prolog

[~Hasashi~]

nazumi was wandering in the woods when she heard screaming she ran over and saw an old man holding a katana and a younger holding another katana the younger mans back was to her

younger:i will get the wind sword from you old man
old man:as long as i am alive i will never let this sword go just b/c the others were stolen in the past this one still remains in my family and it always will
younger:man we will see about that
younger man charged the older man and swung his sword water rushed at the old man he jumped the younger man jumped a him and cut a hole in the man's stomach the older man gasped and fell nazumi was shocked the younger man leaped back about ten feet in front of nazumi
younger:is that all you got
nazumi was enraged she took out her pocket knife and charged the younger man turned and smiled and slapped nazumi away laughing all of a sudden the katana next to the old man started to glow and swooped towards nazumi she caught it and her eyes started glowing she swung the katana in the air and a jet of wind flew towards the man and cut him in two nazumi fell down gasping all of a sudden a man came down from the tree and grabbed the younger man's katana and ran away nazumi turned to the man and
nazumi:are you ok
the man gave her a letter and died

to be continued

what do you think comments appreciated

 

[..Chill.. Mizu]

wow very nice seems like you put alot of thought into it

 

[~Hasashi~]

wow very nice seems like you put a lot of thought into it

thanks

 

[..Chill..MING]

i like it, really drew me in,

write some more,

maybe longer next time, but that coz i wanna read more

 

[~Hasashi~]

the reason it was short was b/c it was just a prolog but yea i will continue if people like it

i think i will call it the 5 element swords

 

[Emperor]

nice

use punctuation next time plz

 

[KeotsuEclipse]

Good fan ficiton. Can't wait to see how it goes.