[Raiton] Raiton with Gobi

Kirikoe

Active member
Legendary
Joined
Oct 26, 2011
Messages
10,733
Kin
1,465💸
Kumi
1,955💴
Trait Points
0⚔️
Awards
Kirikoe performs the required hand-seals and moulds his chakra into that of lightning, after which he begins to discharge a large amount of lightning from his body which by using shape manipulation shapes the electricity being discharge into several destructive disks of lightning which he shoots at the dummy with incredible speed.


Kirikoe performs the required hand-seals Ox → Rabbit → Monkey → Dragon → Rat → Bird → Ox → Snake → Dog → Tiger → Monkey, after which he focuses chakra into the palm of his hand shaping it into a small fiery like orb before adding nature manipulation into the mix, giving it an intense lightning coating which causes it to give off the sound of chirping birds, Kirikoe dashes towards the dummy and with a thrust of his hand he strikes right through the dummy, chidori penetrating right through the dummy.


Kirikoe focuses lightning all throughout his body, once ready he surges the technique all throughout himself, letting off a discharge of unfocused lightning around him, which unfocused it lacks power however the properties the technique has are great, Kirikoe proceeds to channel the unfocused chakra through a medium, in this case he focused the lightning through his arm, into his palm and then into the earth below.
 

Gobi Gobletsson

Active member
Legendary
Joined
Oct 27, 2010
Messages
19,790
Kin
473💸
Kumi
7,961💴
Trait Points
0⚔️
Goodie. Let's move onzie.

(Raiton: Chidori Senbon) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Needle
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user reshapes the Chidori in their hand into the form of countless senbon which are shot with a simple hand movement towards the target. The senbons are extremely precise and have the same numbing and paralyzing effects as Chidori, carrying enormous speed. Because the technique requires no handseals and is done with simple hand movements, its extremely hard to avoid while in short range and quite dangerous to counter due to the precision attacks it can be used to perform.

(Raiton: Sanda Appu) – Lightning Release: Thunder Up
Rank: A
Type: Offence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user concentrates a lot of lightning chakra into their hand, compressing it into a ball of lightning energy. The user can then hurl it at the enemy or trust it forward in a melee attack. Once the ball hits the target, it expands into a massive lightning explosion.

(Raiton: Jūrokuchū Shibari) – Lightning Release: Sixteen-Pillar Bind
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short – Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing the needed hand seals Rat → Monkey → Horse → Tiger the user will create a even more powerful version of Lightning Release: Four Pillar Bind. Using this technique, the user creates sixteen giant pillars by using his lightning chakra to shape the ground into a multitude of pillars, which then form a giant cubic oven to trap the enemy. It is often used after Earth Release: Mud Fall to cover the enemy target in mud and then follow up with using Fire release: Firing Biscuit, creating flames in the oven to roast and harden the mud, immobilizing the enemy.
 

Kirikoe

Active member
Legendary
Joined
Oct 26, 2011
Messages
10,733
Kin
1,465💸
Kumi
1,955💴
Trait Points
0⚔️
Awards
Kirikoe performs the chidori once again however this time reshapes the chidori in his hand into the form of several thousand needles which fire from his hand towards the wooden dummy, the needles hold a numbing effect and paralysis effect similar to chidori and carry an incredible speed.


Kirikoe concentrates lightning chakra into his hand, compressing the lightning he forms the lightning into a compressed ball of energy, hurling the ball of condensed energy towards the training dummy as it hits the ball of lightning expands into a giant lightning explosion.


Kirikoe performs the required hand-seals after which he creates the four pillar bind technique empowering it to another level, Kirikoe creates 16 giant pillars using his lightning chakra to shape the ground into a variety of pillars which form a large cubic oven to trap the wooden dummy inside.
 

Gobi Gobletsson

Active member
Legendary
Joined
Oct 27, 2010
Messages
19,790
Kin
473💸
Kumi
7,961💴
Trait Points
0⚔️
Superb.

(Raiton: Chidori Eiso) - Lightning Release Chidori Sharp Spear
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user increases the range of their Chidori by using form manipulation to extend it into a blade up to 10 meters in length. This blade is capable of splitting into multiple additional blades upon contact with an enemy, drastically increasing the number of wounds it can inflict. Like other Chidori-related techniques, this jutsu will numb its target upon contact but unlike others, seems to focus more on having a cutting power, like a katana, than a piercing one. Because of its cutting abilities, it often seems to manifest a certain "solidity"; a tangible aspect.

(Raiton: Rairyu no Tatsumaki) - Lightning Release: Thunder Dragon Tornado
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user forms a whirling vortex of electricity around themselves. The vortex will take on the form of a dragon’s head and will grow to then shoot forward and cover the area in front of them. Even if the attack doesn't directly connect with his foe, the lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a nearby target.

