Putting out the Flames with Better

[Saikyokami]

Aғᴛᴇʀ ɢᴀᴛʜᴇʀɪɴɢ sᴜɪᴛᴏɴ ᴄʜᴀᴋʀᴀ ɪɴᴛᴏ ᴍʏ ʜᴀɴᴅs, I ғᴏʀᴍ ᴛʜᴇ ᴛɪɢᴇʀ ʜᴀɴᴅ sᴇᴀʟ ( ᴛʜᴇ ɪʀᴏɴʏ). Aғᴛᴇʀ ғᴏʀᴍɪɴɢ ᴛʜᴇ sᴇᴀʟ I ᴄʀᴇᴀᴛᴇ ᴀ ᴏʀʙ ᴏғ ᴡᴀᴛᴇʀ ɪɴ ғʀᴏɴᴛ ᴏғ ᴍᴇ ʜᴀᴠɪɴɢ ᴀ ғᴇᴡ sʜᴀʀᴘ ᴡʜɪᴘs ᴏғ ᴡᴀᴛᴇʀ ᴇᴍᴇʀɢᴇ ғʀᴏᴍ ᴡɪᴛʜɪɴ ɪᴛ. I ᴛʜᴇɴ ᴍᴀᴋᴇ ᴛʜᴏsᴇ ᴡʜɪᴘs ғʟʏ ᴛᴏᴡᴀʀᴅs ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴄʟᴏɴᴇ, ᴏɴᴇ ᴛᴏ ᴛʜᴇ ʟᴇғᴛ ᴀɴᴅ ᴏɴᴇ ᴛᴏ ᴛʜᴇ ʀɪɢʜᴛ, ʜᴀᴠɪɴɢ ʙᴏᴛʜ sɪᴍᴜʟᴛᴀɴᴇᴏᴜsʟʏ sᴛʀɪᴋɪɴɢ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴄʟᴏɴᴇ ᴏɴ ʙᴏᴛʜ sɪᴅᴇs ᴄᴜᴛᴛɪɴɢ ɪᴛ ɪɴ ʜᴀʟғ ᴀɴᴅ ᴄᴀᴜsɪɴɢ ɪᴛ ᴛᴏ ᴅɪsᴘᴇʀsᴇ.

Aғᴛᴇʀ ғᴏʀᴍɪɴɢ ᴀ sɪɴɢʟᴇ ʜᴀɴᴅ sᴇᴀʟ, I ɢᴀᴛʜᴇʀ ᴄʜᴀᴋʀᴀ ɪɴᴛᴏ ᴍʏ ᴍᴏᴜᴛʜ ᴀɴᴅ ᴍᴏʟᴅɪɴɢ ɪᴛ ɪɴᴛᴏ sᴜɪᴛᴏɴ ᴄʜᴀᴋʀᴀ. I ᴛʜᴇɴ sᴘɪᴛ ᴛʜᴇ sᴜɪᴛᴏɴ ᴄʜᴀᴋʀᴀ ᴏᴜᴛ ᴏғ ᴍʏ ᴍᴏᴜᴛʜ ғᴏʀᴍɪɴɢ ᴀ ʀᴀᴛʜᴇʀ sɪᴢᴇʏ sᴘʜᴇʀᴇ ᴏғ ʀᴏᴛᴀᴛɪɴɢ ᴡᴀᴛᴇʀ. I ᴛʜᴇɴ ᴜsɪɴɢ ᴛʜᴇ sᴘʜᴇʀᴇ sʜᴏᴏᴛ 3 sᴍᴀʟʟ ᴀɴᴅ ғᴀsᴛ ʙᴜʟʟᴇᴛs ғʀᴏᴍ ᴡɪᴛʜɪɴ ɪᴛ, ғʟʏɪɴɢ ᴛᴏᴡᴀʀᴅs ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴄʟᴏɴᴇ ᴀᴛ ʜɪɢʜ sᴘᴇᴇᴅs ᴄᴀᴜsɪɴɢ ɪᴛ ᴛᴏ ᴅɪsᴘᴇʀsᴇ ᴅɪʀᴇᴄᴛʟʏ ᴀғᴛᴇʀ ᴄᴏɴᴛᴀᴄᴛ.

I ʜᴀᴅ ᴛᴏ ʀᴇᴘʟʏ sᴏᴏɴᴇʀ ᴏʀ L8R

After gathering suiton chakra into my hands, I form the tiger hand seal (the irony). After forming the seal I create a orb of water in front of me having a few sharp whips of water emerge from within it. I then make those whips fly towards your clone, one to the left and one to the right, having both simultaneously striking your clone on both sides cutting it in half and causing it to disperse.

After forming a single hand seal, I gather chakra into my mouth and began molding it into suiton chakra. I then spit the suiton chakra out of my mouth forming a rather sizey sphere of rotating water. I then, using the sphere shoot 3 small and fast bullet from within it, flying towards your clone at high speed causing it to disperse directly after contact.

