[Approved] Prince Zuko 蘇科

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Biographical information
Name: Zuko Nara
Nickname: The prince of Shadow
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Clan: Nara Clan​

Appearance
► His most prominent feature is a dark red scar over his left eye that extends over his ear. He has a long top-knot black hair. He usually wear a red Armor that used to be his favorite, although his other clan mate doesn't wear a such armor. But for casual, he prefer wears a simple red and gold robe.​


Personality
► Zuko believes that a person becomes strong by having to struggle and fight for what they want. He also has expressed contrasting beliefs, in that he does not want to have good luck, because he feels he can control his own fate, but also believes that he is marked unlucky and that the world is against him. Zuko's reaction to this perception of the world always being set against him is defiance in the form of an iron will and inflexible determination. Zuko is clever, yet hot-headed, often letting his temper get the best of him. Nevertheless, he seems to be adverse at the thought of harming others where there is no motive for doing so or nothing to gain in the end.​

Village Info.
Village of Birth: Konohagakure
Village of Alliance: Konohagakure​

Rank//Chakra Info
Ninja Rank: Jounin
Specialty: Shadow Manipulation (Required Training)
Elements: Fire (required Training)
Your Ninjutsu:

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an
illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own
element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
_____
(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
_____
(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy.
Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move
with stealth or to trick their opponents.
_____
(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu
causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect
lasts for 2 turns.
_____
(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will
quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person.
This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
_____
(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
_____
(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using
ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2
and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)
_____



Background
History: Zuko was born in the Nara Family as a son of the Great Shinobi known as the "King of shadow". Despite of his power, he is such a generous and kind person. But due to his outstanding power and ability in shadow manipulation he was given a nickname "Prince of Shadow", it is actually a passed down name from his father. When he was 10, after his graduation he was already sent to the Fire Country's Temple for a further training for 2 years. After he returns, he was promoted to ANBU black ops and became one of the royal Hokage's guard. But not too long until he himself resign as a shinobi and became a traveler. As a traveler, he spends his days traveling around the world and visits various of villages. As he traveled, there are many things he had learned from those villages and due to his experiences, he had gain more power and knowledge. Sometimes when he had nothing to do, he used his time to meditate which also improves his Shadow Manipulation skill. After many years traveling around the world, he decided to return to his perspective homeland in the Leaf Village.​

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Battles

Won: 0
Lost: 0​

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Remove all those ninjutsu and only add these:

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an
illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own
element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
_____
(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
_____
(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy.
Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move
with stealth or to trick their opponents.
_____
(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu
causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect
lasts for 2 turns.
_____
(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will
quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person.
This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
_____
(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
_____
(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using
ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2
and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)
_____

These are the only ones you get by default, all the others you wrote have to be removed.

Also when you make a custom bio based on a character from another serie and you want to keep things from that character's history make it actually fit in the Narutoverse.

1) There are no such things as princes and royalty in the Nara clan. Did someone ever said prince Shikamaru or king Shikaku? No. You don't need to provide a reason for nicknames, however when you do make it realistic in the Narutoverse, which is not the case.

2) Als you say he wears the royal Fire nation uniform. What is that? Yes I saw The Last Airbender-serie, however there is no such thing in the Narutoverse. Not to mention the confusion between Fire country and Fire nation. Or you give a plausible background for something like the Fire nation in the Narutoverse or you describe the armour, but don't say something like the Fire nation uniform as there is no such thing in the Narutoverse unless you clearly say what it is.
 

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Remove all those ninjutsu and only add these:

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an
illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own
element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
_____
(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
_____
(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy.
Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move
with stealth or to trick their opponents.
_____
(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu
causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect
lasts for 2 turns.
_____
(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will
quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person.
This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
_____
(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
_____
(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using
ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2
and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)
_____

These are the only ones you get by default, all the others you wrote have to be removed.

Also when you make a custom bio based on a character from another serie and you want to keep things from that character's history make it actually fit in the Narutoverse.

1) There are no such things as princes and royalty in the Nara clan. Did someone ever said prince Shikamaru or king Shikaku? No. You don't need to provide a reason for nicknames, however when you do make it realistic in the Narutoverse, which is not the case.

2) Als you say he wears the royal Fire nation uniform. What is that? Yes I saw The Last Airbender-serie, however there is no such thing in the Narutoverse. Not to mention the confusion between Fire country and Fire nation. Or you give a plausible background for something like the Fire nation in the Narutoverse or you describe the armour, but don't say something like the Fire nation uniform as there is no such thing in the Narutoverse unless you clearly say what it is.
Okay everything is done! Yeah, sorry about that...There is no such thing as prince and princess in the Nara Family. Thanks :)

~Background History and Appearance re-edited~
 
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