[Raiton] Raiton with Akasha-sensei

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(thanks again for this :))

shikamaru waits at the training ground for his new sensei to arrive, he wonders to himself what his new teacher will be like? as he wonders this he lays back and stares at the clouds relaxing
 
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*arrives on training ground*

Well hello there~ I believe we are here as for you to tame element of lighting. But let's start off with the basics. What can you tell me about nature and shape manipulation?
 

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well before you can do either you need to know about pure charka, Pure Chakra is the normal chakra present in our body and we can use this to perform normal Ninjustu techniques and enhance taijutsu and weapons with it.To use elemental justu(basic5), Elemental chakra is needed but what we have is pure chakra. This is when Nature Manipulation comes in. Nature manipulation allows you to change the properties of your chakra to that of any of the basic 5 elements, so nature manipulates converts pure chakra to elemental chakra.

shape manipulation, It involves changing the form and movement of chakra, determining the size, range, and purpose of a technique. this is used for elemental justu mostly but can use pure charka. the lighting blade created by kakashi hatake is a good example of shape manipulation as he makes a chidori into a larger and thicker form of lighting charka. but the most well known and The ultimate example of shape manipulation is the Rasengan, invented by the Fourth Hokage, Minato Namikaze of course until naruto created the rasen shuruiken and made that the highest form possible by adding wind charka to the already complex rasengan.
 

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I wouldn't say Lighting cutter is the best example of shape manipulation. I mean there is some of shape manipulation as to make chidori concentrated however there are much better examples, one of which you did mention and that is Rasengan but alright!

So let's move on onto the element itself. What can you tell me about Lighting Relase?
 

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I did say rasengan was the ultimate shape manipulation :)

okay lighting release is one of the five basic elementals, using nature manipulation to pure charka and turning it into lighting charka that allows the user to generate lightning by increasing the high frequency vibrations of their chakra, allowing for piercing damage and fast movement, lighting release has a strong elemental affinity against earth because it can easily travel through and break the ground apart and a weak elemental affinity against wind as the wind can just blow the lighting away, also lighting usually have numbing, paralysation and great piercing affects in most their justu due to the nature of lighting release but the user needs great charka control to keep the unstable lighting charka in check, lighting release is also in a few kekkei genkai, such as storm release. lighting release can also be used in a combo with water release as water conducts electricity so this can be used to amply the attack
 

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Well wind can't just blow away lighting, not quite sure where you got it from. The thing when it comes to lighting and wind, is that wind is actually an electrical insulator of lighting and thus why it is stronger.

What about elemental clashes between lighting and other elements as well as their usage in combination? Is it good to use lighting and fire in combination and why? Also except water conducting electricity, why is it also good to use two in combination?
 

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I believe lighting and fire is used in explosion release (I think) im not sure at all, also using lighting and water you can make storm release which can control weather control, this chakra ability can shape and control storm clouds, it can also alter pressures, temperatures, and compositions of the air,
 

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Alright, for the most part you are correct however I'd like to further it so you have better knowledge on the subject.

Lighting Release and Water Release represent a great combo in our Role Play system. First of all, raiton and suiton are neutral to each other although they are not usually used one against each other because water has greater mass than lighting which is more concentrated. However, using the two in combination can be quite efficient. Combing the numbing effects of lighting with the great conductor of lighting which is water can end up lethal to the opponent. Even the smallest of concentration of lighting can effect water of great proportions (of course keep in mind that their ranks should be the same).

On the other note we have Lighting Release and Fire Release. The two elements, are also neutral to each other. They great as to make damage to the opponent. The heatness of katon is capable of burning down opponent wheras raiton has numbing opponent and thus can shock opponent. However the most interesting thing about this combo is that they actually compensate each other. This is because fire is strong against wind, whereas lighting is weak against wind. Good thing would be to firstly send a fast lighting attack as a bait with assumption that opponent would use wind against it and thus send a fire attack to follow your lighting.

If you don't have any questions we can continue!

Also I never asked you if you had any goals in this rp? Anything in specific you are aiming to gain.
 

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thank you for that very detailed response on correcting my errors sensei, I have better knowledge in this subject now :)

yes I have quite a few NB goals I want to achieve but I don't think it will happen, first is my mandlore bio I want to become high up in this clan as this clan has been interested me since I was a small boy in star wars, if this happens I want to become a good rper and know to most members and not a poor one like I am now, then I want to make a custom summoning and element which I have ideas on but cant sumbit them yet, then I want to make a custom clan and make it a well know clan through this rp, them I wish to become a sensei and pass everything I know onto my personal student so he can carry on my legacy, but my first goal is to master the basic nine

no questions sensei you may move on
 

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Don't say you are poor role player. You are alright, you just need to work a little bit as to improve your skills and become even better. Now, those are some nice goals I must admit. To be honest, when it comes to Star Wars, I never properly completely watched it <.< played few games however which are connected with it.

Now let's get going onto the next practice of this training and that would be to see if you are capable of actually taming this element which I believe you should!

*Hands you a specific paper sheet*

Now this is a specific kind of paper sheet. What I want for you to do is actually focus onto the properties of raiton chakra and then try and channel them into the paper. If you've done this correctly the paper sheet should wrinkle. Please explain to me how does it feel for raiton chakra to flow through your body.
 

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I meant from the star wars games sensei I don't know if mandlores are in the films... :)

thanks for the little boost of confidants but I know im a bad rper at the moment Im far below ability from most rpers, but I aspire to become a better rper and with senseis like you I know I can

*takes a specific paper sheet from you*

shikamaru begins to mold his charka into ration as he does this he can feel vibrations around his body, he begins to channel the ration charka into the paper sheet, shikamaru still feeling the vibration's around his body says to his sensei" I can feel the vibrations around my body sensei I can feel the bright and numbness effect of the charka flowing through me" , as shikamaru says this the paper wrinkles
 

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Nice job! Alright, I think we can proceed onto the techniques. Please note that when training with me I require from your to note usage of both nature and shape manipulation. I will help you out with my own descriptions of jutsus to do so. Anyhow let's go!