I typed this part to show you that I didn't cheat this time as this is a font set on my keyboard as normal xd It makes the text slightly bigger but it was still 3-5 lines U_U

 

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Aғᴛᴇʀ ɢᴀᴛʜᴇʀɪɴɢ sᴜɪᴛᴏɴ ᴄʜᴀᴋʀᴀ ɪɴᴛᴏ ᴍʏ ʜᴀɴᴅs, I ғᴏʀᴍ ᴛʜᴇ ᴛɪɢᴇʀ ʜᴀɴᴅ sᴇᴀʟ ( ᴛʜᴇ ɪʀᴏɴʏ). Aғᴛᴇʀ ғᴏʀᴍɪɴɢ ᴛʜᴇ sᴇᴀʟ I ᴄʀᴇᴀᴛᴇ ᴀ ᴏʀʙ ᴏғ ᴡᴀᴛᴇʀ ɪɴ ғʀᴏɴᴛ ᴏғ ᴍᴇ ʜᴀᴠɪɴɢ ᴀ ғᴇᴡ sʜᴀʀᴘ ᴡʜɪᴘs ᴏғ ᴡᴀᴛᴇʀ ᴇᴍᴇʀɢᴇ ғʀᴏᴍ ᴡɪᴛʜɪɴ ɪᴛ. I ᴛʜᴇɴ ᴍᴀᴋᴇ ᴛʜᴏsᴇ ᴡʜɪᴘs ғʟʏ ᴛᴏᴡᴀʀᴅs ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴄʟᴏɴᴇ, ᴏɴᴇ ᴛᴏ ᴛʜᴇ ʟᴇғᴛ ᴀɴᴅ ᴏɴᴇ ᴛᴏ ᴛʜᴇ ʀɪɢʜᴛ, ʜᴀᴠɪɴɢ ʙᴏᴛʜ sɪᴍᴜʟᴛᴀɴᴇᴏᴜsʟʏ sᴛʀɪᴋɪɴɢ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴄʟᴏɴᴇ ᴏɴ ʙᴏᴛʜ sɪᴅᴇs ᴄᴜᴛᴛɪɴɢ ɪᴛ ɪɴ ʜᴀʟғ ᴀɴᴅ ᴄᴀᴜsɪɴɢ ɪᴛ ᴛᴏ ᴅɪsᴘᴇʀsᴇ.

Aғᴛᴇʀ ғᴏʀᴍɪɴɢ ᴀ sɪɴɢʟᴇ ʜᴀɴᴅ sᴇᴀʟ, I ɢᴀᴛʜᴇʀ ᴄʜᴀᴋʀᴀ ɪɴᴛᴏ ᴍʏ ᴍᴏᴜᴛʜ ᴀɴᴅ ᴍᴏʟᴅɪɴɢ ɪᴛ ɪɴᴛᴏ sᴜɪᴛᴏɴ ᴄʜᴀᴋʀᴀ. I ᴛʜᴇɴ sᴘɪᴛ ᴛʜᴇ sᴜɪᴛᴏɴ ᴄʜᴀᴋʀᴀ ᴏᴜᴛ ᴏғ ᴍʏ ᴍᴏᴜᴛʜ ғᴏʀᴍɪɴɢ ᴀ ʀᴀᴛʜᴇʀ sɪᴢᴇʏ sᴘʜᴇʀᴇ ᴏғ ʀᴏᴛᴀᴛɪɴɢ ᴡᴀᴛᴇʀ. I ᴛʜᴇɴ ᴜsɪɴɢ ᴛʜᴇ sᴘʜᴇʀᴇ sʜᴏᴏᴛ 3 sᴍᴀʟʟ ᴀɴᴅ ғᴀsᴛ ʙᴜʟʟᴇᴛs ғʀᴏᴍ ᴡɪᴛʜɪɴ ɪᴛ, ғʟʏɪɴɢ ᴛᴏᴡᴀʀᴅs ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴄʟᴏɴᴇ ᴀᴛ ʜɪɢʜ sᴘᴇᴇᴅs ᴄᴀᴜsɪɴɢ ɪᴛ ᴛᴏ ᴅɪsᴘᴇʀsᴇ ᴅɪʀᴇᴄᴛʟʏ ᴀғᴛᴇʀ ᴄᴏɴᴛᴀᴄᴛ.

I ʜᴀᴅ ᴛᴏ ʀᴇᴘʟʏ sᴏᴏɴᴇʀ ᴏʀ L8R

After gathering suiton chakra into my hands, I form the tiger hand seal (the irony). After forming the seal I create a orb of water in front of me having a few sharp whips of water emerge from within it. I then make those whips fly towards your clone, one to the left and one to the right, having both simultaneously striking your clone on both sides cutting it in half and causing it to disperse.

After forming a single hand seal, I gather chakra into my mouth and began molding it into suiton chakra. I then spit the suiton chakra out of my mouth forming a rather sizey sphere of rotating water. I then, using the sphere shoot 3 small and fast bullet from within it, flying towards your clone at high speed causing it to disperse directly after contact.

I typed this part to show you that I didn't cheat this time as this is a font set on my keyboard as normal xd It makes the text slightly bigger but it was still 3-5 lines U_U

._. you make this a lot harder then it is.

(Suiton: Mizu Kamikiri) - Water Release: Rising Water Slicer
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: After performing the Tiger hand seal the user creates a fast jet of water running through the ground that is powerful enough to slice through solid rock.

form the tiger hand seal and then create a fast moving jet of water and make it run through the ground at that rock.

if you do it correctly, it should slice it.

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(Suiton: Ja No Kuchi) - Water Release: Water Snakes Mouth
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After performing the required hand seals Monkey → Rat → Tiger → Dragon → Horse → Dragon it then allows the user to generate a spinning column of water which will take the form of a snake with a gaping jaw. This snake can twist and follow its targets and swallow them. After it has swallowed them, it turns into a river that carries the enemy away.

form the Monkey → Rat → Tiger → Dragon → Horse → Dragon hand seals and then generate a spinning column of water and then use shape manipulation to form it into a snake with an open jaw. Send it at my clone and have it swallow it.

