Pro-Tip for Kishi So He Can Sell Twice As Many Manga

[Booker]

(1) Stop writing about crap no one cares about

Geez, with this marketing strategy I should handle all dsitribution and promotion of the Naruto Manga.

It's simple. Writing about things that have little/nothing to do with the advancement of the plot are boring. Events that trigger changes in future plot are exciting and engaging.

The last 2-3 chapters have been a snorefest. You can literally take the first 15 pages, completely rip them out, and leave the last 3 without losing any vital information.

Poor writing.

 

[sharinganunited]

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this was a great chapter. calm ur tits

 

[fasterthanminato]

True. But I don't think that he reads this forum.

 

[rollin]

Too bad Kishi and his staff can't hear your advice on how to write a manga

 

[Cfighter]

(1) Stop writing about crap no one cares about

Geez, with this marketing strategy I should handle all dsitribution and promotion of the Naruto Manga.

It's simple. Writing about things that have little/nothing to do with the advancement of the plot are boring. Events that trigger changes in future plot are exciting and engaging.

The last 2-3 chapters have been a snorefest. You can literally take the first 15 pages, completely rip them out, and leave the last 3 without losing any vital information.

Poor writing.

I agree, but then I would ask where have you been for the last 200+ chapters, because this isn't new at all. The manga has been like this for a LONG time now, where only the first 15 pages of the chapter are either boring or useless, and then the last page is some huge cliffhanger that drives the story further.

 

[Ōkami]

Pro-Tip hey?

 

[Kurama2012]

wow more *****ing i liked the chapter flashback and all. people need to grow up and learn some god damn patience so what if he wanted to elaborate more on shukaku

also isn't naruto like in the top 5 of best selling manga of the year yet kishi does the flashback stuff a lot so i think your advice isn't worth much seeing how he is doing fairly well on his own and with his editors

 

[rollin]

It's always funny when people act like they know what they're talking about

 

[AllomnisymbolsparttwoT]

let me get this straight, a person who never wrote a manga before is giving advice to a author, whose manga is one of the most popular series in japan AND america??? Lol gtfo niggah you drunk

 

[November]

let me get this straight, a person who never wrote a manga before is giving advice to a author, whose manga is one of the most popular series in japan AND america??? Lol gtfo niggah you drunk

Bro! show some respect, The Op is batman.

 

[-Sky-]

Kishi has been doing this for over a decade . I don't think he needs any pro-tips from a random forum member , unless you happen to be the writer of a series with anywhere near the same stature of Naruto .

 

[Booker]

I'm very sorry, you're all right.

Hold on, let me go call the producers of Jersey Shore and congratulate them on making some of the best quality television that has graced our sets. I mean, it was one of the top television shows of 2010 and 2011, so it must be great quality according to you all, right? Maybe I should ask the writers of the show how to write any storyboard I have, huh guys?

OT: Popularity =\= Quality, and if you all think so you need a reality check.

 

[HiddenSound]

I've been enjoying it

 

[KidGamer65]

lmao, agreed. Tbh this chapter would have been utter shit if Naruto hadn't lost Kurama. Now its just a bad chapter as literally nothing happened except for Naruto losing Kurama, and that was at the very end.