[Raiton] - Kichiro Fujimoto

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O__O'

What are you waiting for? I'm looking for a student of mine, for... Raiton I believe. Have you seen someone around here who might be a student?
I know I was accepted. I am not seeing things man. I am not.

Kidding. Here I am. I did get accepted. Do not go crazy on me. >_> Anyway, lets go do this. :rage:
 
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Ah, excellent xD

So I'm teaching you lightning... *Checks a scroll that I swiftly remove from my sleeve*
I'm happy with starting you off at... C-ranks. Particularly the following *Hands you a secondary scroll*


Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: After performing the required hand seals Tiger → Snake → Dog the user creates an electric current from their hand that can hit multiple individuals at the same time. Furthermore, it extends into incredible distances and can avoid obstacles.



This is a particularly useful jutsu, mainly because of its vast range despite the low rank. A good little trick to have when you might be conserving your chakra reserves. Use the three hand seals to focus your lightning chakra into your hands before placing them on the ground, releasing a chaotic current that you'll direct to hit a tree in short range, mid-range and long range. *Throws a kunai at the three trees, indicating the intended target.*
Be sure to make your move as if it where a battle scenario, keeping as much detail as you can in the preparation and execution of the jutsu.

Then ask questions and I'll answer them... otherwise, I'll ask you questions xD
 

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xD. What....? OK. >_> badass .... When I was just getting use to the template. 0_0 It cannot be helped. u_u I use third person point of view, referring the trainee as ninja.

The ninja perform the necessary hand-seals (Tiger, Snake, and Dog) to mould chakra and begin to generate lightning by increasing the high frequency vibrations of their chakra to form into current waves of electricity from their hands. The lightning is drawn out from the extended hand and aimed at three trees truck where as upon impact, wood crackles due to the lightning surges.

This is a basic Raiton technique which induce numbness through contact. Normally, Raiton techniques range are close-range and Mid-range. Why is this long-range?
 

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This one is long-ranged for one simple reason... and that is... that... umm... I guess someone wanted to be nice and give Lightning a low ranked but long-ranged jutsu? xD

So you'd prefer a template then? How does this one look;

PHP:
[B]Three advantages (no obvious ones, be creative):[/B]
[B]1.[/B]
[B]2.[/B]
[B]3.[/B]
[B]Three disadvantages (no obvious ones, be creative):[/B]
[B]1.[/B]
[B]2.[/B]
[B]3.[/B]
[B]Strategies and combinations:[/B]
[B]How you would counter it:[/B]
[B]How you perform it (with as much detail as you can):[/B]
 

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Well... I'm going to keep my elemental students on a template so... enjoy the work O__O'

(Raiton: Jibashi) - Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30 (+5 if used in conjunction with a water jutsu)
Description: This jutsu allows the user to create a wave of electricity from the user's hands. This jutsu can vary in power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. It is ideal to use in conjunction with a water jutsu.

Similar to the Electric Attack, I want you to channel and release a current of lightnign from your hands. This one jutsu is only short range and works much better with a water combination.

(Raiton: Raikyu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Ball
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: By gathering chakra in their hands, the user can create a ball of electrical energy and launch it at the enemy.

If you've ever watch Dragonball Z, this is essentially a basic Ki ball attack... but with lightning xD

Charge up your lightning chakra into a basketball-sized area in between your hands, compacting it to it keeps this ball-like form. Then use your chakra to propel it, or throw it, towards your target.

PHP:
[B]Three advantages (no obvious ones, be creative):[/B]
[B]1.[/B]
[B]2.[/B]
[B]3.[/B]
[B]Three disadvantages (no obvious ones, be creative):[/B]
[B]1.[/B]
[B]2.[/B]
[B]3.[/B]
[B]Strategies and combinations:[/B]
[B]How you would counter it:[/B]
[B]How you perform it (with as much detail as you can):[/B]
 

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(Raiton: Jibashi) - Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder
Advantages:
  • A simple lightening attack where it is surged as a current of electricity directed towards the target.
  • It can be used to paralyze the target.
Disadvantages:
  • Its usage is short-range
Strategies/Combinations: This also include being conducted in the water to paralyze the target with an additional shock, leaving the target unconscious or killed.