 

[Saikyokami]

Tʜᴀᴛ... ᴏʀ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴍᴀᴋɪɴɢ ɪᴛ ᴀ Lᴏᴛ EASIER ᴛʜᴀɴ ɪᴛ ʜᴀs ᴛᴏ ʙᴇ ᴏ.O


Aғᴛᴇʀ ғᴏʀᴍɪɴɢ ᴛʜᴇ ᴛɪɢᴇʀ ʜᴀɴᴅ sᴇᴀʟ Wᴏʀsᴇ ʙᴇɢɪɴs ᴛᴏ ᴄʀᴇᴀᴛᴇ ᴀ ᴍᴏᴠɪɴɢ ᴊᴇᴛ ᴏғ ᴡᴀᴛᴇʀ ᴡʜɪᴄʜ ᴛʀᴀᴠᴇʟs ᴀᴛ ʜɪɢʜ sᴘᴇᴇᴅs. ᴀғᴛᴇʀ ᴛʜᴇ ᴊᴇᴛ ɪs ғᴜʟʟʏ ғᴏʀᴍᴇᴅ Wᴏʀsᴇ ᴍᴀᴋᴇ ᴛʜᴇ ᴊᴜsᴛ ʀᴜɴ ᴛʜʀᴏᴜɢʜ ᴛʜᴇ ɢʀᴏᴜɴᴅ ᴡɪᴛʜ ɪᴛ's ʜɪɢʜ sᴘᴇᴇᴅ ᴍᴏᴠᴇᴍᴇɴᴛ ʀᴇᴀᴄʜɪɴɢ ᴛʜᴇ ʀᴏᴄᴋ ᴀғᴛᴇʀ ᴊᴜsᴛ ᴀ ғᴇᴡ sᴇᴄᴏɴᴅs. Aғᴛᴇʀ ᴄᴏᴍɪɴɢ ɪɴᴛᴏ ᴄᴏɴᴛᴀᴄᴛ ᴡɪᴛʜ ᴛʜᴇ ʀᴏᴄᴋ ᴛʜᴇ ᴡᴀᴛᴇʀ ᴊᴇᴛ sʟɪᴄᴇs sᴛʀᴀɪɢʜᴛ ᴛʜʀᴏᴜɢʜ ɪᴛ.

Tʜᴀᴛ...Wᴀs..... Aᴡᴇ..ʟᴀᴍᴇ.

Aғᴛᴇʀ ғᴏʀᴍɪɴɢ ᴛʜᴇ ʜᴀɴᴅ sᴇᴀʟs Mᴏɴᴋᴇʏ → Rᴀᴛ → Tɪɢᴇʀ → Dʀᴀɢᴏɴ → Hᴏʀsᴇ → Dʀᴀɢᴏɴ Wᴏʀsᴇ ʙᴇɢᴀɴ ᴛᴏ ɢᴇɴᴇʀᴀᴛᴇ ᴀ Cᴏʟᴜᴍɴ ᴏғ ᴡᴀᴛᴇʀ ᴛʜᴀᴛ ʙᴇɢɪɴɴɪɴɢ sᴘɪɴɴɪɴɢ. Wᴏʀsᴇ ᴛʜᴇɴ ʙᴇɢɪɴs ᴛᴏ ᴜsᴇ sʜᴀᴘᴇ ᴍᴀɴɪᴘᴜʟᴀᴛɪᴏɴ ᴛᴏ ғᴏʀᴍ ᴛʜᴇ ɴᴏᴡ sᴘɪɴɴɪɴɢ ᴄᴏʟᴜᴍɴ ᴏʀ ᴡᴀᴛᴇʀ ɪɴᴛᴏ ᴀ sɴᴀᴋᴇ ᴡɪᴛʜ ɪᴛ's ᴊᴀᴡ ᴏᴘᴇɴ. Wᴏʀsᴇ ᴛʜᴇɴ sᴇɴᴅs ᴛʜᴇ sɴᴀᴋᴇ ғʟʏɪɴɢ ᴛᴏᴡᴀʀᴅs ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴄʟᴏɴᴇ Hᴀᴠɪɴɢ ᴛʜᴇ ᴡᴀᴛᴇʀ sɴᴀᴋᴇ sᴡᴀʟʟᴏᴡ ʜɪᴍ ᴡʜᴏʟᴇ.

Lɪᴋᴇ ᴀ sɴᴀᴋᴇ ᴀɴᴅ ᴀ ᴍᴏᴜsᴇ.

 

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MAYYYBEE maybe not ._.

i'm going to call you worse from now on lol


(Suiton: Suikō Teppō no Jutsu) - Water Release: Water Shark Gun Technique
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: An advanced version of Water Release: Water Shark Breakthrough in which the user can summon up to three sharks at once rapidly to advance on the target, and can cause severe internal injuries.
Note: Requires a water source

Remember Water Shark Breakthrough do that again, but this time add more chakra and summon 3 sharks at once and have been rapidly kill my clone.

(creates clone)

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(Suiton: Funshutsu Mizu Kinko) - Water Release: Gushing Water Imprisonment
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates a flow of gushing water under the opponent which traps them in a sphere of water. The user can perform an attack while the opponent is trapped. This jutsu is similar to Water Prison Technique, though the user doesn't need to keep his arm in the sphere of water.
Note: Technique creates its own water source

Very cool technique, you can create and manipulate water underneath my clone and then have the water rise up super quickly and trap him in a sphere of water. Unlike the c rank version, you don't have to keep your hand inside the orb.

