[Raiton] Raiton all the way with Kerrah

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Waits for sensei... Link to former training
 
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(Raiton: Jibashi) - Lightning Release:
Electromagnetic Murder

First, I focus and gather my chakra, and when I have focused enough, I then turn it into Raiton chakra.
I then proceed to release it in the form of a wave of
electricity with which to
shock my opponent. When doing the technique, I
discovered it can be regulated from a small shock up
to a wave
 

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I guess that will do xD

So for the next technique, I want you to channel your Raiton chakra through your body, and out of it. Once done with that, by using shape manipulation force it to cascade your body, acting as an armour that fully covers every inch of your body. The armour is of course made of electricity and will hence protect you, whom are within it. It has the potential to defend a single incoming attack, be it of any attack from C-rank and below, though elemental weaknesses apply. (So any B rank Doton, or D rank Fuuton)

Other than defending from simple elemental ninjutsu though, what field of fighting do you think this technique is highly advantageous against?
 

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First, I focus my chakra throughout my body until I have focused enough. And when I have focused enough, I channel it out of my body. Using shape manipulation, I made it form and cover me. This can be used to block attacks
 

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Sure it can be used to defend from attacks in general; though are there any in specific? A hint would be something that necessarily doesn't require chakra and is known for initiating close quarter combat.
 

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Well, that was the question I had asked you ._. It's Taijutsu, because essentially the armour covers your body, if someone was to punch you, they'd be zapped from the armour and essentially paralysed, allowing you to attack. Understand?
(Raiton: Raigeki no Yoroi) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Armour
Rank: C
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user surrounds themselves with electricity. The intense electric field protects them by electrocuting anyone who comes into contact with it, but only works for one attack.

Anyways, for the next technique *snaps fingers, teleporting us to the top of a mountain's cliff*
This technique is extremely limited, and you will see shortly why that is the case. Go towards the tip of the cliff, and concentrate on your lightning chakra. Channel it throughout your entire body and into the ground beneath you, specifically more towards the end of the cliff. From there, use lightning's main strength against Earth to your advantage here, which is basically being able to cut through the dense, solid structure with quite ease, and what I want you to do is use your lightning to separate the end of the cliff into many average-sized boulders; that will be broken apart from each other and slide down the mountain side, hitting and crushing whoever is standing below.
 

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Ok...
As I reach the tip of the cliff,I concentrate on my lightning chakra. I focus it and I channel it throughout my entire body and into the
ground beneath me, specifically more towards the
end of the cliff. As I know earth is weaker to water, I put my lightning chakra into the cliff and I cut through the earth easily. I seperate the end into many average sized boulders. And it fell
 

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Well done, though I think you mean Earth is weak to Lightning xD
(Raiton: Iwa Nadare) - Lightning Style: Stone Avalanche
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Descripton: By forming hand seals Snake → Upside down Tiger → Hands clapped together when near a cliff , the user causes stone and rock to become dislodged and rain down on anyone below it by releasing a wave of electrical energy which weakens the rock and makes it fall as it crumbles. However, this is extremely location-based and needs to be done uphill of a mountain for it to work.
What I want you to do now is raise your more dominant arm forwards, imagine it to be somewhat like a sword; whilst simultaneously concentrating on your Raiton chakra, channelling it throughout your entire body and towards said arm, upon doing so your arm will radiate in a pale-yellow hue only then to be succeeded by a singular bolt being released from the arm; and then by using shape manipulation form the lightning bolt into that of quite an enormous horn, that spreads outwards from its initial point and has the capability of attacking several targets.
 

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Yea


I raise my right hand, then I imagine it to be somewhat
like a sword; and I focus my chakra and when I have focused enough, I concentrate and change it to Raiton. Then I channel my Raiton chakra, channeling it throughout my entire body and towards the right arm, upon doing so
my arm radiate in a pale-yellow hue only then
to be succeeded by a singular bolt being released
from the arm; and then by using shape manipulation, I
form the lightning bolt into that of quite an
enormous horn, that spreads outwards from its initial
point and has the capability of attacking several
targets.
 

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Brilliant
(Raiton: Shuurai Rappa no Jutsu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Horn Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will raise their hand infront of them like a sword. It will begin glowing in a pale yellow before releasing bolts of lightning in the shape of a horn that spread outwards, allowing it to attack multiple targets.

For this next technique *tosses you a sword* Catch it and infuse it with your lightning chakra, by channelling it throughout your body and into the sword. By using your chakra, the secondary ability that your sword gains is an increase in cutting power however the true power is more meaningful, as it has the capability of levitating through the air and then with the use of chakra, multiply itself to create 2 physical copies of itself. Each sword can be manipulated by sheer hand gestures alone rather than physical contact on the handles, and I want you to cause all of them to spin at their points whilst moving forwards towards your opponent, slicing him up using your infused chakra to inflict more damage.
 

