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1 Story Writing
At time's it seemed the writing literally went like
man throws rock. rock hit's ground. ground cracks. -__-
and this would lead to a buttload of filler to explain what happen in between.
2.Unneeded Flashbacks
If Naruto would so much as cry, kishi would have a 9 page flashback explaining why ninja's cry -.- like tf
3. Fluctuating Powers
It would be like powerup 1 is fast, then powerup 2 is slower, then powerup 3 is stronger than 2 but slower than 1.
it doesnt be making sense lol
At time's it seemed the writing literally went like
man throws rock. rock hit's ground. ground cracks. -__-
and this would lead to a buttload of filler to explain what happen in between.
2.Unneeded Flashbacks
If Naruto would so much as cry, kishi would have a 9 page flashback explaining why ninja's cry -.- like tf
3. Fluctuating Powers
It would be like powerup 1 is fast, then powerup 2 is slower, then powerup 3 is stronger than 2 but slower than 1.
it doesnt be making sense lol
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