 

[Saikyokami]

Please feel free to U_U I really only changed back to yang because of people kept bugging me about it xd I really did it moments before my premy ran out ~_~ I cut it really close XD

I ᴡᴀʟᴋ ᴏᴠᴇʀ ᴛᴏ ᴛʜᴇ ʟᴀᴋᴇ ᴀɴᴅ ʙᴇɢᴀɴ ɢᴀᴛʜᴇʀɪɴɢ sᴜɪᴛᴏɴ ᴄʜᴀᴋʀᴀ ɪɴᴛᴏ ᴍʏ ғᴇᴇᴛ? ᴛʜᴇɴ ɪ ʀᴇʟᴇᴀsᴇ ᴛʜᴇ sᴜɪᴛᴏɴ ᴄʜᴀᴋʀᴀ ɪɴᴛᴏ ᴛʜᴇ ᴡᴀᴛᴇʀ ᴜɴᴅᴇʀɴᴇᴀᴛʜ ᴍʏ ғᴇᴇᴛ ᴀɴᴅ ᴜsᴇ sʜᴀᴘᴇ ᴍᴀɴɪᴘᴜʟᴀᴛɪᴏɴ ᴛᴏ ᴛᴜʀɴ ᴛʜᴇ ᴡᴀᴛᴇʀ ɪɴғᴜsᴇᴅ ᴄʜᴀᴋʀᴀ ɪɴᴛᴏ 3 sʜᴀʀᴋs ᴍᴀᴅᴇ ᴏғ ᴡᴀᴛᴇʀ. I ʙᴇɢᴀɴ ᴛᴏ ᴄʜᴀɴɴᴇʟ ᴍᴏʀᴇ ᴄʜᴀᴋʀᴀ ɪɴᴛᴏ ᴛʜᴇᴍ ғᴜʀᴛʜᴇʀ ɪɴᴄʀᴇᴀsɪɴɢ ᴛʜᴇɪʀ ᴀᴘᴘᴇᴀʀᴀɴᴄᴇ sᴏ ᴛʜᴀᴛ ᴛʜᴇʏ ʟᴏᴏᴋs ᴍᴏʀᴇ ʟɪᴋᴇ sʜᴀʀᴋs I ᴛʜᴇɴ Aɪᴍ ᴀɴᴅ ʟᴀᴜɴᴄʜ ᴛʜᴇ sʜᴀʀᴋs ᴅɪʀᴇᴄᴛʟʏ ᴀᴛ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴄʟᴏɴᴇ ʀᴀᴘɪᴅʟʏ ᴀᴛᴛᴀᴄᴋɪɴɢ ᴀɴᴅ ᴋɪʟʟɪɴɢ ɪᴛ.


Zᴀʙᴜᴢᴀ ᴅɪᴅɴ'ᴛ ᴋɴᴏᴡ ᴛʜɪs ᴛᴇᴄʜɴɪǫᴜᴇ? ~_~ Nᴏᴏʙ ᴍɪsᴛᴀᴋᴇ

I ғɪʀsᴛ ʙᴇɢᴀɴ ʙʏ ᴍᴀɴɪᴘᴜʟᴀᴛɪɴɢ ᴍʏ ᴄʜᴀᴋʀᴀ ɪɴᴛᴏ ᴛʜᴇ ᴡᴀᴛᴇʀ ᴜɴᴅᴇʀɴᴇᴀᴛʜ ᴍʏ ғᴇᴇᴛ ᴄʜᴀɴɴᴇʟɪɴɢ ᴛʜᴇ ᴄʜᴀᴋʀᴀ ᴛʜʀᴏᴜɢʜ ᴛʜᴇ ᴡᴀᴛᴇʀ ᴛᴏᴡᴀʀᴅs ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴄʟᴏɴᴇ ᴀɴᴅ ʙᴇɢᴀɴ ᴛᴏ ᴍᴀᴋᴇ ᴛʜᴇ ᴡᴀᴛᴇʀ ʙᴇʟᴏᴡ ʜɪᴍ ʀɪsɪɴɢ ᴜᴘ ǫᴜɪᴄᴋʟʏ ɪɴᴛᴏ ᴀ sᴘʜᴇʀᴇ ᴛʀᴀᴘᴘɪɴɢ ʜɪᴍ ᴡɪᴛʜɪɴ I ᴛʜᴇɴ ʙᴇɢᴀɴ ɢᴀᴛʜᴇʀɪɴɢ sᴜɪᴛᴏɴ ᴄʜᴀᴋʀᴀ ɪɴᴛᴏ ᴍʏ ғᴇᴇᴛ? ᴛʜᴇɴ ɪ ʀᴇʟᴇᴀsᴇ ᴛʜᴇ sᴜɪᴛᴏɴ ᴄʜᴀᴋʀᴀ ɪɴᴛᴏ ᴛʜᴇ ᴡᴀᴛᴇʀ ᴜɴᴅᴇʀɴᴇᴀᴛʜ ᴍʏ ғᴇᴇᴛ ᴀɴᴅ ᴜsᴇ sʜᴀᴘᴇ ᴍᴀɴɪᴘᴜʟᴀᴛɪᴏɴ ᴛᴏ ᴛᴜʀɴ ᴛʜᴇ ᴡᴀᴛᴇʀ ɪɴғᴜsᴇᴅ ᴄʜᴀᴋʀᴀ ɪɴᴛᴏ 3 sʜᴀʀᴋs ᴍᴀᴅᴇ ᴏғ ᴡᴀᴛᴇʀ. I ʙᴇɢᴀɴ ᴛᴏ ᴄʜᴀɴɴᴇʟ ᴍᴏʀᴇ ᴄʜᴀᴋʀᴀ ɪɴᴛᴏ ᴛʜᴇᴍ ғᴜʀᴛʜᴇʀ ɪɴᴄʀᴇᴀsɪɴɢ ᴛʜᴇɪʀ ᴀᴘᴘᴇᴀʀᴀɴᴄᴇ sᴏ ᴛʜᴀᴛ ᴛʜᴇʏ ʟᴏᴏᴋs ᴍᴏʀᴇ ʟɪᴋᴇ sʜᴀʀᴋs I ᴛʜᴇɴ Aɪᴍ ᴀɴᴅ ʟᴀᴜɴᴄʜ ᴛʜᴇ sʜᴀʀᴋs ᴅɪʀᴇᴄᴛʟʏ ᴀᴛ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴄʟᴏɴᴇ ʀᴀᴘɪᴅʟʏ ᴀᴛᴛᴀᴄᴋɪɴɢ ᴀɴᴅ ᴋɪʟʟɪɴɢ ɪᴛ.

