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O_O Gaara> Tobi U_U just thought i say that... again.

(Suiton: Suishi no Jutsu) – Water Drowning Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive, supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: After waving the Boar → Dog → Horse → Tiger hand seals, the user will gather a large amount of water to form a large spiraling stream of water. It can be guided to strike a target in a number of angles.
Note: Requires a nearby water source.

Manipulate the water source and form the hand seals Boar → Dog → Horse → Tiger, release it and gather a large amount of water to form a spiraling stream of water. Aim it at my clone

(creates clone)

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(Suiton: Kokuun) - Water Style: Black Clouds
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description:After performing the Ram → Snake → Tiger hand seals the user creates a flammable black mist that forms a small cloud. The user can then move the cloud above their target and disperse it, covering the target in flammable oil.

Focus your chakra and form the Ram → Snake → Tiger hand seals and create a flammable black mist, and then form it into a small black cloud, you can manipulate the cloud anyway you want, and then when your ready disperse it on my clone.

(creates another clone)

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i want you to create me a water clone, then

(Suiton: Mizu Tsurudan) - Water Release: Water Tendril Bullets
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will manipulate one of their water clones to dissolve back to water and turn into four pointed projectiles that shoot at the target.
Note: Must create a water clone before hand.

I want you to manipulate the water it's made up of and turn it back into water. Then turn it into four projectiles aimed at my clone.

(creates clone)

 

[Saikyokami]

I perform the Boar → Dog → Horse → Tiger hand seals before I focus and gather together some chakra. I then release it into the nearby pond and begin manipulating it. I draw a spiraling stream of water from the source, making it twist bend and swirl around, getting used to the motion of the water. I then make it go back into the pond.

I perform the ram → Snake → tiger as I'm gathering chakra. I then send my chakra out, making it surround your clone. Your clone becomes soaked in a flammable substance as the air around the clone takes on a tainted look of a cloud. Your clone is soaked so I use a random katon jutsu and burn your clone to death.

I begin to gather chakra, I then perform a few hand seals and release it. A suiton clone is formed which stands beside me. I begin to gather more chakra and pour it into my clone, manipulating back into a liquid state. When it does this, I release the rest of my chakra as I manipulate the liquid into four pointed projectiles. I then continue the assault, making the four projectiles hurl towards Sempai's clone. His clone disperse when the pointed suiton jutsu pierces it's body.

 

[Better]

awesome

(Suiton: Mizu Yashiken no Jutsu) - Water Release: Water Palm Blade Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will first strike their target with couple of punches and kicks them lifting the target into the air and the user will then concentrate their chakra into their palm and then swinging their arm in a arc they release chakra creating a cresent blade of water that strike the target.

I want you approach my clone, give him a few punches add some kicks, not to the nuts tho, it'll cause him to disperse. Then kick him into the air and then concentrate some suiton chakra into your palm and swing your arm creating a blade of water that strikes him.

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( Suiton: Mizu Hashira Suiryoku no Jutsu ) - Water Release: Water Pillar Thrust
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra and then they create water to rise up from the ground beneath the target lifting them into the air.

simple manipulate your chakra and create a water pillar to thrust out from any target you desire.

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( Suiton: Haretsu sui Yashi ) - Water Release: Water Bursting Palm
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: After making the ram hand seal the user generates water around their right arm and then by thrusting their arm forwards they release the water in the form of a projectile bullet that drives through the opponent pushing them back several feet.

Make the ram hand seal and focus water around your dominate hand and then thrust it sending a water bullet into my clone and causing it to go back a few feet.

(creates clones)

 

[Saikyokami]

I approach the clone and begin to punch it a few times, kicking it and then upper-cutting it into the air as I continue to kick and punch it higher. I use a final kick causing it to go a bit higher as I quickly gather suiton chakra in my palm. I then swipe it in an arc like motion towards the clone as I release it. A crescent shaped suiton blade slashes your clone, causing it to disperse.

I begin gathering chakra together. As it gathers, I begin to channel it to the under sides of my feet, slowly releasing it. When it is released in a stabilized manner, my body slowly begins to lift off the ground from the suiton chakra that is being leaked. It lifts me a bit higher before I begin to descend again.

I perfomr the ram seal then begin to gather chakra, enough to perform this tech. I then focus and channel the chakra to my right arm. When it is stabilized there, I release it slowly, making a layer of water surround the arm. I turn towards your clone and draw my arm back, readying it to pull a punching motion. When I feel it's all good to go, I thrust my arm forward in a swift punching like maneuver as I release the layer of water. The water bursts speedily towards your clone in a bullet like manner. It connects, hitting your clone in the chest, sweeping/pushing him backwards several meters.

 

[Better]

good good, moving on

( Suiton: Seisuiryū ) - Water Release: Azure Water Stream
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will create a moving body of water beneath him that travels towards the opponent carrying the user. They then slash the opponent with their sword multiple times.

