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I continue to strike the tree with my palms. I steadily start to increase the speed and precision of my strikes causing more bark to slowly break off. With my palms hurting, I continue to strike the bark even harder. Soon the area I have been striking has lost all the hard outer bark, and the soft bark is shown. I continue to strike increasing my speed even more, and the pain is lost. With the new found toughness in my palms I start hitting the tree harder, and even faster.
 

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*Takes the pain killer*

*Starts back to hitting the trees.*

Making sure I have the right position, I start hitting the tree with perfect form. I continue to hit the soft bark now starting to continue toward the middle, as I am going, my speed starts to increase even more and before I know it, the tree is just about to fall down. After that tree has fallen, I head toward another tree starting to hit the tree. With the start of hitting my speed has improved even more, and my hand are barely visible as I continue to pound on the new tree. Within a couple of minutes, I am through the tree and on to the next one. By this time, my palms are bleeding and the pain pills have worn out. But I am too far into training to stop. I quickly move onto the next trees, in a few hours I should be done with the group of trees
 

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*Takes the pain killer*

*Starts back to hitting the trees.*

Making sure I have the right position, I start hitting the tree with perfect form. I continue to hit the soft bark now starting to continue toward the middle, as I am going, my speed starts to increase even more and before I know it, the tree is just about to fall down. After that tree has fallen, I head toward another tree starting to hit the tree. With the start of hitting my speed has improved even more, and my hand are barely visible as I continue to pound on the new tree. Within a couple of minutes, I am through the tree and on to the next one. By this time, my palms are bleeding and the pain pills have worn out. But I am too far into training to stop. I quickly move onto the next trees, in a few hours I should be done with the group of trees
Nel wakes up 3 days later on her bed and remembers her student, she quickly dresses up and makes way to the training ground only to get there to see there are no more trees.

Hmm...Good "Now you will be training under the sun".

She lays the 3 scrolls down while making the confrontation handseal "KAI" making the rope wraped around them to detonate sharply allowing access to the scrolls.

Now, here's the deal. I'll post a set of jyuken techniques while giving you basic ideas on them then I want you to tell me
* How you'll perform them(be elaborate explaining what hand you use and which part you hit in details)
* When and what situation you are likely to utilize them
* What you think of it. Have you a better way of using it creatively?
* Its pros and cons

Now the first three.

(Hakkeshou Kaiten) - 8 Trigrams Heavenly Spin/Rotation
Rank: D
Type: Defence
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A(+20 if used to block an
attack)
Description:The user pushes chakra out of all there tenketsu and spin creating a dome shield that can fend off most attacks.
This is a simple one, where you use all your tenketsus simultenously in addition to which you are required to spin rapidly. Requires less chakra as we will be doing a larger version as we proceed.

(Tenketsu Shouda) - Chakra Point Pound
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: The user hits the tenketsu of the heart with gentle fist causing damage to their
heart.
This is D-rank but can be fatal when you time your move perfectly. This is a simple move i think used by hyashi on the kumo guy killing him in an instant. And I believe Neji used it on Hinata but I wonder why she lived.

(Hyuuga Ryuu Taijutsu) - Hyuuga Style Taijutsu
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: A mini barrage of gentle fist that equal 16 strikes.
Simply making 16 subtle palm strike while hitting 16 tenketsus. When I say hitting the tenketsu, its not your palm thats hitting it but the sharp chakra from your palm/finger tips(mostly middle and index), you palm/fingers is only making contact with the body.
 