 

[Better]

Well compared to Kisame, Zabuza was a noob O_<

(Suiton: Mizurappa) - Water Release: Water Horn
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After waving the Dragon → Tiger → Rabbit hand seals, the user creates a big jet of water that is launched from their mouth. This technique works exceptionally well with Lava Release: Quicklime Congealing Technique to help it become like cement.

Focus your chakra and form the given hand seals, then i want you to release that chakra from your mouth and create a big jet of water. Simple really, yet very effective.
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(Suiton: Haran Banshō) - Water Release: Stormy Blockade
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will slam their hands against then ground allowing him/her to summon a massive amount of water from the sky, crushing it into the opponent. If needed, the user can cancel the technique in an instant.
Note: The water needs to be summoned at least 10 meters above the opponent to have any real effect.

Another good one, i'm sure you know this one. Slam your hand on to the ground and summon a massive amount of water from the sky. Anything below 10 feet of summoning the water makes it ineffective.
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(Suiton: Mizugakure no jutsu) - Water Release Hidden Amongst Water Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra and then blend in with a water source to be undetected by the enemy for a short period of time. However Sensory Ninja and Doujutsu users can find the enemy easily within the water source.

After summoning all that water just now, manipulate your chakra and blend with the water and become it. Basically hiding like a mole but in water. Except you can't sense anyone in it.

 

[Saikyokami]

I agree XD

Back to talking out of body.

Aғᴛᴇʀ ɢᴀᴛʜᴇʀɪɴɢ ᴄʜᴀᴋʀᴀ ɪɴᴛᴏ Yᴀɴɢ's ᴛʜʀᴏᴀᴛ, ʜᴇ ʙᴇɢɪɴs ᴛᴏ ᴄʜᴀɴɴᴇʟs ɪᴛ ɪɴᴛᴏ ʜɪs ᴍᴏᴜᴛʜ ᴀɴᴅ ʙᴇɢɪɴs ᴍᴏʟᴅɪɴɢ ɪᴛ ɪɴᴛᴏ sᴜɪᴛᴏɴ ᴄʜᴀᴋʀᴀ. Yᴀɴɢ ᴛʜᴇɴ, ᴡɪᴛʜ ᴛʜᴇ sᴜɪᴛᴏɴ ᴄʜᴀᴋʀᴀ ɢᴀᴛʜᴇʀᴇᴅ ɪɴ ʜɪs ᴍᴏᴜᴛʜ ʙᴇɢɪɴs ᴘᴇʀғᴏʀᴍɪɴɢ ᴛʜᴇ ʜᴀɴᴅsᴇᴀʟs Dʀᴀɢᴏɴ → Tɪɢᴇʀ → Rᴀʙʙɪᴛ. Yᴀɴɢ ᴛʜᴇɴ ᴄʀᴇᴀᴛᴇs ᴀ ʙɪɢ ᴊᴇᴛ ᴏғ ᴡᴀᴛᴇʀ ᴡɪᴛʜɪɴ ʜɪs ᴍᴏᴜᴛʜ ᴜsɪɴɢ ᴛʜᴇ ᴄʜᴀᴋʀᴀ. Yᴀɴɢ ᴛʜᴇɴ ʟᴀᴜɴᴄʜs ᴛʜᴇ ᴡᴀᴛᴇʀ ᴊᴇᴛ ғʀᴏᴍ ʜɪs ᴍᴏᴜᴛʜ ᴅɪʀᴇᴄᴛʟʏ ᴀᴛ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴄʟᴏɴᴇ ᴄᴀᴜsɪɴɢ ᴛʜᴇ ᴊᴇᴛ ᴛᴏ ᴇxᴘʟᴏᴅᴇ ᴜᴘᴏɴ ᴄᴏɴᴛᴀᴄᴛ ᴄʀᴜsʜᴇᴅ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴄʟᴏɴᴇ ᴡɪᴛʜ ᴛʜᴇ ᴘʀᴇssᴜʀᴇ ᴄᴀᴜsɪɴɢ ɪᴛ ᴛᴏ ᴅɪsᴘᴇʀsᴇ.

