Looks very nice (4:3 ratio, would prefer widescreen, but the original eps were 4:3, so it's fine\) and I like the action-editing style, but not a fan of the song (Personal preference, but Linkin Park...Man) and the lyrics didn't go with anything AT ALL. Pardon my french, but it's like your standard shitty generic amv, but a very small smidge better. Sorry, but it's not that good.
My best advice to seriously work on lyrics matching with what is happening on the screen. Tell a story. Examples of videos I find good: