Raiton with Naffy san.

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One /three advantages ( no obvious ones , be creative ):
  • 1.Its range
  • 2.Paralyses the opponent
  • 3.Can split into multiple forms
One / three disadvantages ( no obvious ones , be creative):

  • 1.Requires a lot of chakra
  • 2.Only in a straight line making it easier to dodge
  • 3.Only until mid range
How you would use it in battle :In close range or mid,to paralyse the opponent for more attacks
How you would counter it :pretty much dodge it,block it or get out of range
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can ):I first start by gathering my Raiton chakra and making the necessary seals for Chidori.After doing so,I shape the Chidori into a ten metre blade,using shape manipulation.I then strike the clone that is 10 meters away.
 

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Good job. ^_^

(Raiton: Rairyu no Tatsumaki) - Lightning Release: Thunder Dragon Tornado
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user forms a whirling vortex of wind and electricity around themselves. The vortex will take on the form of a dragon’s head and will cover the area in front of them. Even if the attack doesn't directly connect with his foe, the lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a nearby target.

Make a vortex out of wind around yourself then channel your raiton chakra into it, the vortex should form into a dragons head and cover the area in front of you, the lighting can jump out of the vortex and my nearby clone.

-Creates clone.-

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One /three advantages ( no obvious ones , be creative ):
  • 1.Hard to dodge
  • 2.Can hit an enemy that is near it
  • 3.Hard to counter
One / three disadvantages ( no obvious ones , be creative):
  • 1.Not long range
  • 2.Weak against a strong defence
  • 3.
How you would use it in battle :In close,so that the opponent can be caught in the huge vortex and not be able to dodge it
How you would counter it :Maybe with an S rank Fuuton jutsu
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can ):I start by making a huge vortex out of wind,that surrounds me.I then channel some Raiton chakra into the vortex.The vortex then takes the shape of huge dragons head,and covers the area infront of me.The lighting the jumps out of the vortex and hits the nearby clone.
 

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Okay good.

(Chidori Kireme) - One thousand Birds Breaker
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will deliver several punches and kicks to the opponent sending them into the air where the user will then strike a Chidori into their back.

Go over to my clone, deliver many punches and kicks to the clone, then send him into the air, then make another chidori and use it to strike him in the back with it.
 

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>_> School started xD

One/three advantages (no obvious ones, be creative):
  • 1.A quick close range attack
  • 2.Does not give the opponent the chance to react
  • 3.Very deadly
One/three disadvantages (no obvious ones, be creative):
  • 1.Only in short range
  • 2.Must know Chidori beforehand
  • 3.Uses a lot of chakra
How you would use it in battle:In close range,as a quick move against a defenceless enemy.
How you would counter it:Get out of range or use a defensive jutsu to block it.
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can):I first move forward to close range of the clone.I then start the technique by hitting the clone with my right fist in the face and then followed by my right leg to his hip.After doing so,I then give him an upper cut,sending him upwards,I then kick him higher up so that his back is facing me.As he moves through the air,I immediately perform the necessary handseals for Chidori and strike him in his back with it.
 

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Great.

(Chidori Tokkan) - One Thousand Birds Rush
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will first strike the target with a slash from their sword hitting them into the air and then as they begin to land the user will drive them into the ground with a Chidori.

Grab out your sword, then go over to my clone and slash him with your sword, hitting him up into the air, then as they begin to land, you'll dive my clone into the ground, by making another chidori.
 

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One /three advantages ( no obvious ones , be creative ):
  • 1.Quick but powerful
  • 2.Kills the opponent o_O
  • 3.Hard to avoid when it has been iniated
One / three disadvantages ( no obvious ones , be creative):
  • 1.Needs a sword
  • 2.Need to Chidori
  • 3.Many Chidori handseals
How you would use it in battle :Quick close range attack,that practically kills your opponent if struck with the Chidori in the heart
How you would counter it :Get out of range or deflect or counter the sword attack,stopping the whole sequence
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can ):I first take out my sword and quickly dash towards the clone.When in close proximity to the clone,I slash the the clone the sword,sending him upwards.As he travels through the air,I perform the Chidori handseals,and strike the clone as he descends towards the ground.I drive him straight into the ground,causing rubble to fly from underneath the clone as he skids through the ground.
 