Yᴀɴɢ ʙᴇɢɪɴs ᴛᴏ ɢᴀᴛʜᴇʀ ᴄʜᴀᴋʀᴀ ɪɴᴛᴏ ʜɪs ʜᴀɴᴅ. Aғᴛᴇʀ ɢᴀᴛʜᴇʀ ᴇɴᴏᴜɢʜ ᴄʜᴀᴋʀᴀ Yᴀɴɢ ᴍᴏʟᴅs sᴀɪᴅ ᴄʜᴀᴋʀᴀ ɪɴᴛᴏ sᴜɪᴛᴏɴ ᴄʜᴀᴋʀᴀ. Yᴀɴɢ ᴛʜᴇɴ Sʟᴀᴍɴs ʙᴏᴛʜ ʜɪs ʜᴀɴᴅs ᴏɴ ᴛʜᴇ ɢʀᴏᴜɴᴅ ᴄᴀᴜsɪɴɢ ᴀ ɢɪᴀɴᴛ ᴘᴏᴏʟ ᴏғ ᴡᴀᴛᴇʀ ᴛᴏ ᴍᴀɴɪғᴇsᴛ ᴇxᴀᴄᴛʟʏ 11 ғᴇᴇᴛ ᴀʙᴏᴠᴇ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴄʟᴏɴᴇ ().

Aғᴛᴇʀ ғᴏʀᴍɪɴɢ ᴛʜᴇ ɢɪᴀɴᴛ ᴘᴏᴏʟ ᴏғ ᴡᴀᴛᴇʀ ᴀʙᴏᴠᴇ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴄʟᴏɴᴇ, Yᴀɴɢ ʙᴇɢɪɴs ᴛᴏ ᴜᴛɪʟɪᴢᴇ ᴄʜᴀᴋʀᴀ ᴍᴀɴɪᴘᴜʟᴀᴛɪᴏɴ ᴛᴏ ᴍɪx ᴀɴᴅ ʙʟᴇɴᴅ ʜɪs ᴏᴡɴ ᴄʜᴀᴋʀᴀ ᴡɪᴛʜ ᴛʜᴇ ᴡᴀᴛᴇʀ ᴀʙᴏᴠᴇ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴄʟᴏɴᴇ. ᴀғᴛᴇʀ ʙʟᴇɴᴅɪɴɢ ᴀɴᴅ ᴍɪxɪɴɢ ʜɪs ᴏᴡɴ ᴄʜᴀᴋʀᴀ ᴡɪᴛʜ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴄʟᴏɴᴇs, ʏᴀɴɢ ʙᴇɢɪɴs ᴛᴏ ʙᴇᴄᴏᴍᴇ ᴛʜᴇ ᴡᴀᴛᴇʀ ɪᴛsᴇʟғ. ʜɪᴅɪɴɢ ᴡɪᴛʜɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ᴡᴀᴛᴇʀ ᴀʙᴏᴠᴇ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴄʟᴏɴᴇ ʏᴀɴɢ ᴛʜᴇɴ ᴛᴀᴋᴇs ᴏᴜᴛ ʜɪs sᴡᴏʀᴅ ᴀɴᴅ sᴇᴘᴀʀᴀᴛᴇᴅ ғʀᴏᴍ ᴛʜᴇ ᴡᴀᴛᴇʀ ᴀʙᴏᴠᴇ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴄʟᴏɴᴇ sʟɪᴄɪɴɢ ʜɪs ʜᴇᴀᴅ ᴏᴘᴇɴ :3 ᴀɴᴅ ᴄᴀᴜsɪɴɢ ʜɪᴍ ᴛᴏ ᴅɪsᴘᴇʀsᴇ.

 

[Better]

11 feet works U_U

(Suiton: Bakusui Shōha) - Water Release: Exploding Water Colliding Wave
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user performs the snake hand seal and creates a large volume of water from their mouth spilling it toward the ground and lifting them up into the air. The user can also ride the wave, allowing him to travel at high speeds and attacking the enemy. The user can create a small ocean worth of water even in barren conditions and can use the water for additional techniques.

Kisame technique he used the FIRST TIME Kisame and Gai fight. Form the snake hand seal and spill out a large volume of water from your mouth to the ground, you will be risen up with the water and ride the wave to the forest.

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(Suiton: Goshokuzame) - Water Style: 5 feeding sharks
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user will create 5 sharks of water to attack his opponent(s) by putting his hand on a water source. While being in a water source, these sharks can regenerate from surrounding water, making them difficult to destroy. However, if the user severe his connection with the water, the sharks will disperse.
Note: Requires water source to use.

After riding the wave and it stopping, i want you to manipulate your the water and create 5 sharks by placing you hand on the water and releasing you chakra. You sharks can reform from the water source over and over again as long as you have your hand on the water.

 

[Saikyokami]

