Prove Them Wrong

[ikikouchiha9668]

My friend a while back told me she was cutting herself, and I wrote this for her. Anyone else going through a time like this I wrote this for you too
~

Hearts are broken
Like their lives
Minds are bent
Like the actors in a freak show

Disgusted to the point to end their lives
Or bring razors to their skin
Little whispers pushing them closer
To the edge of death

This is a shout out
To all those who just need someone to care
For those who think it isn't worth it
You're all beautiful

Ignore the whispers
Zone them out
Listen to my shout
Only hear me

Prove them wrong. <3

 

[Creedo]

No rhymes? How can it be convinving when it doesnt have rhymes? All good stuff have rhymes.

 

[AllomnisymbolsparttwoT]

Nah nah nah write this baby

''Cut my life into pizza,
this is my plastic fork!
Oven baking, heavy breathing
Don't give a f*** if it's carbs that I'am eating! :I

 

[ikikouchiha9668]

No rhymes? How can it be convinving when it doesnt have rhymes? All good stuff have rhymes.

It doesn't need to have rhymes to be a poem.

 

[ikikouchiha9668]

No rhymes? How can it be convinving when it doesnt have rhymes? All good stuff have rhymes.

It doesn't need to have rhymes to be a poem.

 

[Asami..]

It's beautiful. Nice work.

 

[FubukiShirou]

My friend a while back told me she was cutting herself, and I wrote this for her. Anyone else going through a time like this I wrote this for you too
~

Hearts are broken
Like their lives
Minds are bent
Like the actors in a freak show

Disgusted to the point to end their lives
Or bring razors to their skin
Little whispers pushing them closer
To the edge of death

This is a shout out
To all those who just need someone to care
For those who think it isn't worth it
You're all beautiful

Ignore the whispers
Zone them out
Listen to my shout
Only hear me

Prove Whem wrong. <3[/QUOTE\]
That's why I need a woman like this, who actually cares about others.. Mindless make up zombies these days..

 

[GOD2U]

Very good message. Hope she's alright.

 

[foxyladyland]

this was so nicey nice like beautiful :flowers

 

[-Punk-]

Our reality is our own to create,
And the sooner that you realize that sooner that you can change.

 

[izinagi54]

don't know if i should be commenting, but good job.

five stars.