[Raiton] Raiton with -Best- Senpai

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Shikamaru quickly performs Monkey → Ox → Boar → Tiger hand seals and focuses Raiton chakra into his hands. Then he releases it as a discharge of electricity and applies shape manipulation to make them into lightning disks. He then shoots these lightning disks at senpai's clone and electrocutes him making him disappear.
Question | Shouldn't there be number of disks. Otherwise one could just get of his rocker and say 100 disks?

Shikamaru quickly performs a small sequence of 3 hand seal and place your hands on the ground. He focuses Raiton chakra into his hands and releases it in the form of triangular shaped bolt of electricity through shape manipulation. This bolt of electricity moves towards the clone completely tearing of the earth in it's path and hits the clone making him disappear instantly
Question | I have thought this in other training as well. What three hand seals. Isn't there any sequence or name?


Shikamaru quickly channels Raiton chakra into his hands. He releases it slowly while applying shape manipulation and compresses it in his Hand to make a ball of lightning. Once the ball has been made. Shikamaru quickly hurls the ball at clone. At the imapct ball of lightning expands to make a massive huge explosion of lightning. Electrocuting the clone and making him disperse.
Question | If user thrusts it into opponent with his own hand. Wouldn't lightning hurt him when it expands as an explosion?
 

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1. Good question!. Time to explain a little something about how the strength of the technique is divided. I hope you know the fact that the power of the technique is denoted in terms of rank in our RP starting from D rank to F rank!. It goes by this formula.

Prev Rank + Prev Rank = Current rank.

For example : D rank + D rank = C rank. C rank + C rank = B rank. Like that it goes on upto S rank. Whilst F rank or Forbidden rank is a different case since, the forbidden ranks are technique that severely exhaust the user or cause damage to the user itself. That's the reason why they are forbidden to be used in a battle.

Now, Taking account of the technique, The technique as a whole is A rank!. So, If you create one disk then it will be a A ranked disk. If you create 2 disk it will be two B ranked disk. ( B + B = A ). If you create 4 disks then it will be 4 C ranked disks. So, more the number of disks you create, less their power will be. Suppose if you create three disks. then each will be a slightly powerful B ranked disk!.

Got it?

2. You can you whatever hand seal you like. The thing what matters there is the number of hand seals.

3. Once, you thrust it to your opponent. You ll leave the ball and the opponent will be pushed back a little. ( Like how it happens with Rasengan. Then there will be a blast along the direction of the thrust. So, you ll be safe! :)



Now, the next one is a very nice and versatile technique with no hand seals. All you have to do is to create a whirling vortex of electricity around yourself that takes the form of a Dragon's head. It will grow and shoot forwards towards the opponent. It can even jump off from the vortex and hit a nearby target. Pretty versatile technique!.

*Creates a clone*

"Perform the technique and destroy my clone please!"

(Raiton: Rairyu no Tatsumaki) - Lightning Release: Thunder Dragon Tornado

Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user forms a whirling vortex of electricity around themselves. The vortex will take on the form of a dragon’s head and will grow to then shoot forward and cover the area in front of them. Even if the attack doesn't directly connect with his foe, the lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a nearby target.

This is such a beautiful technique to use in battle. Gather up your Raiton chakra and perform the Rabbit → Rat → Horse → Ram hand seals!. After that slam your hands on the ground and release the gathered massive amount of raiton chakra into the ground to pool beneath the opponent. After that release that lightning into a gigantic column of lightning which shocks anything caught above it. Even though it is not specified like how big the column of lightning can be, I would say a max of 5-7 meter in diameter.

*creates a clone*

"Once again. Perform it please!"

( Raiton: Denpō Sekka ) – Lightning Release: Telegram Flash

Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After doing the Rabbit → Rat → Horse → Ram hand seals, the user will slam his hand on the ground and release into it a massive amounts of lightning chakra which will then pool beneath his opponent before releasing itself into a gigantic column of lightning which shocks anything caught above it. The technique can affect a bigger or smaller area depending on the users will.
 