Aғᴛᴇʀ ʟɪsᴛᴇɴɪɴɢ ᴛᴏ ʜɪs ɪɴsᴛʀᴜᴄᴛɪᴏɴs ʙᴇɢɪɴs ᴛᴏ ɢᴀᴛʜᴇʀ ᴄʜᴀᴋʀᴀ ɪɴᴛᴏ ʜɪs ᴍᴏᴜᴛʜ ᴍᴏʟᴅɪɴɢ ɪᴛ ɪɴᴛᴏ sᴜɪᴛᴏɴ ᴄʜᴀᴋʀᴀ. Aғᴛᴇʀ ᴘᴇʀғᴏʀᴍɪɴɢ ᴛʜᴇ sɴᴀᴋᴇ ʜᴀɴᴅ sᴇᴀʟ, Yᴀɴɢ sᴘɪʟʟs ᴏᴜᴛ ᴛʜᴇ sᴜɪᴛᴏɴ ᴄʜᴀᴋʀᴀ ɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ғᴏʀᴍ ᴏғ ᴀ ʟᴀʀɢᴇ ᴀᴍᴏᴜɴᴛ ᴏғ ᴡᴀᴛᴇʀ ғʀᴏᴍ ʜɪs ᴍᴏᴜᴛʜ ᴏɴᴛᴏ ᴛʜᴇ ɢʀᴏᴜɴᴅ. Yᴀɴɢ ᴛʜᴇɴ ʙᴇɢɪɴs ᴛᴏ ʙᴇ ʀᴏsɪɴ ғʀᴏᴍ ᴛʜᴇ ɢʀᴏᴜɴᴅ ᴀʟᴏɴɢ ᴡɪᴛʜ ᴛʜᴇ ᴡᴀᴛᴇʀ. Yᴀɴɢ ᴛʜᴇɴ ʙᴇɢɪɴs ᴛᴏ ʀɪᴅᴇ ᴛʜᴇ ᴡᴀᴛᴇʀ ʟɪᴋᴇ ᴀ ᴡᴀᴠᴇ ʀɪᴅɪɴɢ ɪᴛ ɪɴᴛᴏ ᴛʜᴇ ғᴏʀᴇsᴛ. Aғᴛᴇʀ ʀᴇᴀᴄʜɪɴɢ ᴛʜᴇ ғᴏʀᴇsᴛ Yᴀɴɢ ʙᴇɢɪɴs ᴛᴏ sʟᴏᴡ ᴛʜᴇ ᴡᴀᴠᴇ ᴅᴏᴡɴ ᴜɴᴛɪʟ ɪᴛ ᴄᴏᴍᴘʟᴇᴛᴇʟʏ sᴛᴏᴘs. Yᴀɴɢ ᴛʜᴇɴ ɢᴀᴛʜᴇʀ ᴄʜᴀᴋʀᴀ ɪɴᴛᴏ ʜɪs ʜᴀɴᴅ ᴀɴᴅ ʙᴇɢɪɴs ᴛᴏ ᴍᴏʟᴅ ɪᴛ ɪɴᴛᴏ sᴜɪᴛᴏɴ ᴄʜᴀᴋʀᴀ. Hᴇ ᴛʜᴇɴ ʙᴇɢɪɴs ᴛᴏ ᴛᴏᴜᴄʜ ᴛʜᴇ ᴡᴀᴛᴇʀ ғʀᴏᴍ ᴛʜᴇ ᴡᴀᴠᴇ ᴀɴᴅ ʀᴇʟᴇᴀsɪɴɢ ʜɪs ᴄʜᴀᴋʀᴀ ɪɴᴛᴏ ɪᴛ. Yᴀɴɢ ᴛʜᴇɴ ʙᴇɢɪɴs ᴍᴀɴɪᴘᴜʟᴀᴛɪɴɢ ᴛʜᴇ ᴄʜᴀᴋʀᴀ ɪɴғᴜsᴇᴅ ᴡᴀᴛᴇʀ ᴛᴏ ᴄʀᴇᴀᴛᴇ 5 sʜᴀʀᴋs.

 

[Better]

Great

(Suiton: Uramiame no Jutsu) - Water Release: Grudge Rain Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A (-15 per turn the target remains in the water)
Description: The user will first perform Dog hand seal and then the user create a large storm cloud, which in turn produces rain. The large amount of rain then turns into a large wave of water and sweeps the enemy off their feet. While the targets are trapped in the water, their chakra will slowly be drained away. Chakra draining properties last for two turns.

First I want to form the dog hand seal and then release your chakra to form a large black storm cloud in the air. This cloud will then produce a large amount of rain that will accumulate into a wave of water that sweeps my cloud of their feet

It also has chakra draining ability so my clone should disperse.

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( Suiton: Suishinshū ) - Water Release: Water Quaking Pillar
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user jumps into the air and then stabs his sword intothe ground, where he causes water to burst up around him and creating a pillar of water to rise up in the air repelling the enemy.

You got a sword? If not, here catch *Gin throws Shinso*

I want you to jump into the air and then stab your sword into the ground. After doing that release your water chakra and water should burst up around you creating a pillar to repel your surroundings.

( Suiton: Seiryūshō ) - Water Release: Azure Dragon Palm
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user unleashes a spiralling torrent of water from his hands.

Very simple, Focus your chakra in your hands and release a spiraling torrent form them.

 

[Saikyokami]

After forming the dog hand seal Yang gathers his suiton chakra within his hands and begins focusing it into suiton chakra. after completely molding the chakra into suiton chakra Yang holds his hands out and releasing the chakra into then air in the form of a black storm cloud. the clouds then begins produce moisture and begin to cause rain to fall down. The rain then accumulates into a wave of water that sleeps you clone off it feet while simultaneously sapping it's chakra causing it to disperse.

Yang fire catches the sword you tossed to him. After catching the sword Yang begins to gather chakra within his hands molding it into suiton chakra. after molding the chakra into suiton chakra Yang leaps into the air and upon landing yang stabs the sword deep within the ground. Yang then releases the water chakra within his hands causing water to burst around the sword creating a wall like substance that begins to repel everything near him.

Very simple, Focus your chakra in your hands and release a spiraling torrent form them.

after gathering chakra within his hand yang molds said chakra into suiton chakra. He then begans to focus the suiton chakra within his hands. after releasing all the chakra within his hands he creates a high speed violently spiralling torrent which he then uses to ..... you clone causing it to disperse.

Damn vauge as description but you wanted 3-4 lines XD

Is to lazy to find ym font..
Changing name to caliburn XD

 

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lmaooo, isn't there a rule against that ._.