( Raiton: Denpō Sekka ) – Lightning Release: Telegram Flash
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After doing the Rabbit → Rat → Horse → Ram hand seals, the user will slam his hand on the ground and release into it a massive amounts of lightning chakra which will then pool beneath his opponent before releasing itself into a gigantic column of lightning which shocks anything caught above it. The technique can affect a bigger or smaller area depending on the users will.
 

Kirikoe

Active member
Legendary
Joined
Oct 26, 2011
Messages
10,733
Kin
1,465💸
Kumi
1,955💴
Trait Points
0⚔️
Awards
Kirikoe whilst still holding the Chidori in his hands using shape manipulation he extends the chidori into a blade reaching up to about 10 metres, as the blade reaches towards the dummy Kirikoe splits the blade into 3 piercing the dummy.


Kirikoe focuses his lightning chakra around himself initiating a whirling vortex of lightning around himself, using shape manipulation he turns the lightning vortex into a dragons head which grows and shoots forward covering the area in front of him.


After performing the required hand-seals Kirikoe slams his hand onto the ground, releasing into it a large amount of lightning chakra which will then pool beneath the dummy, releasing a giant column of lightning which shocks the dummy caught in its wake.
 

Gobi Gobletsson

Active member
Legendary
Joined
Oct 27, 2010
Messages
19,790
Kin
473💸
Kumi
7,961💴
Trait Points
0⚔️
Superb.

(Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descripton: The user, after performing the Snake hand seal, emits lightning in the shape of a spear from their hands or mouth which then pierces the enemy. Kakuzu, the original user, shoots the technique from his Lightning mask's mouth. Its destructive power is great enough to even pierce through rock; meaning it has a high killing potential. The user can increase the number of spears to attack multiple enemies by branching the main spear. This, coupled with the sheer speed of the lightning, makes it a difficult technique to evade. This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.

(Raiton: Raikiri Nibai Raikou Jishin) – Lightning Release: Lightning Blade Double Lightning Quake
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user performs (Raiton: Raikiri) - Lightning Release: Lightning Blade and splits it in two, covering both hands in Lightning. He will then perform a melee attack at the enemy, unleashing the powerful lightning into him.

(Raiton: Chidori Jinrai) – Lightning Release: 1000 birds ThunderClap.
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user will cover his hands in with lightning, essentially performing a (Raiton: Chidori) Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds in each hand. Clapping his hands together, the user can unleash that massive amount of lightning chakra into the form of a powerful Thunderbolt directed at the target. The technique is best used if the user has a height advantage in relation to the target. The thunderbolt is strong enough to leave a giant crater and cannot be used while being in Short-range of the target, at the risk of being hit also.

Super duper. Try this out.
 

Kirikoe

Active member
Legendary
Joined
Oct 26, 2011
Messages
10,733
Kin
1,465💸
Kumi
1,955💴
Trait Points
0⚔️
Awards
Kirikoe performs the snake hand-seal, after which he emites lightning from his mouth in the shape of a spear which he shapes using shape manipulation which proceeds forward and pierces the wooden dummy.


Kirikoe performs the Raikiri and splits it into two covering both of his hands in lightning, he proceeds to run and the dummy before finally double palm striking the dummy releasing the powerful lightning energy into it.


Kirikoe coats his hands with lightning, similar to a chidori in each hand, swiftly clapping his hands together he unleashes a large amount of lightning chakra in the form of a powerful bolt of lightning directed at the wooden dummy, as the bolts hits the dummy it leaves it with black singed outer coating.
 

Gobi Gobletsson

Active member
Legendary
Joined
Oct 27, 2010
Messages
19,790
Kin
473💸
Kumi
7,961💴
Trait Points
0⚔️
Okay, brilliant. Last portion;

(Raiton: Raikiri) - Lightning Release: Lightning Blade
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Short (Long if applied to a projectile weapon)
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The Lightning Cutter is an enhanced and concentrated form of the Chidori with the same effects and drawbacks that is done performing the Ox → Rabbit → Monkey hand seals. According to Might Guy, it gained its name after Kakashi split a bolt of lightning with it. Because the Chidori is already powerful on its own, the Lightning Cutter requires better chakra control, which is exemplified in its appearance. The Chidori appears as simply a mass of white electrical chakra in the user's hand, while the Lightning Cutter is much more focused. Kakashi has shown different ways of forming and using the Lightning Cutter, unique to him. For example, he demonstrated the ability to imbue a projectile weapon, such as a kunai, with his Lightning Cutter, granting the technique long-range capabilities by throwing the kunai towards his target. In this instance, the kunai was capable of piercing through multiple large rocks with ease, without any loss of momentum or change in trajectory.
Note: Kakashi biographies can use the technique without hand seals.
Note: Only Kakashi biographies can apply the technique to a kunai and use it as a projectile attack.