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Thanks I got it all. You are awesome :bouncy:

Shikamru starts focusing raw chakra throughout his whole body. He then applies nature manipulation to convert it into Raiton chakra. Then he releases it while applying shape manipulation to create a rotating vortex of lightning around him. This vortes takes the shape of a Dragon head, the head of dragon then shoots towards the clone and destroys him completely making him disappear.
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Shikamaru then quickly performs Rabbit → Rat → Horse → Ram hand seals and focuses raw chakra into his hands. He then applies nature manipulation to convert it into Raiton chakra. After that he slams his hands on the ground and channels all the raiton chakra which is made to pool beneath the opponent. After that the chakra is released to form a giant coloumn of lightning that shocks the clone above it. Electrocuting him and finally making him disappear
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Senpai If you want I will make the pictures of all the techniques a little more presentable and give them to you for putting in training. Making your training even more awesome
 

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Thankyou!. This thing is, I do have pics and videos for all techs lol. I am currently using a restricted Wi-Fi connection. It doesnt allow me to use images from those sites. xD


Now, before proceeding. What is your training status in Fire release and have you learnt shadow clones!?
 

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That's nice. My training in Fire is just 3 jutsus of D-Rank. And about shadow clone I thought it was an E-Rank ninjutsu that came automatically. But no I didn't learn it if it has to be learned
 

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Alright. Now here comes the most crucial lightning technique. Unlike the other lightning techniques in which you ll create your own lightning, You ll use the Natural lightning for this technique. In b4 performing this technique, It require the atmosphere to be heated up by atleast a B ranked fire technique. Since you don't have B ranked fire, I will do the heating up process. Now, once the atmosphere is heated up, I need you to raise your hands and perform a chidori to take control over the lightning that will be created above by the thunderclouds. Shape the pure lightning into a Dragon and strike the opponent in the blink of an eye. There are lot of advantages to this technique. starting from massive damage produced by the technique, the speed of the technique is very fast such that only, absolute defense like the sussano or FTG techniques can be used to evade this technique. In order to perform this technique, you need to perform Chidori after creating the thunderclouds. hence, performing this technique will take up two jutsu slots. Very difficult to perform in a real battle.

"Now, Instead of a clone, you are going to perform this technique on me!. U_U. Don't fret. just do it!."

*send a B rank fire technique to the sky and creates thunderclouds"

"Now, do it Shikamaru! After you do it, give me advantages and disadvantages too!"

(Raiton: Kirin) - Lightning Release: Kirin

Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 70
Damage Points: 120
Description: After using a fire jutsu to heat the atmosphere and create thunderclouds in the sky, the user will use Chidori to take control of the lightning above. They can then make the lightning strike an opponent in the blink of an eye.
Note: Can only be avoided with time/space techniques or otherwise absolute defenses.
Note: Can only be used once per battle.
Note: In the turn before the use of Kirin, the user must have used at least a B-Rank, Long Range Fire (Katon) technique directed at the sky.
Note: User needs to post Chidori, meaning that in the turn Kirin is used, the user spends 2 moves.

Now, this is the most useless and waste technique is the Jutsu list. I need you to perform the Ram → Horse → Snake → Tiger handseal and release a massive amount of lightning chakra which you use to create a blinding light that appears to emanate from all over the body. This light can blind the enemy but the main use of this technique to cover a genjutsu that will be used in conjugation with this technique!. Since, you haven't mastered genjutsu, Just perform the technique alone. You can follow it up with any genjutsu upto A rank but you gotta have mastered the Genjutsu for that.

"Perform this technique and tell me why this is pretty useless?"

(Raigen Raikochu) – Lightning Illusion Flash of Lightning Pillar

Rank: S
Type: Supplementaty
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: After performing the following handseals Ram → Horse → Snake → Tiger the user will release a massive amount of lighting chakra which he uses to create a blinding light that appears to emanate from all over the users body. The light can blind any enemy that sees it but its main ability is that, through skill and precise chakra control and timing, the user can use it as a cover to put the enemy into a genjutsu by using the light as a decoy, preventing the enemy from noticing the genjutsu was placed.
Note: Can follow with any Genjutsu the user knows up to A-Rank but needs to have mastered Genjutsu. The user will need to effectively spend two moves, performing both the Lightning Illusion and the Genjutsu; the first only serves as a cover to place the second unnoticed
Note: Can only be used once every three turns
 

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As the senpai starts heating up the atmosphere shikamaru looks on as the clouds turn black he raises his hand sup towards sky and creates a chidori in his hands and takes control of the lightning in the clouds. He feels a link with the lightning so he applies shape manipulation on the lightning ad turns it into a large dragon of lightning. He then controls this dragon bringing him out of the clouds and strikes the senpai with it. With a hope that Senpai may avoid it. But he suddenly remembers the Name of senpai and becomes calm knowing that this technique won't hurt Minato Namikaze :hooray:

Advantages |
1. Too much damage
2. Cannot be defended unless FTG or Susano, Body flicker technique might work as well but it is not allowed on NB
3. Extremly fast
4. If performed it is going to cause certain death of opponent if he is not one of the chosen ones