The ninja generate lightning by increasing the high frequency vibrations of their chakra to their hands and releasing the lightening, creating a wave of electricity from their hands. This surge of electricity can shock the target or capable of ripping through solid rock

(Raiton: Raikyu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Ball
Advantages:
  • With added chakra, the technique can bigger in size making it uneasy to dodge.
Disadvantages:
  • Not having a clear mark on the target, this technique can be lessen in accuracy.
  • Its trajectory can backfire as well.
Strategies/Combinations:

After generating the lightning, the ninja compacted it into a small ball where it is propelled at the target.
 

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(Raiton: Raigeki no Yoroi) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Armour
Rank: C
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user surrounds themselves with electricity. The intense electric field protects them by electrocuting anyone who comes into contact with it, but only works for one attack.
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This was used in a filler arc involving the non-cannon Seven Swordsman guy near the end of the first Series.

Release your lightning chakra over your entire body, generating an electric field that covers all of your body for a one-off defence against physical attacks.

(Raiton: Iwa Nadare) - Lightning Style: Stone Avalanche
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Descripton: By forming hand seals Snake → Upside down Tiger → Hands clapped together and running up a cliff face, the user causes stone and rock above him to become dislodged and rain down past him onto his opponents below by releasing a wave of electrical energy. However, this is extremely location-based and needs to be done uphill of a mountain for it to work.

With those three hand seals, note the upside down tiger seal, you'll run up a rocky cliff or wall, using your lightning chakra to dislodge rocks from above you and have them fall back down past you. This is useful if you are trying to stop someone chasing you up to the high ground.

PHP:
[B]Three advantages (no obvious ones, be creative):[/B]
[B]1.[/B]
[B]2.[/B]
[B]3.[/B]
[B]Three disadvantages (no obvious ones, be creative):[/B]
[B]1.[/B]
[B]2.[/B]
[B]3.[/B]
[B]Strategies and combinations:[/B]
[B]How you would counter it:[/B]
[B]How you perform it (with as much detail as you can):[/B]
 

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So tired of that template I swear.... :devil: To understand Raiton we already know that it allows the user to generate lightning by increasing the high frequency vibrations of their chakra, allowing for piercing damage and fast movement (Narutopedia). We know the effects such as causing paralysis and induce numbness. The description itself tells the obvious. You, the Sensei, make it simpler to understand. Pictures from Google and watching videos for various sites helps with clear view on how it works. .....I'm just done. I am just going to write to show I understand and ask questions.

(Raiton: Raigeki no Yoroi) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Armour

After converting their chakra into electricity, the ninja covers themselves with an electric field aiding as a defense. I do not understand what it means "only works for one attack". Does this mean it provides minimal protection against strong attacks?

(Raiton: Iwa Nadare) - Lightning Style: Stone Avalanche

A technique based on location where the ninja focus a stream of electricity through a mountain and after performing the needed hand-seals cause rocks to dislodge, tumbling below to crush the target. "have them fall back down past you" It is not as simple as you controlling the technique. I would think being you cast the technique, you are aware of the rocks falling below and it leaves your opponent at a surprise. You would still have to escape the technique to prevent being caught in the technique as well. It would be different if were a Doton technique were as you are freely manipulating the earth.
 
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So tired of that template I swear.... :devil: To understand Raiton we already know that it allows the user to generate lightning by increasing the high frequency vibrations of their chakra, allowing for piercing damage and fast movement (Narutopedia). We know the effects such as causing paralysis and induce numbness. The description itself tells the obvious. You, the Sensei, make it simpler to understand. Pictures from Google and watching videos for various sites helps with clear view on how it works. .....I'm just done. I am just going to write to show I understand and ask questions.

(Raiton: Raigeki no Yoroi) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Armour

After converting their chakra into electricity, the ninja covers themselves with an electric field aiding as a defense. I do not understand what it means "only works for one attack". Does this mean it provides minimal protection against strong attacks?

(Raiton: Iwa Nadare) - Lightning Style: Stone Avalanche

A technique based on location where the ninja focus a stream of electricity through a mountain and after performing the needed hand-seals cause rocks to dislodge, tumbling below to crush the target. "have them fall back down past you" It is not as simple as you controlling the technique. I would think being you cast the technique, you are aware of the rocks falling below and it leaves your opponent at a surprise. You would still have to escape the technique to prevent being caught in the technique as well. It would be different if were a Doton technique were as you are freely manipulating the earth.
Getting upset over it won't really make me want to teach you further >_>

(Raiton: Raigeki no Yoroi) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Armour

Only works for one attack, meaning if you punch someone whilst wearing that Lightning Armour, it will dissipate after you deal the damage. Similarly, if I hit you with a C-rank lightning or lightning neutral element, then it would disperse.