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(Raiton: Raikō Shishi Rendan) - Lightning Release: Lightning Flash Lion Combo
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user knocks the enemy into the air with thier Sword and jumps at them quickly after. They then proceeds to punch and kick the opponent while still in mid-air. After their combo, the user ducks to the floor, just underneath the opponent. As the opponent reaches him, the user strikes the falling opponent in the back with his Chidori, and then lets the helpless victim falls off.

Knock my clone into the air using your sword, then jump at them quickly after, then kick and punch my clone, while still in mid-air. From there duck to floor just underneath my clone, make a chidori and strike in the back with it.

-Creates clone.-
 

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One /three advantages ( no obvious ones , be creative ):
  • 1.Quick and powerful
  • 2.Hard to block
  • 3.Renders the opponent useless,if sequence has started
One / three disadvantages ( no obvious ones , be creative):
  • 1.Only used in close range
  • 2.Need to know Chidori >_>
  • 3.Leaves you open if your attack is countered
How you would use it in battle :In close range,for a quick and easy finish
How you would counter it :Using a clone as a counter or getting out of range
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can ):I first use my sword to hit the clone up into the air,I then jump right after he ascends.In mid air,I start hitting and punching the clone.I then duck beneath him,and start forming the handseals for Chidori.I then strike the clone from there in the back.
 

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Awesome, and good.

( Raiton: Raiun ) - Lightning Release: Thundercloud
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user generates a cloud above the battlefield kneaded with their chakra and then cause a series of lightning bolts to rain down upon the battlefield causing severe damage.

Okay, send your raiton chakra up into the clouds doing this you'll create above the area, then release from the cloud a series of lighting bolts and aim them for my clone.

-Creates clone.-
 

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One /three advantages ( no obvious ones , be creative ):
  • 1.Powerful
  • 2.Does not require handseals to be made
  • 3.Causes severe damage to opponent if struck
One / three disadvantages ( no obvious ones , be creative):
  • 1.Not directed to opponent,so could be easy to dodge
  • 2.Requires a lot of chakra
  • 3.Only till mid range
How you would use it in battle :If I want to keep my distance against a strong opponent,and be able to do an attack that reaches the opponent.
How you would counter it :Get out of range ._.
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can ):I start by sending some Raiton chakra into the clouds above me.I then release bolts of lightning from the cIouds then direct the lightning towards the clone.
 

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Okay.

( Raiton: Denko Sekka ) – Lightning Release: Lightning Mineralization
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user creates several large electrical balls of energy spread out around them and then causes electrical currents of lightning that spreads out on a vast area shocking any enemy target in the vicinity by connecting with the orbs.

Gather your ration chakra then release it as several large electrical balls, and spread them out around you, then cause electrical currents that spread out over a vast area, shocking my clone.

-Creates clone.-
 

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One /three advantages ( no obvious ones , be creative ):
  • 1.360 range
  • 2.Powerful
  • 3.No handseals required
One / three disadvantages ( no obvious ones , be creative):
  • 1.Only till mid range
  • 2.User cant move while using this jutsu
  • 3.Requires a lot of chakra
How you would use it in battle :Against a group of opponents,as it can surround the user,makinp the range 360 degrees
How you would counter it :Negate it with a strong Raiton jutsu or use a flying summon
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can ):I first gather my Raiton chakra,I then release several lightning balls with which,I surround myself.I then cause an electrical current to surge in this range,around me.This shocks the clone
 

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( Raiton Chidori: Raijin no sakebi ) - Lightning Release One Thousand Chirping Birds: Cry of the Thundergod
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points; 60
Description: The user will attack the opponent with a series of slashes with their sword hitting the opponent into the air where they then finish them off by drilling them back into the ground with a Chidori.