The first technique is most basic of lighting release techniques. First of all gather raiton chakra within your body and once you've done so release the chakra from your body whilst using nature manipulation as to generate actual lighting and shape manipulation as to form few bolts of lighting. Because you actually form multiple bolts with this jutsu, it can be used as to attack your opponent from different angles making it harded to defend however the power of single bolt will decrease as their number increases.

(Raiton no Jutsu) - Lightning Release Technique
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra to create small bolts of lightning to attack their target.
 

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shikamaru starts to molds his charka into ration charka and shikamaru gathers it up in his body, as he does this he releases the ration charka out his body while adding nature manipulation to make actual lighting, then shikamaru adds shape manipulation to form 2 bolts of lighting and shoots them into the ground in front of him. shikamaru asks how's that sensei?
 

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Nice job [= Let's get going onto the nex technique!

Right so, for this next technique I'd like for you to focus raiton chakra within your dominant hand before you slam it onto the ground. Once your hand touches the ground release the chakra whilst using nature manipulation as to generate lighting and shape manipulation to form a surge that will travel towards your target's feets shocking him or her. Keep in mind that this technique can only be used in short range.

(Raiton: Raikou Oonami) - Lightning Release: Lightning Surge
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will concentrate their chakra and slam their hand on the ground to release a surge of lightning across the ground to the opponents feet to shock them.
 

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shikamaru listens to his sensei gathers his charka again, molding it into ration charka, he gathers the ration charka into his right hand and shikamaru hand feels the vibration of the ration charka, shikamaru slams his right hand on the floor and releases the ration charka whilst using nature manipulation to make the lighting and then shikamaru adds shape manipulation to form a surge that targets the opponents feet (although their was none)
 

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Nice job!!!

Let's get going onto the last technique of D rank.

Now, for this next technique what I need of you to do is actually focus raiton chakra within your dominant hand. As you've done so, extend the hand forth whilst releasing the said chakra. Using nature manipulation generate lighting and with utilisation of shape manipulation form a wave of lighting bolts.

(Ration: Ikazuchi Kashou) - Lightning Release: Thunder Burn
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user moves his palm unleashing a wave of lightning bolts at the opponent.
 

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shikamaru gathers charka into his right hand and molds it into ration charka within in right hand, as he does this shikamaru extends his hand forth and releases the ration charka, then using nature manipulation to generate lighting in the palm of his hand, then shikamaru adds shape manipulation to form a wave of lighting bolts
 

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Nice job! Let's get onto C ranks.

So first technique of C rank is actually capable of reaching Long range which is good plus. What I need for you to do as to perform this technique is actually firstly perform a sequence of 3 hand seals, Tiger → Snake → Dog, as you focus raiton chakra within your hands. Once finished with the seals, release the chakra from your hands whilst using nature manipulation as to generate lighting and shape manipulation as to form a current which is capable of avoding obstacles. This current can also hit multiple individuals at the same time.

( Raiton: Raigeki) - Lightning Release: Electric Attack
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: After performing the required hand seals Tiger → Snake → Dog the user creates an electric current from their hand that can hit multiple individuals at the same time. Furthermore, it extends into incredible distances and can avoid obstacles.

Now tell me what is speed of performance when it comes to this jutsu as well as why would you rate it as such speed. When judging the speed of performance I'd like for you to take into account the amount of time it is needed for preparation of technique as well as time in which it reaches opponent. Hand seals take quite some time and thus make a technique slower to perform. Speed can be either Slow,Medium or Fast. Also tell me what are advantages and disadvantages when it comes to this jutsu.
 

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shikamaru gathers his charka and molds his charka into ration charka and focuses his ration charka in his right hand and then performs the required hand seals Tiger → Snake → Dog, then adding nature manipulation makes a electric current from his right hand.

the speed of this justu is medium as you are performing 3 handseals and because they slow but not many it becomes a medium, the preparation for the justu is pretty fast as you only need to gather ration charka in the hand you want to use, the time the justu reaches an opponent seems pretty fast from the justu description.

the advantages of the justu is its strong against earth and can hit multiple targets at the same time, there is also not many handseals so it is relatively quick to perform, plus the justu can reach long reach so it is pretty versatile where you can use it, also it can avoid obstacles making it more versatile to use.

the disadvantages of the justu is it is weak against wind as wind is an insulator to lighting and will negate it.(cant think of anymore.)
 

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Actually I'd say this is a fast jutsu overall. However neat job. And please, no need to say as disadvantage that it is weak against earth. We covered that at the beginning of this training if I reckon correctly. Kinda basic.



So this next technique was used by Fuka against Naruto. Pretty much what I need for you to do is focus raiton chakra within your hands before releasing it from it whilst using nature manipulation as to generate lighting and shape manipulation to form a wave. However the usage of this technique can differ depending on how you want to perform it. You can either form a small surge or stream of lighting which is capable of ripping through solid rocks (of course elemental w&s apply). Now, this technique is also good to be used in conjuction with water technique as it increases its strength by 10 damage. Also, when used in conjuction range would change depending on the range of the water technique.

(Raiton: Jibashi) - Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short (Short-Long depending on the water technique)
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30 (+10 to a water technique when used in conjunction)
Description: This jutsu allows the user to create a wave of electricity from the user's hands. This jutsu can vary in power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. It is ideal to use in conjunction with a water jutsu.

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