( Suiton: Shizuka Yari ) - Water Release: Droplet Spear
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: Using their skills with water release, the user creates an orb of water in their hand which they can then release in the form of multiple spearing streams, that they can use to attack their enemy from multiple directions or in spirals.

Focus your water chakra and create an orb of water in your dominate hand. Then release the the orb of water into multiple streams of water spears.

(creates clone)

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( Suiton: Nagareru no Yari ) - Water Release: Flowing Spear
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user creates crescent shaped blades of water, which follow the arcs of their hand movements attacking opponents infront of them or they can twirl around while generating the crescent blades to attack all around them.

Focus your chakra and release crescent shaped blades water (think Getsuga tensho cept without the sword and water ~_~) The blades go along with your hand movement. This is only as you release it, I don't think you can control it afterwards tho

 

[Saikyokami]

Dunno it was gonna be a April fools joke but.. my bank played one on me and didn't pay me on the day I'm supposed to get paid Bastards ~_~.

I first began to gather chakra into my left hand concentrating and molding that chakra into suiton chakra. I then focus the water chakra and release it all from my hand creating a orb of water in the palm of my hand. I then release the orb from my hand allowing it to transform into various streams of water spears.

I first began to gather chakra within my hands molding it into suiton chakra. I then move my right hand in a crescent shape while simultaneously releasing a sharp wave of suiton chakra in the form of a crescent moon slicing straight though your clone.

 

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kill them ._.

Suiton: Daibakufu no Jutsu) - Water Style: Giant Water Vortex Technique
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: After doing the needed hand seals Tiger → Ox → Monkey → Rabbit → Ram → Boar → Ox → Horse → Monkey → Tiger → Dog → Tiger → Snake → Tiger → Ox → Monkey → Rabbit → Bird, extends water over a large scale, surges and rises up to several dozen meters high. Then it streams down to the ground in one big cascade, much like a gigantic waterfall. In doing so, it resembles a huge wave, with tremendous power that can hollow out the ground. What remains after that technique's utilization is reminiscent of no less than the aftermath of a natural disaster. This is a considerably advanced ninjutsu, and activating this technique requires a fair amount of chakra.
Note: Technique Requires a water source.

Form the needed hand seals Tiger → Ox → Monkey → Rabbit → Ram → Boar → Ox → Horse → Monkey → Tiger → Dog → Tiger → Snake → Tiger → Ox → Monkey → Rabbit → Bird and release your chakra into the water source we created. The water should rise up and start surging up at an alarming rate. Then it streams out into a giant cascade. It's power is immense and will send my clone back back back. lol

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you know the rasengan?

 

[Saikyokami]

Ikr?

I wish uchiha could have dark release :T_T: Menma's rasengan and rasen shuriken are dark versions of narutos jutsu XD
but he also fused with tobi so he has a sharigan so to make him have a sharigan I made him uchiha XD.


After forming the hand seals Tiger → Ox → Monkey → Rabbit → Ram → Boar → Ox → Horse → Monkey → Tiger → Dog → Tiger → Snake → Tiger → Ox → Monkey → Rabbit → Bird Yang gathers chakra into his hands and hold them out releasing the chakra into the water source we previously created. after pouring his chakra into the water source, the water begins surging up at an alarming rate.
the water source then streams out into a giant cascade having its immense power send your clone flying back again.

naoh I don't know rasengan but I do know hozuki techs

 

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Yang.. what are you saying xD

(Suiton: Senkogenma Kujo) – Water Release: Flash Grinding Destruction
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage point: 60
Description: As his opponent is standing on a source of water, the user will create. four sharks of water. Those sharks will rush at their target, come out and knock the opponent high into the air. breaking several of his bones in the process. Then, as his enemy is in a very vulnerable position, the user can freely attack with swords or other ninja techniques.
Note: Requires a water source.

My clone on the water source, I want you to release your chakra and create 4 water sharks. Have them rush at my clone and the come out and send my clone high into the air, causing it to disperse. If it was a regular shinobi, he'd have broken bones and shiz.

 

[Saikyokami]

you said do I know rasengan U_U
rasengan made me think of menma's rasnegan.
menma is the black haired naruto in my signature
menma rasengan looks like this fc00.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2012/239/a/9/menma_by_agito_lind-d5cldli.png
ie a dark release tech version of rasengan U_U but cooler than the current one.

and I have a hozuki bio but dats getting dropped because hes bakura

With your clone on our water source, Yang manipulates his chakra within the water (he created it from his own chakra) to form 4 sharks of water. Yang then have those sharks rush towards your clone knocking him into the air. severely damaging him causing him to disperse.

 

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just because you write a whole lot talking doesn't mean you can slack off on the description xD

again ~_~

 

[Saikyokami]

With your clone on our water source, Yang to form 4 sharks of water. Yangs gathers chakra within his body molding it into suiton chakra and releasing it into the water source of which your clone stand upon. Yang then begins to use chakra manipulation on the water to form 4 great white chakra of water which bum rushes your clone knocking him into the air. severely damaging him causing him to disperse.

 

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good moving on,

(Suiton: Kyojin Nami Shougeki) – Water Release: Giant Wave Crash
Rank: A
Type: Offensive , Deffence
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user gathers a large amount of water that can then be used to crash into the opponent. It is strong enough to push back Killer bee in Eight tales form.
Note: Requires a water source

I want you to gather a lot of charka and release it into the water gathering a whole lot of water then use that water that has been gathered and release it over there at the forest's directions.

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