Disadvantages |
1. Takes two moves
2. Needs a heated atmosphere
3. Needs clouds
4. Needs 11 hand seals to perform chidori
5. Takes time to charge clouds
6. While performing user is always open to attacks



After that devastating attack and a heart striking escape, Shikamaru quickly preforms Ram → Horse → Snake → Tiger hand seals and channels Raiton chakra throughout his body and releases it while applying shape manipulation to create a blinding flash of light that appears to be released from whole body of user making the opponent blind

Disadvantage |
The one I can think of is that, User has to keep his eyes open to avoid any attack while performing the technique and that will blind him as well when technique is released. However if he keeps his eyes closed then opponent can perform various attacks like and even creating a clone to take his place and himself do the sneak attack.
 

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1. Body flicker even if it was allowed will not work for that technique since Body flicker will only allow high speed movement for a short distance.

2. Why that technique is useless is that, The same effect can be achieved with the help of throwing a Flash bomb behind you!. Performing this technique instead of using a flash bomb is waste of a jutsu slot and chakra!.


Now, for the next technique, I need you to perform the Ox → Rabbit → Monkey hand seal and gather a large amount of chakra in your hands like you did it for Chidori!. But this time, I need you to gather very large and concentrated amount of chakra in order to further increase the power of chidori massively!. The Piercing capability of Chidori will be increased to a great extent. It can also be used to cancel powerful lightning technique like the false darkness spear.

"This technique was developed by my favorite student kakashi of the sharingan! Now, perform this technique and master it! U_U. Almost similar to Chidori, but an enhanced version."

OOC: If in case you are going for a Kakashi bio in the future, You can use this technique without hand seal and apply this technique to kunai or other projectiles too!.

(Raiton: Raikiri) - Lightning Release: Lightning Blade

Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Short (Long if applied to a projectile weapon)
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The Lightning Cutter is an enhanced and concentrated form of the Chidori with the same effects and drawbacks that is done performing the Ox → Rabbit → Monkey hand seals. According to Might Guy, it gained its name after Kakashi split a bolt of lightning with it. Because the Chidori is already powerful on its own, the Lightning Cutter requires better chakra control, which is exemplified in its appearance. The Chidori appears as simply a mass of white electrical chakra in the user's hand, while the Lightning Cutter is much more focused. Kakashi has shown different ways of forming and using the Lightning Cutter, unique to him. For example, he demonstrated the ability to imbue a projectile weapon, such as a kunai, with his Lightning Cutter, granting the technique long-range capabilities by throwing the kunai towards his target. In this instance, the kunai was capable of piercing through multiple large rocks with ease, without any loss of momentum or change in trajectory.
Note: Kakashi biographies can use the technique without hand seals.
Note: Only Kakashi biographies can apply the technique to a kunai and use it as a projectile attack.

Now, for the next technique, With that Raikiri in your hand, Split it into two covering both the hands in lightning. Now, with that done, perform a melee attack at my clone and unleash a powerful lightning into him there by dispersing him. Pretty basic one!. Effective usage of Raikiri in CQC.

*Creates a clone*

(Raiton: Raikiri Nibai Raikou Jishin) – Lightning Release: Lightning Blade Double Lightning Quake

Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user performs (Raiton: Raikiri) - Lightning Release: Lightning Blade and splits it in two, covering both hands in Lightning. He will then perform a melee attack at the enemy, unleashing the powerful lightning into him.
 

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I see. :O Sorry |
Shikamaru performs Ox → Rabbit → Monkey hand seals and gathers a large amount of Raiton chakra into his hands and applies shape manipulation to it converting it into something like chidori but the impact of jutsu on the hands is too large due to more and concentrated amount of chakra in it. Shikamaru then runs towards the rock lying beside him and using the Raikiri on it completely obliterating the rock into several small pieces

Shikamaru again performs the Raikiri and puts his second hand on his right hand as well than he splits the Raikri into two, covering his both hands in the lightning. Shikamaru then runs towards the clone while keeping constant chakra flow into his hands to maintain the attack and unleashes huge amount of lightning into him from both sides, dispersing him immediately
 

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That's good then!. Congratulations! You have mastered Lightning release!. You were a great student and I has soo much fun training you!. I hope I taught you stuffs well!. Have fun using Lightning in your battles! ^^. If you ever need help in the usage of a technique, just shoot me a VM! Tada! :)
 

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Thanks senpai for this great training. I know I cannot help you with any of RP related stuff, but I am fairly good at GFX if you ever want anything I will be more than obliged to help you. Thanks again for your training :flowers
 
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