read it but it took me a while my eye sight is horrible
it was good
What me to make the format bigger so that you can read it easier? And thanks man.xd
Awesome job! xd I didn't see it coming where his mom is dead.
Great twist.
I'm glad you liked that part, thanks dude
Choji and Ino????
Hmm........I wonder if they 'll make a good couple xd but not that odd anyway
gr8 to see Lee and Guy xd
nice chapter
Haha well Ino became interested in Choji because he elevated to become the Akimichi leader. That kind of turned her on. Lol. I'll try to give as many K11 and such appearances. Thanks, man.xd
Awesome job man keep up the good work I can't wait till the next chapter keep me updated and I like the lil cliffhanger you gave us at the end I love cliff hanger lol I like to end my own like that
Thanks. Lol I love cliffhangers as well. That's kind of my specialty. What's the name of your FF, I'll love to read it.
i like it
it look perfectly the way it should be with some new character.
Thanks bro. I'm glad I got that right.
I know there will be......m riding on the hope that you get better with every chapter....with every ff
I hope so, too. Writing is my passion, I've got to get better if I want to make a career out of it. I can't wait until I create with my own world and characters