You got a sword O__O? if not just make a water sword, then create a body of water underneath you and let it take you to my clone. Once there slice em up.

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Suiton: Nagareru no Muchi ) - Water Release: Flowing Whip
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user first kneads chakra in their mouth and then, placing their hand on their mouth expels water in the form of a whip which they use to lash their opponent, sending them flying backwards.

Focus le chakra in your mouth then place your dominate hand on your mouth and spit out the water, while doing so i want you to use your ability to manipulate the water shape and turn it into a whip and lash my clone.

(creates clones)

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( Suiton: Shawā ) - Water Release: Showers
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user condenses water vapour in the air above them to generate multiple projectiles of water which shoot at their target with a great amount of force and speed. The user can also shoot a barrage of small water projectiles directly from the swing of their hand.

I want you to focus your water chakra and condense the vapors in the air to generate multiple projectiles of water which shoot at my clone and disperse it.

(creates clone.)

 

[Saikyokami]

After gathering chakra into my feet I mold it into suiton chakra and release it to create a body of water below me. I then use the body of water to travel towards your clone at high speed with my sword at hand causing him to disperse as the sword goes straight through him.

I first focus some suiton chakra in my mouth. I then place my right hand over my mouth and begin to spit out the water. While spitting out the water I use shape manipulation on the water to form it into a whip which i use to whip your clone.

I first focus my chakra and begin to condense the vapors in the air. Afterwards I use the vapors to generate multiple projectiles of water which I use to repeatedly attack your clone until it disperses.

 

[Better]

4 line limit ._.

Suiton: Daibakuryuu) - Water Release: Great Exploding Current
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: User creates a whirlpool that sucks any opponent in range underwater.
Note: Must be performed on a water source

create a whirlpool by sending your chakra into the lake and manipulating the water to suck in my clone.

(creates clone)

 

[Saikyokami]

create a whirlpool by sending your chakra into the lake and manipulating the water to suck in my clone.

Oh yah You did say that ~_~ should make it three xd

After gathering my chakra within me I channel it through my legs. I then channel through my feet and into the water below me. I then, using chakra manipulation, manipulate the water to form a whirlpool which i use to suck you clone into. After sucking your clone into it I continusly, and voilently make the whirlpool spin untill I make it vanish using the force of the spinning water to throw your clone.

sorry I replied a bit late using a friends laptop cause mine is on it way back to me :T_T: >.> had to send it back to the man U_U

 

[Better]

i like 4

(Suiton: Hahonryuu) - Water Style: Destruction Torrent
Rank: B
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: After waving the Boar → Dog → Ram hand seals, a water vortex created in the palm of the user’s hand that can then be blasted forward creating a spiraling wall of water which can then be used to attack or defend.
Note: No water source required

Form the hand seals ,and create a water vortex in your palm of your dominate hand, then blast it forward at my clone

(creates clone)

 

[Saikyokami]

B!?!?!??!?! -Fangirls out-

After forming the handseals Boar → Dog → Ram, I create a vortex of water in the palm of my hand.
I then blast said vortex forward to in order to creating a volentility spiraling wall of water which comes flying directly at your clone

 

[Better]

Now your cheating ~_~ do you wanna stop this training or what? Do it properly

 

[Saikyokami]

Don't Drop Me :T_T: dat was actually 3 lines ~_~

 

[Better]

B!?!?!??!?! -Fangirls out-

After forming the handseals Boar → Dog → Ram, I create a vortex of water in the palm of my hand.
I then blast said vortex forward to in order to creating a volentility spiraling wall of water which comes flying directly at your clone

After forming the handseals Boar → Dog → Ram, I create a vortex of water in the palm of my hand. I then blast said vortex forward to in order to creating a volentility spiraling wall of water which comes flying directly at your clone

nope

 

[Saikyokami]

oh.... yah I'll redo that in a few seconds U_U

 

[Better]

please U_U

 

[Saikyokami]

I first began by gathering chakra into my hands. I then began to mold said chakra into suiton chakra. With the water chakra in my hands I form the handseals Boar → Dog → Ram creating a vortex of water in the palm of my hand. I then blast said vortex forward to in order to creating a volentility spiraling wall of water which comes flying directly at your clone

Now thats 3 U_U

 

[Better]

I want 4

(Suiton: Suiryuudan no Jutsu) - Water Style: Water Dragon Bullet Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: After performing a long series of hand seals Ox → Monkey → Hare → Rat → Boar → Bird → Ox → Horse → Bird → Rat → Tiger → Dog → Tiger → Snake → Ox → Ram → Snake → Boar → Ram → Rat → Yang Water → Monkey → Bird → Dragon → Bird → Ox → Horse → Ram → Tiger → Snake → Rat → Monkey → Hare → Boar → Dragon → Ram → Rat → Ox → Monkey → Bird → Yang Water → Rat → Boar → Bird the user then shapes a large amount of water into a giant, powerful dragon, which hits the opponent with formidable might, dealing physical damage. The ideal place to use it is near a body of water, but if the user's skill allows it, it is possible to use it even in a place where there is none. The amount of water used will be in proportion with the user's skill. Tobirama was able to use this technique with a single hand seal showing testiment to his skill in water ninjutsu.