First up is the Raikiri. It's the stronger and more condensed version of Chidori. Akin to Raikage's HellbeamCross or w.e it's called - These work the same way.

(Raigen Raikochu) – Lightning Illusion Flash of Lightning Pillar
Rank: S
Type: Supplementaty
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: After performing the following handseals Ram → Horse → Snake → Tiger the user will release a massive amount of lighting chakra which he uses to create a blinding light that appears to emanate from all over the users body. The light can blind any enemy that sees it but its main ability is that, through skill and precise chakra control and timing, the user can use it as a cover to put the enemy into a genjutsu by using the light as a decoy, preventing the enemy from noticing the genjutsu was placed.
Note: Can follow with any Genjutsu the user knows up to A-Rank but needs to have mastered Genjutsu. The user will need to effectively spend two moves, performing both the Lightning Illusion and the Genjutsu; the first only serves as a cover to place the second unnoticed
Note: Can only be used once every three turns

This is a decoy technique per say. Using this you're capable of blinding your combatant, and during the blind - Trap him in your clutches of an illusion. Tihihi O^O

(Raiton: Chidori Raimei) - Lightning Style: 1000 Birds Thunderstorm
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton: The user will channel lightning chakra into his hand, covering it with a massive chidori. The user will then point his palm forwards, unleashing that chakra, creating a massive 120º blast of lightning that spreads from his hand, outwards and forward towards the enemy.

Rather than keeping the Chidori condsensed and concentrated - Unleash it in a 120 degrees blast radius before you.

( Raiton: Raiden ) - Lightning Release: Lightning Chain
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short (Mid range connection)
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: This technique requires the user to firstly create a shadow clone. Then, each of them will activate the Lightning Cutter on opposite hands to one another. Connecting the two techniques together, forming a chain of sorts, they are then able to use the resulting beam to slice through objects with great ease.
Note: Must first have a shadow clone in the field.

Having a clone which uses Raikiri, along with yourself, you're capable of linking the two effectively slicing one in half. This is a kin to two people can run with a rope and make people trip.

( Raiton: Chidori Shinsō ) - One Thousand Birds True Spear
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description:The user starts off by dashing at his opponent with a Chidori in his hand. As they strikes his opponent, they uses shape manipulation to extend the Chidori into a lightning spear that impales and hurtles the opponent into the air. The user then increases the potency of the lightning, generating a powerful electric explosion at the end of the spear and sending the enemy back to the ground.
Note: Only the spear extention can reach up to mid range.

Similiar to the Chidori Esio. When you do this, you simply make it explode upon reaching it's peak.
 

Kirikoe

Active member
Legendary
Joined
Oct 26, 2011
Messages
10,733
Kin
1,465💸
Kumi
1,955💴
Trait Points
0⚔️
Awards
(Raiton: Raikiri) - Lightning Release: Lightning Blade

Kirikoe performs the required hand-seals Ox - Rabbit - Monkey, and by applying increased chakra control compared to the chidori he channels raiton chakra into his right hand, A white electrical focused aura soon erupts forth coating his hand, his glance catching a nearby dummies Kirikoe charges forth and strike the dummy across the neck as if trying to cut the head off, and just liike that the dummies head would roll away down the nearby hill which was conveniently placed there...


(Raigen Raikochu) – Lightning Illusion Flash of Lightning Pillar

Performing the hand-seals Ram - Horse - Snake - Tiger, Kirikoe releases a massive burst of lightning chakra around him, this lightning chakra blinds nearby targets as the light of the lightning emanates from all over his body, if Kirikoe new genjutsu this would be a perfect time to follow up with one.. but Alas he does not..

Dat Tihihihi tho Gobi.... Creeeepy stuff right there..



Raiton: Chidori Raimei) - Lightning Style: 1000 Birds Thunderstorm

Kirikoe focuses lightning chakra into his right hand coating it in a large chidori, pointing his palm forwards he proceeds to unleash the chakra, creating a massive 120 degree blast of lightning that spreads outwards and towards the dummy from his hands

Woow this tech is pretty good and large scale.


( Raiton: Raiden ) - Lightning Release: Lightning Chain

Kirikoe first summons a close by his side, next him and the clone each perfom the lightning cutter performing all the necessary hand-seals, channelling the lightning cutter on opposite hands they connect the two together forming a lightning chain, after which they both proceed to dash forwards cutting through everything which is caught by the lightning chain.


( Raiton: Chidori Shinsō ) - One Thousand Birds True Spear

Forming a chidori in his hand Kirikoe runs and strikes the opponent, as he strikes by utilising shape manipulation he extends the chidori forwards into a blade that can impale the target, by sending a surge of lightning down the blade Kirikoe causes an electric explosion to occur at the end and causing smaller blades to erupt outwards piercing several dummies.


With this have we completed Raiton?
 
Top