the god damn latest.
So stop talking, typing, making fake shit that aint rhyming
Learn to rhyme, learn to bomb, then fix yo god damn timing.

(Just thought I'd have a go) >.>

Monkey D Dragon is a d0rk..
He used to pick his nose with a fork..
I don't want to offend you with insults..
But damn you really look like pork..

You rap was very light..
Well your future is not bright..
Coz i'll stab you with a knife..
Coz yo a midget, I hate yo height.

You chew your spit, that's idiotic..
Your face can't be romantic..
Rebuttals of mine, is gigantic..
You will sink, like the titanic...

Your rap contains non-sense..
I'll tie you up in the fence..
Then i'll throw darts at you, don't be tense.
Your face is like past tense..

Your ancient and your old..
You life is a paper, I will fold..
Your lovelife is very cold..
This next line is a BOLD

(Peace yarrr)

 

[willie0828]

Yo raps aight but u lack in flow
U get offended son come at me bro
My rhymes aint tight in fact they hot
just wait till friday and see wat u got

Be ready yo with all of your lines..
Coz the next thing i'll do is to break yo spine..
hehehe Yo ready dawg? This is my time..
You'll be lose, kneel and call me the PRIME..

(peace bro)

 

[Venus]

Yo raps aight but u lack in flow
U get offended son come at me bro
My rhymes aint tight in fact they hot
just wait till friday and see wat u got

Monkey D Dragon is a d0rk..
He used to pick his nose with a fork..
I don't want to offend you with insults..
But damn you really look like pork..

You rap was very light..
Well your future is not bright..
Coz i'll stab you with a knife..
Coz yo a midget, I hate yo height.

You chew your spit, that's idiotic..
Your face can't be romantic..
Rebuttals of mine, is gigantic..
You will sink, like the titanic...

Your rap contains non-sense..
I'll tie you up in the fence..
Then i'll throw darts at you, don't be tense.
Your face is like past tense..

Your ancient and your old..
You life is a paper, I will fold..
Your lovelife is very cold..
This next line is a BOLD

(Peace yarrr)

I didn't pay attention to nothin ya'll said.
Yo rips seem lifeless, no flow, they dead.
Come at you? Nigga come at me.
I battle 2 on 1 like ma fuhkin g.
Yo u think ya'll bawllaz, playaz in da game.
Na lil homies, ya'll just victims to ma fame.

Aint nothing greater then me im the best there ever was.
Both ya'll two are just a failed lost cause.
Stop, look and listen as my rhymes str8 glistenin.
Brighter than the sun, the stars and da solar system.
Why did I stop to take a look at yo fake replies.
I didn't even bother readin yo shit, I ask why.

Next is the last, the conclusion then its over.
I spit better rhymes usually drunk, I'm never sober
even when I'm sleeping wit my lids locked shut.
my voice spits riddles an rhymes, tearin' shit up.
I'll leave you both with something to think about.
Stay home and listen to rap instead of creepin' and sneekin' out.
Cause to put it str8 and simple witout hurtin ya'll egos
Yo needa learn to rap, check yo wack ass free flows.

 

[willie0828]

I didn't pay attention to nothin ya'll said.
Yo rips seem lifeless, no flow, they dead.
Come at you? Nigga come at me.
I battle 2 on 1 like ma fuhkin g.
Yo u think ya'll bawllaz, playaz in da game.
Na lil homies, ya'll just victims to ma fame.

Aint nothing greater then me im the best there ever was.
Both ya'll two are just a failed lost cause.
Stop, look and listen as my rhymes str8 glistenin.
Brighter than the sun, the stars and da solar system.
Why did I stop to take a look at yo fake replies.
I didn't even bother readin yo shit, I ask why.

Next is the last, the conclusion then its over.
I spit better rhymes usually drunk, I'm never sober
even when I'm sleeping wit my lids locked shut.
my voice spits riddles an rhymes, tearin' shit up.
I'll leave you both with something to think about.
Stay home and listen to rap instead of creepin' and sneekin' out.
Cause to put it str8 and simple witout hurtin ya'll egos
Yo needa learn to rap, check yo wack ass free flows.

You talk to much.. Just like a gay..
Your just a trash.. GET OUT OF MY WAY..
If i were you.. Just kneel and pray..
Hope you die.. This is your last day..

Your mouth so stink.. Use Listerin..
I'll dunk yo face.. In a Sh!t of ice cream..
Yo can't be baller.. You have no Team..
If I were you.. Go play with Imps..

You're rap just sucks.. they are are not cool..
If it's like stars and the sun.. Mine is frickin Blackhole..

We don't care if you are drunk..
Why do we care about you midget punk..
Your mouth stinks just like a skunk..
This poor kid who watch youporn and usually wank..

I smack you down and now you are planking..
You're favorite hobby is nose picking..
Now you hopeless.. You do the thinking..
To fight me.. You life will be in reaping..

And last line, yo not fame..
Actually, your just a lame..

^_^-V peace out