I want you to form the hand seals Ox → Monkey → Hare → Rat → Boar → Bird → Ox → Horse → Bird → Rat → Tiger → Dog → Tiger → Snake → Ox → Ram → Snake → Boar → Ram → Rat → Yang Water → Monkey → Bird → Dragon → Bird → Ox → Horse → Ram → Tiger → Snake → Rat → Monkey → Hare → Boar → Dragon → Ram → Rat → Ox → Monkey → Bird → Yang Water → Rat → Boar → Bird a bunch of time, so you can have it memorized. Afterwards you will shape a ton of water into a water dragon and have it attack my clone.

Unless you have a water affinity in the future, i don't recommend this technique xD

(creates clone)

 

[Saikyokami]

well that was close enough to 4 it was literally like a word away

handseals make the 4 lines xd

I first perform then handseals Ox → Monkey → Hare → Rat → Boar → Bird → Ox → Horse → Bird → Rat → Tiger → Dog → Tiger → Snake → Ox → Ram → Snake → Boar → Ram → Rat → Yang Water → Monkey → Bird → Dragon → Bird → Ox → Horse → Ram → Tiger → Snake → Rat → Monkey → Hare → Boar → Dragon → Ram → Rat → Ox → Monkey → Bird → Yang Water → Rat → Boar → Bird
2. 5 million times and using an entire ocean use shape manipulation to change the water into a dragon That I shoot at you clones D:

 

[Saikyokami]

I want 4

(Suiton: Suiryuudan no Jutsu) - Water Style: Water Dragon Bullet Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: After performing a long series of hand seals Ox → Monkey → Hare → Rat → Boar → Bird → Ox → Horse → Bird → Rat → Tiger → Dog → Tiger → Snake → Ox → Ram → Snake → Boar → Ram → Rat → Yang Water → Monkey → Bird → Dragon → Bird → Ox → Horse → Ram → Tiger → Snake → Rat → Monkey → Hare → Boar → Dragon → Ram → Rat → Ox → Monkey → Bird → Yang Water → Rat → Boar → Bird the user then shapes a large amount of water into a giant, powerful dragon, which hits the opponent with formidable might, dealing physical damage. The ideal place to use it is near a body of water, but if the user's skill allows it, it is possible to use it even in a place where there is none. The amount of water used will be in proportion with the user's skill. Tobirama was able to use this technique with a single hand seal showing testiment to his skill in water ninjutsu.

I want you to form the hand seals Ox → Monkey → Hare → Rat → Boar → Bird → Ox → Horse → Bird → Rat → Tiger → Dog → Tiger → Snake → Ox → Ram → Snake → Boar → Ram → Rat → Yang Water → Monkey → Bird → Dragon → Bird → Ox → Horse → Ram → Tiger → Snake → Rat → Monkey → Hare → Boar → Dragon → Ram → Rat → Ox → Monkey → Bird → Yang Water → Rat → Boar → Bird a bunch of time, so you can have it memorized. Afterwards you will shape a ton of water into a water dragon and have it attack my clone.

Unless you have a water affinity in the future, i don't recommend this technique xD

(creates clone)

well that was close enough to 4 it was literally like a word away

handseals make the 4 lines xd

I first perform then handseals Ox → Monkey → Hare → Rat → Boar → Bird → Ox → Horse → Bird → Rat → Tiger → Dog → Tiger → Snake → Ox → Ram → Snake → Boar → Ram → Rat → Yang Water → Monkey → Bird → Dragon → Bird → Ox → Horse → Ram → Tiger → Snake → Rat → Monkey → Hare → Boar → Dragon → Ram → Rat → Ox → Monkey → Bird → Yang Water → Rat → Boar → Bird
2. 5 million times and using an entire ocean use shape manipulation to change the water into a dragon That I shoot at you clones D:

Obviously I have my own type of water.

 

[Better]

your making this harder then it has to be lol

(Suiton: Suiryūben) - Water Style: Water Dragon Whip
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: After performing the Tiger hand seal the user creates an orb of water from which several sharp whips of water emerge. Those whips can then be directed towards one or multiple targets, impaling them on impact.

i want you to perform the tiger hand seal, you create an orb of water then have several sharp whips of water emerge. Then send them towards my clone.

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(Suiton: Teppoudama) - Water Style: Water Bullet
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user will do one handseal and will gather water in his mouth and then spits out a large sphere of rotating water that can blast a huge area leaving it soaked. It can also be used in quick succession to shoot up to 3 smaller but faster bullets of water.

form 1 hand seal had gather water in your mouth and then spit a large sphere of rotating water. If you want to shoot 3 bullets you can. They won't be as strong as the big one, but they will be faster.