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( Raiton: Raigeki) - Lightning Release: Electric Attack
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: After performing the required hand seals Tiger โ†’ Snake โ†’ Dog the user creates an electric current from their hand that can hit multiple individuals at the same time. Furthermore, it extends into incredible distances and can avoid obstacles.


First Zexion performs the Tiger โ†’ Snake โ†’ Dog hand-sings, then begins changing his chakra nature into Raiton. Once completed he then begins gathering chakra in only one of his hands. Once there he releases it into the form of lightning and begins blasting it at a nearby tree, focusing hard so it even swerves around a boulder
 

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aight pretty basic.
I expect heavy replies with detail. Follow this template. By the way do you want to RP through the training?

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[B]Strong points[/B] One sentence or more for each point showing the strength and explaining why.

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[B]Weak points[/B]- One sentence or more for each point showing the weakness and explaining why.

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[B]Combinations-strategies[/B] (I expect 2-4 sentences)

[B]Ways to counter this technique[/B]  (I expect 2-4 sentences)

[B]Questions[/B]
Shall we continue?
 

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Yes that is where you "insert info" like the strong and weak points.
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Lancer looks up and down, head to toe.
Sooo it seems as if you are gonna learn from me now my young classmate ?
Shall we get things going?


(Raiton: Jibashi) - Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30 (+5 if used in conjunction with a water jutsu)
Description: This jutsu allows the user to create a wave of electricity from the user's hands. This jutsu can vary in power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. It is ideal to use in conjunction with a water jutsu.

Okay now its a simple technique and it vary from being a projectile or a streaming technique, depends on how you use it. The user will send lightning into their hands and release it towards an opponent sending a wave of electricity. You can send a short stream making it a projectile or continue to send it to make it a streaming tech. You can use it with a water technique. Its fast to perform and simple. Its rather straightforward though making evasion easy.



(Raiton: Raikyu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Ball
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: By gathering chakra in their hands, the user can create a ball of electrical energy and launch it at the enemy.

Very much similar like the previous one, the user will gather lightning on the palm of their hand, condense it into a electrical ball of energy. The user will then proceed to throw it towards the opponent. It travels very fast to an opponent, its a projectile and its fast to make.



(Raiton: Raigeki no Yoroi) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Armour
Rank: C
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user surrounds themselves with electricity. The intense electric field protects them by electrocuting anyone who comes into contact with it, but only works for one attack.

The user will send lightning all over their body creating a armor. It can protect against projectiles and simple attacks. It easy and fast to perform also if you get get into contact with an opponent it sends a electric charge hurting the opponent. Only for one attack then its released. Your also a walking target for water attacks.

 

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(Raiton: Jibashi) - Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder

Strong points
  • Can change to fit whatever the caster's needs are. Has a high killing potency. Can rip through most Doton defenses with ease (of the appropriate ranks)
Weak points- One sentence or more for each point showing the weakness and explaining why.

  • Does not cover a very large radius. Can be countered with almost all wind style jutsu.
Combinations-strategies (I expect 2-4 sentences)

As said in the description it is the ideal technique to combine with suiton, as it would make the water much more deadly, however it could also be combined with an earth technique, that blocks the opponents sight to you and then using it to rip through the doton surprising the enemy.

Ways to counter this technique (I expect 2-4 sentences)

Mere wind styles would suffice, as this jutsu's radius is not that large so must would be able to encompass it rather easily, Not to mention it , Using a suiton that acivates in a sort of wave motion would work, as it would send the electrified water crashing down on the opponent.

Questions None.


(Raiton: Raikyu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Ball

Strong points One sentence or more for each point showing the strength and explaining why.

  • Has a pretty large range and can be used to catch the opponent off guard when you throw it, Quickly Accessible and a fast jutsu provides for a deadly C Rank.
Weak points- One sentence or more for each point showing the weakness and explaining why.

  • Can easily be engulfed due to small size, avoided easily as its a linear jutsu.
Combinations-strategies I would combine this with a jutsu that grabs the opponents eye such as a large katon and what not, as their attention would be fully on the flame not noticing the speeding ball of electricity coming directly at them.

Ways to counter this technique Wind bullets is a rather effective way, as it would also send an attack traveling towards the opponent, along with a fire ball technique of equal measure.

