I really don't see much wrong with this. It looks amazing, it's full of life, sharp and everything that makes a tag awesome. Only problems I have are the fact that the main C4D you've used does come over a little strong for me, and the positioning of the focal irks me. I would have moved it more to the left side of the tag, since the flow is going that way as well. It would also help the background not coming off so strongly against the focal.