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* I get in position in front of your clone and starts to build up my Raiton chakra. I channel the chakra to my arms and I start to pull the arms backwards as I gather more of the lightning chakra into them, and I then with a swing with my arms release a wave of bolts at your clone so he gets shocked. *
 

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Much, much better.

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(Raiton: Jibashi) - Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30 (+5 if used in conjunction with a water jutsu)
Description: This jutsu allows the user to create a wave of electricity from the user's hands. This jutsu can vary in power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. It is ideal to use in conjunction with a water jutsu.
For this jutsu, you'll need to perform the following hand seals: Boar β†’ Ram β†’ Snake β†’ Horse β†’ Dragon. Whilst performing the hand seals, you'll gather chakra in your hands, and when you're done performing the hand seals, you'll surge the chakra forward and manipulate it to form a destructive wave of electricity which will travel a short range. Note that the lightning created by this jutsu is more destructive than the prior. Use this to create a larger blast of lightning to destroy my clone.
*Creates a clone.*

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* I start gathering up my raiton chakra. I then channel it both of my arms before I peform the handseals; Boar β†’ Ram β†’ Snake β†’ Horse β†’ Dragon. Once I've made the handseals I release the chakra from my hands and lightning bolts appear out of my hands. I "throw" the lightning against your clone, and as it's flying I change it into a wave using the chakra inside it. The lightning hits your clone and he get killled due to the shock. *

Advans: Very good too slice earth jutsus, like earth pillars
Disadvans: The handseals take some time to perform, so in the mean time the opponent can counterattack.
 

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Yeah, the hand seals make this sort of a 'meh' jutsu. >.<

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(Raiton: Raikyu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Ball
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: By gathering chakra in their hands, the user can create a ball of electrical energy and launch it at the enemy.
To perform this, you'll begin by gather raiton chakra in your hands. Once having gathered a sufficient amount, you will push the chakra outwards and manipulate it so that it becomes electricity and takes on the shape of a ball of electricity. You will then propel the clone forwards into my clone.
*Creates a clone.*

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me don't like Meh jutsus >.<

* I start gather up my raiton chakra and I channel it to both my hands. I make sparks of lightning appear out of my hands as I release the raiton chakra trough them, and I hold my hands up against eachother and form the sparks into a ball using shape manipulation. I keep adding lightning into the ball, and when it have become large enough, I throw it towards your clone, and your clone gets completely electrized by the impact. *

Advans: Good jutsu to use as a diversion. Also good in use with water jutsus, like a wave, so it boosts the power of the wave.
Disadvans: The ball itself is kinda small and easy to avoid. Also, the time I use to make the ball leaves me at danger due to my hand beeing occupied.
 

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Try not to deviate from what I say, even if it is something slight like the sparks. :\
I do appreciate that you're trying to be original, but I can't have you altering the jutsu. Just bare this in mind from now on, mkay?

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(Raiton: Raigeki no Yoroi) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Armour
Rank: C
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user surrounds themselves with electricity. The intense electric field protects them by electrocuting anyone who comes into contact with it, but only works for one attack.
For this jutsu, you'll simply stream chakra into the air around you. Once you have done this, manipulate the chakra to form a field of electricity around all of your body. You will be able to use this field to block attacks and electrocute your foes. Use it to block my clone's punch and then take him out.
*Creates a clone.*

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I'm sorry... Won't do it again.

* I gather up my raiton chakra and channels it trough my body. I release the chakra from every part of my body at the same time and it floats in the air around me. I then change the shape of the chakra to create a shield around me, so I become surrounded by lightning. When you're clone comes to attack me, I use the shield to block the punch by making it reach further out from my body. *

Advans: Nullifies the dangers of Taijutsu combat, aswell as weaker earth jutsus like stone pillars. Also kunais and Shurikens won't affect the shield, and my punches are more dangerous.
Disadvans: A wind jutsu will be able to break trough the shield, and I'm therefore open for those kinda attacks.
 

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Don't be sorry. :\ You're showing more interest than most students do, which is awesome! ^^

Another disadvantages with this kind of jutsu is that water can end up being devastating. There are some water jutsu in which the water will literally be created right above you, and although this normally wouldn't do much damage due to the lacking of force, it would prove dangerous if it were to be charged with electricity.

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(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Kiba) - Lightning Release: Lightning Fang
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user sends an electrical essence into the clouds, allowing them to create lightning strikes in the desired location.
To perform this jutsu, you will stream chakra from your body up to clouds in the sky. Using your chakra in the sky, you will create a bolt of lightning which will come down and strike your target extremely quickly. Bare in mind when using this technique that the process of sending your chakra up to the clouds takes a while, so you won't be able to instantly strike people with lightning using this. Use it to kill my clone.
*Creates a clone.*

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* I gather up my raiton chakra and starts to channel it trough my whole body. Once I've gathered up enough I start to release my chakra into the sky. After all the chakra has been sent into the sky, I change it slightly so it turns into a thunderbolt that I send right down at your clone and makes him blow up. *

Advans: Very strong jutsu, and it's very fast seeing how it moves with the speed of light.
Disadvans: The time I use to send chakra into the sky leaves a huge disadvantage for me, cause at all this time I can be attacked. Also, the lightning will come down in one certain location, and even toh it's very fast it can be easy to evade if you use the right jutsu.
 

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Good. I'd be careful in battles when using this. Some people may disagree that this jutsu is that fast, though I personally believe that it would.

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(Raiton: Shichu Shibari) – Lightning Release: Four-Pillar Bind
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After the user performs a single hand seal the user summons Four Giant Pillars surrounding the enemy target and then the user shoots out bolts of lightning, binding the target in place and possibly doing damage to them.
To perform this, you will perform a single handseal which will cause four large pillars to erupt from the ground surrounding your opponent. The pillars are large, and should be spaced out quite a bit to extend the area this jutsu will effect. You will charge these pillars with your chakra, and then manipulate them so that they create a field of electricity between them, thus electrocuting all who are in the area between the pillars. Use it on my clone.
*Creates a clone.*

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