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Illyasviel

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Thank you:)

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Alright. I'd like you to perform the last jutsu you learned with as much detail as possible, if you please.
 

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Sure
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1.*I start gathering and focusing my raiton chakra in my body,and once I have gathered enough of it I start channeling the previously gathered raiton chakra into my hands.And once I have done this I slam my hands to the ground and release the previously gathered and channeled raiton chakra in the form of a lightning surge that travels over the ground.*
Using
2.I would use it when the oponent vision is scured by something for an example the D rank earth technique and the lightning will punch through it and shock the oponent.Or when he jumped and now is landing I would send the surge to the point where he is landing.
Defending
3.If I'm landing and he sends the surge I would use the wind stream technique to blow myself away from it.Or when he just fires it at me and I'm standing I might use idk Gale Palm or something like that.
Advantages
-Can rip through D and C rank earth techniques
-Hard to dodge if opponent is landing
-Rather quick to perform and trravels fast.
Dissadvantages
-Leaves you open for attack
-Water techniques will shock you
-Short range
-Noticeable due to lightning and slamming your hands
 

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O_O Wow, that was excellent. Keep up that format, if you would, for the rest of them. You don't need so may advantages/disadvantages, however; just one or as many as you want is needed.
So, your next jutsu is here:
(Raiton: Raijingu Sanda) - Lightning Style: Raging Thunder
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: The user hits the opponent with an electric field shield that covers the users body.
  • Focus raiton chakra throughout your body
  • Unleash the lightning around your body like a shell, creating a lightning barrier
  • Focus your lightning at one point to deflect this kunai *Throws a kunai at you*
 

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Yay:silly:
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*I start gathering and focusing my raiton chakra in my body.And once I have gathered enough raiton chakra I start channeling the previously gathered and focused raiton chakra through out my whole body.And once I'm done with this I release the previously channeled raiton chakra around my body like a shell so it becomes a sort of lightning berrier.Then I anticipate around what point will the kunai you have thrown at me hit me so I focus the lightning around that point the most so when your kunai hits me it deflects.*
Using
It is used either for defence to deflect some kunai and other projectiles,perhaps stop some weapons and some weaker earth technique.Also it can be used for attack if you hit the opponent with the electric field surounding you.
Advantages:
-It is quick to perform.
-Doesn't take much chakra.
Dissadvantages:
-Short Range
-D rank wind can defend you against it.
Defending:
I would use Rumbling wind wall or something like that,gale palm to blow him away.
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Excellent. I love it! :D
(Raiton: Sandaa Saaburu) - Lightning Style: Thunder Saber
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range:Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: Hits opponent with an electric field shield that explodes and can blow back the enemy.
  • Focus your raiton chakra around your body
  • Create a field of lightning around yourself
  • Focus this field on one point and release all of your chakra in that direction, creating an "explosion" of energy in that direction
 

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Yay:D
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*I start gathering and focusing my raiton chakra inside my body and once I have gathered enough of it I start channeling the previously gathered and focused raiton chakra all over my body and once I'm done channeling the raiton chakra I release it around my body so it forms an electric field around me.I then focus this field at one point and release all the chakra to that point creating and electric explosion in that direction.
Using.
It is used either for defence to deflect some kunai and other projectiles,perhaps stop some weapons and some weaker earth technique.Also it can be used for attack if you hit the opponent with the electric field surounding you.
Advantages:
-It is quick to perform.
-Doesn't take much chakra.
Dissadvantages:
-Short Range
-D rank wind can defend you against it.
Defending
D rank wind wall still defeats it :D
 

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Good job.
(Ration: Ikazuchi Kashou) - Lightning Release: Thunder Burn
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user fires a wave of lightning bolts at the opponent.
  • Focus your raiton chakra into your hands
  • Collect sparks of electricity in your palms
  • Release the electricity in a wave outwards, directed in a single direction
 

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Good job.

  • Focus your raiton chakra into your hands
  • Collect sparks of electricity in your palms
  • Release the electricity in a wave outwards, directed in a single direction

Performing
1.*I start gathering and focusing my raiton chakra in my body,and once I have gathered enough of the raiton I start channeling the previously gathered and focused raiton chakra into my hands.And once I have done this I collect the sparks of electricty in my hands and the I release the electricity in a wave outwards,directed in a single direction.*
Using
2.I would use it when the oponent vision is scured by something for an example the D rank earth technique and the lightning will punch through it and shock the oponent.It can also counter some earth techniques.
Defending
3. When he just fires it at me and I'm standing I might use idk Gale Palm or something like that.
Advantages
-Can rip through D and C rank earth techniques
-Hard to dodge if opponent is landing
-Rather quick to perform and trravels fast.
Dissadvantages
-Leaves you open for attack
-Water techniques will shock you
-Short range
-Noticeable due to lightning.
 

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Good job.
(Raiton no Jutsu) - Lightning Release Technique
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra to create small bolts of lightning to attack their target.
  • Focus your raiton chakra around your hand
  • Focus the energy to create a field of static bolts
  • Focus the bolts forwards in a series of bolts, making an attack
 

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1.*I then I start gathering and focusing my raiton chakra through out my body once I have gathered enough of it I start chanelling the previously gathered and focused raiton chakra through my body into my hands once I have chanelled it I release the gathered raiton chakra through my hands and when I release as it is beeing released it forms small static bolts that are aimed towards your clone.*
2.Advantages:It can be used in atack and defence it doesn't require much chakra and I guess it can hurt and paaralase the oponent.
Dissadvantages:It is short range,it isn't that powerfull and if when you have the lighning in your hand and somebody covers you with water you will electrify yourself I guess.
3.I would use some D rank wind technique or gale palm something like that.
 