Hit my clone with a series of slashes with your sword, hitting him up into the air, then when the clone is coming back down, make a chidori and use that to drill them back into the ground.
 

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One /three advantages ( no obvious ones , be creative ):
  • 1.Great close range attack
  • 2.Hard to evade
  • 3.In the end,the attack kills you
One / three disadvantages ( no obvious ones , be creative):
  • 1.Requires a sword
  • 2.Requires knowledge of Chidori,once again >_>
  • 3.Could be countered easily
How you would use it in battle :Against a weak close range fighter who has no means to defend.
How you would counter it :Deflect the attack with my own sword or taijutsu
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can ):I start with hitting your clone with a series of slashes from my sword,hitting him up into the air.As the clone descends,I make the required handseals and perform a Chidori.I then drill the clone into the ground with great speed.
 

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Okay good.

(Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descripton: The user after performing the hand seal snake emits lightning in the shape of a spear from their hands whilst kakuzu lightning mask emits it from its mouth, which then pierces the enemy. Its destructive power is great enough to even pierce through rock; meaning it has a high killing potential. The user can increase the number of spears to attack multiple enemies. This, coupled with the sheer speed of the lightning, makes it a difficult technique to evade. This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.

Perform the snake seal, send a lot of raiton chakra towards your hand, then from there emit a spear of lighting from your hands, the power of this spear is so great it can tear though rock. Aim the spear at my clone.

-Create clone-

There is an A-rank jutsu we will be coming back too.
 

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One /three advantages ( no obvious ones , be creative ):
  • 1.Very powerful
  • 2.Very fast,so hard to evade
  • 3.Can be used more than once after each other.
One / three disadvantages ( no obvious ones , be creative):
  • 1.Uses a lot of chakra
  • 2.Only till mid range
  • 3.Can still miss,as it does not follow the opponent.
How you would use it in battle :At short range,to quickly strike the opponent.
How you would counter it :Get out of range,use summon or negate it with other Raiton technique.
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can ):I start by performing the Snake handseal.I then send a whole lot of Raiton chakra to my hand,which I then form into a spear.I then strike the clone by throwing it with the lightning spear.
 

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Great.

(Raiton: Kirin) - Lightning Release: Kirin
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: After using a fire jutsu to heat the atmosphere and create thunderclouds in the sky, the user will use Chidori to take control of the lightning above. They can then make the lightning strike an opponent in the blink of an eye.
Note: Can only be avoided with time/space techniques or otherwise absolute defenses.
Note: Can only be used once per battle.
Note: In the turn before the use of Kirin, the user must have used at least a B-Rank, Long Range Fire (Katon) technique directed at the sky.
Note: User needs to post Chidori, meaning that in the turn Kirin is used, the user spends 2 moves.

Okay, send a B-rank long ranged fire tech into the sky to make thunder clouds, then make a chidori and then use it to control the lighting from the sky then make the lighting strike my clone, the strike will be in a blink of an eye.
 

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One /three advantages ( no obvious ones , be creative ):
  • 1.Extremely powerful
  • 2.Cannot be dodged
  • 3.Extremely fast
One / three disadvantages ( no obvious ones , be creative):
  • 1.Can only be used once
  • 2.Takes time to prepare
  • 3.Uses two turns before used
How you would use it in battle : Only when you have time to prepare,because it is unavoidable
How you would counter it :S/T techniques ._.
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can ):I start by performing a B ranked Katon jutsu.I send it into air to create thunderclouds.I then make the necessary handseals and I perform Chidori.With the Chidori active,I control the lightning by sending it towards the clone.I then scream " Kirin!!!! " as the lightning,in a flash,destroys the clone.
 
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(Raiton: Chidori Jinrai) – Lightning Release: 1000 birds ThunderClap.
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: After Performing chidori in mid air the user releases all of the lightning chakra within the chidori to create a Giant Thunder bolt that can be shot at the opponent.

Perform the chidori in mid-air. Then release all the lighting chakra within the chidori to create a giant thunderbolt, that you will send towards my clone.

-Create clone.-
 
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