Questions None


(Raiton: Raigeki no Yoroi) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Armour
Strong points One sentence or more for each point showing the strength and explaining why.

  • Is a quick defense from any non-suiton and fuuton attack, can also be used to increase the potency of CQC ( i believe)
Weak points- One sentence or more for each point showing the weakness and explaining why.

  • Ext. Vulnerable to water and wind style attacks, only lasts one jutsu so quick succesion of attacks fired off by your opponent = Don't use this jutsu.
Combinations-strategies Combining this jutsu with the lightning sword jutsu would provide a deadly combo, as it would give a sort of Sword and Shield combo that is quite deadly when in close range situations.

Ways to counter this technique Not much too say for this one, either fire rapid succesion of attacks rendering the shield useless or simply fire one powerful suiton or fuuton technique would do the trick

Questions None
 

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We are switching to this template man. More peeps like it. Though I expect 3+ sentences for each section.

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[B]Perform the technique:[/B]
[B]Creative uses/strengths:[/B]
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(Raiton: Iwa Nadare) - Lightning Style: Stone Avalanche
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Descripton: By forming hand seals Snake ? Upside down Tiger ? Hands clapped together when near a cliff , the user causes stone and rock to become dislodged and rain down on anyone below it by releasing a wave of electrical energy which weakens the rock and makes it fall as it crumbles. However, this is extremely location-based and needs to be done uphill of a mountain for it to work.

Okay with 2 hand seals and running up a cliff with their hands clapped together, the user will send lightning towards the cliff dislodging the rocks in the clidd and causing the rocks to begin raining down on the opponent. Now this technique is very location based. Also you must have your hands clapped together while running up so you can continue to release the lightning.


(Raiton: Shuurai Rappa no Jutsu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Horn Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will raise their hand infront of them like a sword and it will begin glowing a pale yellow before releasing bolts of lightning in the shapt of a horn that spread outwards allowing it to attack multiple targets.

Underused technique that deserves some credit. The user will raise their hands in front of them and release lightning towards their hand creating a glowing pale yellow color in their hands then quickly release bolts of lightning shaped of a horn. Its spreads outwards while traveling allowing you to attack multiple targets. Fast and easy to perform. Projectile as well pretty darn quick.



( Raiton: Inazuma ken Fudou ) - Lightning Release: Lightning Blades Levitation
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short โ€“ Mid
Chakra cost: 15 (-5 per turn)
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will channel their lightning chakra into their sword to increase its cutting capabilities, and then levitate it in front of them. They will then multiply the sword creating two extra physical copies which are then all manipulated to spin rapidly and are controlled to fly towards and cut through the opponent/s through hand gestures. While controlling the weapons, the user cannot mold chakra for other techniques and needs to keep focus.

Okay you need a sword out, the user will channel lightning into the sword increasing its destructive abilites. They will then manipulate the chakra in the sword to have it levitate in front of them. The using shape manipulating multiply the sword creating another two physical copies made of lightning. They then spin rapidly which finally a user will send towards the opponent cutting them badly if hit. Okay this is a slow performance technique as well as you must remain concentrated to execute perfectly. They move at normal speed as well.


( Raiton: Denki Railansho ) - Lightning Release: Electric Discharge Palm
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short โ€“ Mid (Short range for the discharge)
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will manipulate their lightning chakra in their dominant hand generating electrical bolts of lightning around their forearm and they then jump into the air. The user will then land slamming their palm onto the ground causing the electrical energy to become discharged sending out bolts of lightning into the ground and around them up to 5 meters.

The user will gather a large sum of lightning chakra into their hand and forearm, then they will jump high into the air. When the reach the ground they will forcefully slam their palm on the ground sending a electrical energy through the ground up to a 5 meter radius, you can also send it forward towards an opponent. Its easy but your vulnerable in the air. Also right when you release the lightning in the ground you can fo straight to another jutsu.
 

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(Raiton: Iwa Nadare) - Lightning Style: Stone Avalanche
Perform the technique: Zexion performs the necessary handseals snake and tiger then claps his hands together and sends an excessive amount of chakra to the nearby cliff, he then manipulates it too send rocks tumbling down from the highest reaches of said cliff.
Creative uses/strengths: Can be used to cause diversion which would allow uses of other jutsu on the offensive side,can interrupt casting of other jutsu due to loudness and eye catching aspect of the jutsu.
Drawbacks/counters: Really location based. Is easily avoided or countered by most if not all shinobi. Rocks could also affect myself in such a situation.