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Alright, now the fun part. I want you to defeat my clone using at least two techniques you've just learned. Think of it as a test to see if you actually know how to use these jutsu now.
 

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As I see your clone I start gathering and focusing my raiton chakra in my body,and once I have gathered enough of the raiton I start channeling the previously gathered and focused raiton chakra into my hands.And once I have done this I collect the sparks of electricty in my hands and the I release the electricity in a wave outwards,directed in a single direction.|(Ration: Ikazuchi Kashou) - Lightning Release: Thunder Burn|As the wave of bolts is coming towards your clones I jump into the air to my left and spin in the air while I'm spinning I then I start gathering and focusing my raiton chakra through out my body once I have gathered enough of it I start chanelling the previously gathered and focused raiton chakra through my body into my hands once I have chanelled it I release the gathered raiton chakra through my hands and when I release as it is beeing released it forms small static bolts that are aimed towards your clone.(Raiton no Jutsu) - Lightning Release Techniqueat the time of the releasing this bolts the previous wave should hit you.I then as I'm in the air and going in a kind of semi circle towards you at the time the second attack should hit you I fall on your back but before I fall I start gathering and focusing my raiton chakra in my body.And once I have gathered enough raiton chakra I start channeling the previously gathered and focused raiton chakra through out my whole body.And once I'm done with this I release the previously channeled raiton chakra around my body like a shell so it becomes a sort of lightning berrier.(Raiton: Raijingu Sanda) - Lightning Style: Raging Thunderand with the lightning around me I hit the clone and paralise it.
 

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Good job. Onto the C-ranks.
(Raiton: Jibashi) - Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30 (+5 if used in conjunction with a water jutsu)
Description: This jutsu allows the user to create a wave of electricity from the user's hands. This jutsu can vary in power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. It is ideal to use in conjunction with a water jutsu.
  • Focus raiton chakra into your hands
  • Focus the chakra into one spot (your palms)
  • Force the chakra outwards in a single direction through the air
 

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*I start gathering and focusing my raiton chakra and once I have gathered enough of it I start channeling the previously gathered and focused raiton chakra towards my hands.And once I am done channeling it I focus the chakra into a single spot-my palms and then I release the previously channeled raiton chakra from my hands in a single direction through the air towards your clone.*
Advantages:
-It can rip through up to B rank earth.
-It is quick to perform and travels fast.
-Nice in combinations with water.
Dissadvantages:
-D rank wind can stop it.
-Only short ranged.
-Isn't that powerfull.
Defending
I would use some C rank wind technique to counter it.
 

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Good job.
(Raiton: Raikyu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Ball
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: By gathering chakra in their hands, the user can create a ball of electrical energy and launch it at the enemy
  • Gather raiton chakra into your hands
  • Focus on shape-manipulation to create a sphere
  • Condense your chakra energy to create lightning bolts flying around in the sphere-shape, creating a ball of electrical energy
  • Focus chakra into the ball facing you, and release that chakra to propel the ball forwards
 

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Performing
*I start gathering and focusing my raiton chakra and once I have gathered enough of it I start channeling the previously gathered and focused raiton chakra towards my hands.And once I am done channeling it I use shape manipulation to create a sphere and then by focusing the previously channeled raiton chakra I create lightning bolts that fly around in sphere shape and like that I make a ball of electricity.And then I release the previously made electricity sphere from my hands through the air towards your clone.*
Advantages:
-It can rip through up to B rank earth.
-It is quick to perform and travels fast.
-Mid ranged
Dissadvantages:
-D rank wind can stop it.
-Not long ranged.
-Isn't that powerfull.
Defending
I would use some C rank wind technique to counter it.
 

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Good job with that.
(Raiton: Raigeki no Yoroi) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Armour
Rank: C
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user surrounds themselves with electricity. The intense electric field protects them by electrocuting anyone who comes into contact with it, but only works for one attack.
  • Focus raiton chakra around yourself
  • Condense the chakra into bolts, giving yourself and armor of lightning
  • *Throws a kunai at you* Focus your lightning to stop the kunai
Yes, this is pretty much a D-rank jutsu. No, i dont' know why we even bother with the lower rank one. :\
 

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I don't see any diference either appart from the rank :/

Performing
*I start gathering and focusing my raiton chakra in my body.And once I have gathered enough raiton chakra I start channeling the previously gathered and focused raiton chakra through out my whole body.And once I'm done with this I release the previously channeled raiton chakra around my body I condense it into bolts so it forms some lightning shield around me.Then I anticipate around what point will the kunai you have thrown at me hit me so I focus the lightning around that point the most so when your kunai hits me it deflects.*
Using
It is used either for defence to deflect some kunai and other projectiles,perhaps stop some weapons and some weaker earth technique.Also it can be used for attack if you hit the opponent with the electric field surounding you.
Advantages:
-It is quick to perform.
-Can stop some B rank earth.
Dissadvantages:
-Short Range
-D rank wind can defend you against it.
Defending:
I would use:Gale palm or something to blow him away and break the shield.
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Good job.
(Raiton: Iwa Nadare) - Lightning Style: Stone Avalanche
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Descripton: By forming hand seals Snake β†’ Upside down Tiger β†’ Hands clapped together and running up a cliff face, the user causes stone and rock above him to become dislodged and rain down past him onto his opponents below by releasing a wave of electrical energy. However, this is extremely location-based and needs to be done uphill of a mountain for it to work
This is almost an earth jutsu, but it says lightning...
  • Run up the mountain *Makes a mountain*
  • Weave the handseals
  • Focus lightning chakra into your feet
  • Focus that chakra uphill into the mountain ahead of you
  • Use your chakra to cause eruptions in the earth, creating boulders which dislodge from the mountain and fly past you
 
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