(Raiton: Iwa Nadare) - Lightning Style: Stone Avalanche

Funny enough, when I learnt this it was an Earth jutsu xD Not sure what happened with it though.

So... I need to cut numbers of students... luckily I have a senpai O__O'

He'll work with you and avoid that template you seem to be so displeased with ^^
 

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The usual. Post Jutsu and demonstrate its usage. I perform it and/or ask questions. Normally when I perform the technique, I analysis the technique as well. It is basically the template without the structure and less of what the template ask.
 

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Alright so I'm going to post two techniques each reply. Perform the techniques and analyse them. Feel free to ask any questions and if I need to add something to your replies I will.


(Raiton: Shuurai Rappa no Jutsu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Horn Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will raise their hand infront of them like a sword. It will begin glowing in a pale yellow before releasing bolts of lightning in the shape of a horn that spread outwards, allowing it to attack multiple targets.


( Raiton: Inazuma ken Fudou ) - Lightning Release: Lightning Blades Levitation
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 15 (-5 per turn)
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will channel their lightning chakra into their sword to increase its cutting capabilities, and then levitate it in front of them. They will then multiply the sword creating two extra physical copies which are then all manipulated to spin rapidly and are controlled to fly towards and cut through the opponent/s through hand gestures. While controlling the weapons, the user cannot mold chakra for other techniques and needs to keep focus.
 

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(Raiton: Shuurai Rappa no Jutsu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Horn Technique

A lightening technique were chakra is refine to the point of being distinguished by a pale yellow glow. After the ninja extends the arms out forward, they discharge electricity from their hands in the shape of a horn. The electricity is spread throughout the battlefield to hit multiple targets. Combating this technique is not as simple - albeit, not requiring hand-seals (not capable of accessing the techniques potential), the risk is unknowingly being prepared on whats to come because the electricity is yellow and not natural created or chakra converted. This could cause some confusion to the target. However, the ninja could observe the techniques and notice the technique properties by hearing the rolling, gradually dissipating rumble or crackle noises.

I could be confuse of the pale yellow glow. Is the technique colored or when it is initially activated?

(Raiton: Inazuma ken Fudou ) - Lightning Release: Lightning Blades Levitation

Lightening is converted and then is channel through the sword where it is manipulated by the ninja to be levitated in the air. The ninja manipulates the swords from gestures (or hand-seals) to rotate rapidly and soar towards the target to be pierce. Due to the lightening effects, it could also induce numbness. The ninja can further manipulate the sword making multiple physical copies from the single one. One down-side of the technique is the ninja must stay concentrated on the manipulation of the swords. Therefore, the ninja is unable to perform other techniques which disrupt the chakra.
 
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Sorry to inform you but Kuroh is no longer a senpai due to his own reasons. For the moment I am unable to take you but] I am in the process of finding a new senpai. If you wish to seek someone else to continue your training, you are more than happy to do so, just make a post after this to confirm what you have decided to do. Again, my apologies for the situation that has arisen.

Haato, just confirming you have learnt (Raiton: Shuurai Rappa no Jutsu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Horn Technique and ( Raiton: Inazuma ken Fudou ) - Lightning Release: Lightning Blades Levitation.
In answer to your question, the lightning emitted from the jutsu has that pale yellow colour.

For the first jutsu, I'd also like to point your attention towards the fact that the more bolts you form with the jutsu, the weaker each bolt is. This is why things like advantages and disadvantages is such as important aspect, so you can try and think about these things. You may know the jutsu well enough from the Anime/Manga but you may not understand how it is applied to the RP. It is a sensei's job (and by extension the senpai's job) to make sure you understand the jutsu we are teaching you, as such I prefer using a template as you are then at least showing me you understand the basic concepts of how it is applied to our RP. Anyway, you can respond to this in your next post with the answer to the first paragraph.
 

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You can stay. ;)

About the template, it is your call. I prefer not. The bolt. I kind of knew that, but figure who is going to pay attention to that. When I shoot my Jutsu and it is going to be countered immediately. Also, I might be getting it confuse with the range or the mass amount of lightening thinning out or something. Darn.
 
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