(Raiton: Shuurai Rappa no Jutsu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Horn Technique
Perform the technique: Zexion raises his hand, then sends raiton chakra through his arm and into his hand which he then manipulates to form the shape of multiple horns which he then sends flying at the nearest training dummy.
Creative uses/strengths:This technique is useful to deliver the final blow against an opponent who is not expecting it, or bust through enemy doton while delivering still an offensive punch simultaneously.
Drawbacks/counters:While the projectiles are large in number the size is average at best. Could easily be countered with a mere fuuton due to the in-versatile aspect of the jutsu.

( Raiton: Inazuma ken Fudou ) - Lightning Release: Lightning Blades Levitation
Perform the technique:Zexion takes out his sword and sends multiple charges of raiton chakra into it, then manipulates it to force his sword to begin levitating, once its in the air he focuses hard to create multiple copies of the sword which increase the killing potential exponentially.
Creative uses/strengths: Can help very much so in CQC situations, Can be used with the clone jutsu to create high-killing effective clones.
Drawbacks/counters:Is slow to use, needs materials and relies heavily on knowledge of other jutsu's all in all not a very dependable jutsu.

( Raiton: Denki Railansho ) - Lightning Release: Electric Discharge Palm
Perform the technique: Zexion Charges his raiton chakra into his arm then activates it to cover his arm in an electrical current which he then uses to obliterate the nearest training dummy
Creative uses/strengths: Is incredibly useful to negate Doton that rely on the ground as a transfer point, and increase CQC abilities greatly
Drawbacks/counters: Is no good when in a long range scenario and does not increase your speed at all so the opponent can counter normally
 

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Done with the C-Ranks so sudden O_O
Okay so I want you to make a list 1-5 (1 being the highest) of all the jutsus of lightning in this rank. Explain to me why as well.
Just got my internet back a few days ago my man, and didn't feel like I could do this on my phone,

Anyways

I'll first list the order in which I believe they should be in.

1.Lightning horn jutsu
2.Elctromagnetic murder
3.Lightning Ball Jutsu
4.Lightning Armor
5.Stone Avalanche Jutsu


I believe the Lightning Horn Jutsu should be first ranked due to the reason that it has the most versatile and effective attack power when it comes to killing, I've personally used it on multiple occasions in battle., It also is very easy to create combo's for.

The electromagnetic Murder utsu should be 2nd due to the fact that It probably has the greatest area of effect out of all the offensive attacks in the bunch, along with the fact it can cancel out Fuutons on defense as well. Making it a reliable and deadly attack.

Lightning Ball Jutsu would come third because it Is a quick yet deadly jutsu. It takes no handseals to create the ball of lightning and can be thrown at a long range in almost an instant, being able to catch the opponent off guard is a handy thing to do.

Lightning armor comes 4th because it is merely a Defensive jutsu, however it still has its perks. Allowing the user to be defended from most all equal ranked attacks while still giving him the option to attack and enhance their CQC skills.

Stone avalanche Jutsu comes last due to the fact that it can hardly ever be used and even if it can, its a move that most likely isn't catching anyone by surprise, however its good to waste one of the opponents jutsu.
 
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Very good.

(Raiton: Raiton no Heki ) โ€“ Lightning Release: Lightning Release Wall
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary, Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user manipulates their chakra while doing the Ox hand seal and then releases it in front of him whilst holding their hands out. By doing this, the user generates a wall of lightning energy that can defend against certain techniques. The user can use this defence to shock enemy targets who attempt close range combat and deliver massive shocks to anything that comes in contact with it.

A basic defensive technique, after one hand seal the user by placing their hands forward will channel raiton chakra towards their hands and the user will release a wall of lightning. The wall of lightning will cover the opponents entire position from top to bottom. It is made exactly short range of the user as well and the wall being made of lightning means the user can see through it fine to notice the opponent. Also its great to use if an opponent is trying to get in to close for a taijutsu battle, for if they are hit by the wall they will be shocked badly and pushed back by the shocks impact. The wall can easily be overpowered.
 
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