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As you toss me the sword, I caught it and with a smile staked it. I like working with mine if you don't mind. And mine is more ideal. It was gotten from my sword anyway.I AM THE LIGHTNING QUEEN. Wielder of Kiba - Ameyuri Ringo
After this, she removes the two fangs behind her, then focusing her chakra and turning it into Raiton chakra, she channels it throughout her body and into the sword. After this, the sword levitates in the air and each produces 2 copy of itself. Making gestures, she makes the sword start to spin moving forward and slicing some part of the earth easily than before.
 

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Pfffft, you'll learn later that throwing the sword away was a grave mistake. why would you hurt me like that ;_;
( Raiton: Inazuma ken Fudou ) - Lightning Release: Lightning Blades Levitation
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 15 (-5 per turn)
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will channel their lightning chakra into their sword to increase its cutting capabilities, and then levitate it in front of them. They will then multiply the sword creating two extra physical copies which are then all manipulated to spin rapidly and are controlled to fly towards and cut through the opponent/s through hand gestures. While controlling the weapons, the user cannot mold chakra for other techniques and needs to keep focus.

Last C-rank WOOHOO! Let's GOOOO!!!

See what I want you to do for this jutsu is, simply concentrate on your lightning chakra. Channelling it throughout your entire body and into your more dominant hand, what your chakra will do is generate small lightning bolts that envelope your entire arm; giving it a nice tint of yellow aura. From then, jump upwards into the air and on your descent, thrust said arm into the ground whilst releasing the lightning bolts outwards as you do so, the energy within will discharge and the bolts will go into and around the ground, capable of shocking anyone caught within 5 meters of the bolts (which is short range)
 

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Oh... Sorry abt that.lol


First, I focus my chakra. And when I have focused enough, I turn my chakra into Raiton chakra and channel it into throughout my body and into my right arm. This forms lightning bolts forming a nice tint of yellow aura. I then jump up and on my return, I thrust my hand into the ground releasing the bolt
 

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It's just RP, nothing wrong. xD
( Raiton: Denki Railanshō ) - Lightning Release: Electric Discharge Palm
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will manipulate their lightning chakra in their dominant hand generating electrical bolts of lightning around their forearm. The user will then slam their palm onto the ground causing the electrical energy to become discharged sending out bolts of lightning into the ground and around them up to 5 meters.

So what I want you to do now is go through the C-rank list, and pick out one or two jutsus that you like, and one or two that you dislike, provide reasons why. Only has to be a sentence if you want to, I just want to see your opinion on them.
 

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(Raiton: Iwa Nadare) - Lightning Style: Stone
Avalanche - Don't really like this... Its like useless in battle. You have to be on a cliff
( Raiton: Denki Railanshō ) - Lightning Release:
Electric Discharge Palm - Too short range and I can attack you in air
( Raiton: Raigeki) - Lightning Release: Electric
Attack - Short to long range and multiple
(Raiton: Raigeki no Yoroi) - Lightning Release:
Lightning Strike Armour - like attack and defence
 

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Brilliant!

So starting from the B ranks, I've decided to add a template, makes techniques more personal and more understandable for you as well as more beneficial in the long run of training, plus soon enough it'll be more jutsus by post, I just need to get the hang of it. >_>

PHP:
[B]Performing the technique[/B]: 
[B]Effective uses of the technique[/B]: 
[B]How to defend from the technique[/B]: 
[B]Do you like anything about the technique[/B]? 
[B]Questions about the technique[/B]:
Let's get straight to it then.

(Raiton: Raiton no Heki ) – Lightning Release: Lightning Release Wall
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary, Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user manipulates their chakra while doing the Ox hand seal and then releases it in front of him whilst holding their hands out. By doing this, the user generates a wall of lightning energy that can defend against certain techniques. The user can use this defence to shock enemy targets who attempt close range combat and deliver massive shocks to anything that comes in contact with it.

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Begin by performing the Ox hand sign as stated and knead the raiton chakra inside your body, channelling it mainly towards both of your arms, and then extend both of your arms outwards towards one certain area; whether it'd be in front, behind or to either side (not both) And after that, release the chakra stored within your arms in the form of normal bolts, outwards. By using shape manipulation, construct the bolts into that of a single energy wall which is humongous and has the capability of defending from attacks (following elemental weaknesses of course) and shock anyone who touches it, be it through attempting to engage close combat or running into it.
 

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Okay. Pls, can you help me copy the php template into the next post? Php does not display fully. I don't know what's wrong. I will do what I can see for this one
Perform: I start by performing the Ox handseal while also focusing chakra. When I had focused enough chakra, I change the chakra into raiton chakra and flow it through my hands pointing in front of me, I release the chakra stored within my arms in the form of normal bolts, outwards. By using shape manipulation, I construct the bolts into that of a single energy wall which is humongous and has the capability of
defending from attacks and shock anyone who
touches it.
Effective use of the jutsu( I think this means combination): trying to lure taijutsu users into a close range combat and electrocuting them with this.

That's all I see
 

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Performing the technique:
How would you use the technique in battle:
How to defend from the technique:
Do you like anything about the technique?
Questions about the technique:

Any better? Yeah I reworded it now, it's basically what you see yourself doing it with, under what circumstances would this be benificial for you, when do you see yourself using it, etc.
 
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