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[B]One/three advantages (no obvious ones, be creative): 
[LIST][*]1. It is relatively easy to use and does not require much chakra to use [*]2. Does not require any use of the hands[*]3. makes a quick and easy way to block small weapons [*]4. Protects a 360 degree space [*][/LIST] 
One/three disadvantages (no obvious ones, be creative):[/B] 
[LIST][*]1. Very small jutsu[*]2. It is a close range defense move[*]3. [*][/LIST] 
[B]How you would use it in battle, I would use it to protect me from going against a opponent like TenTen, because of the weapon summoning. Or if being ambushed, I could protect myself from a multitude of people that may be attacking me[/B] 
[B]How you perform it (with as much detail as you can):I would release the chakra flowing through my chakra system out of everyone of my chakra points. Because I need to get a 360 degree area, I would do this to protect me fully. As the chakra is released, I spin in a circle causing a large bluish sphere to form[/B]


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[B]One/three advantages (no obvious ones, be creative): 
[LIST][*]1. It is a one shot kill move if preformed correctly[*]2. It its quick and can be used in conjunction with a multitude of different hand to hand combat moves. [*]3. As you said, it is a D- Rank move that can kill in the worst of circumstances [*][/LIST] 
One/three disadvantages (no obvious ones, be creative):[/B] 
[LIST][*]1. Must be timed and preformed perfectly[*]2.[*]3.[*][/LIST] 
[B]How you would use it in battle:After prefroming a large amount of Hyuga style attacks, I could use this move anytime throughout. This would allow me to attack and finish him off with easy[/B] 
[B]How you perform it (with as much detail as you can):I strike a dummy with precise movements,and as I hit the heart tenketsu, I release out through my finger tips, a burst of chakra[/B]

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[B]One/three advantages (no obvious ones, be creative): 
[LIST][*]1. It is a quick move with can tire out an opponent and cause a small amount of damage[*]2. 16 strikes causes more damage compared to regular taijutsu[*]3. Not only causes pain from hits, it also hurts them from the foreign chakra released into them [*][/LIST] 
One/three disadvantages (no obvious ones, be creative):[/B] 
[LIST][*]1. [*]2.[*]3.[*][/LIST] 
[B]How you would use it in battle:I would use it before the point pound, which could be used as a first attack[/B] 
[B]How you perform it (with as much detail as you can):I use the movements learned in the tree hitting training and start to strike a dummy. The first hits are aimed toward the dummies chest, the next set are aimed toward the heart. As I hit each attack has a burst of chakra going through the hits[/B]
 

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For the first jutsu, I proceed to open up all of my tenketsus at the same time. When opened I release out pure chakra from every single tenketsu. After releasing the chakra, I start to spin quickly in a circle. As I spin, the chakra takes the shape of a sphere around me.

For the second jutsu this is where a Byakugan would be needed more than ever. By using the Byakugan to look at the tenketsu on the clone, I find the single tenketsu on the heart and proceed to use my right hand to hit it. I use three fingers to hit the location on the skin with force. As I make contact with the area, I release a burst of chakra from my finger which is inserted into the heart tenketsus.

Remembering the palm strike training on the dummies, I walk to a wooden dummy and use the techniques learned from the tree hitting, and I hit a quick burst of palm strikes to the dummies chest. Everytime my palm hits, it is located on the area of the skin that is above a tenketsu, and as I hit I also send chakra into the tenketsu
 

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You forgot to use the template still.

Okay.

(Hakkeshou Kuuten) - 8 Trigrams Heavenly Sky
Rank: C
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: A rotation were the user makes his/her chakra into razor sharp lines and spins
to attack and defend all in one move.
A larger rotation compared to the one we did before but now you also fine tune your chakra so it has sharp edgy lines around the sphere to deal ghastly damage to your opponent.

(Hakke Kuushou) - 8 Trigrams Air Palm
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Close-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30(+5 if they hit an object)
Description: The user pushes chakra out of there palm that blows away there opponent.
you simply charge chakra to any of your hand then while its stretched forwards, you will release it at once. Good to blow away things


(Shugo Hakke Rokujuuyonshou) - Protective 8
Trigrams 64 Strikes
Rank: C
Type: Attack/defense
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: A defense that can block off attacks and an attack that closes 64 tenketsu
and limits chakra flow for one turn after the
opponent is hit by it
This is a seires of palm strikes where you will block 64 tenketsus so you chose wisely. Note: you won't give the opponent a breathing space once you begin the strike so the jabs runs concurrently at a very fast pace, though the first strike would disturb the opponent's chakra that he won't be able to react until you are finished closing 64 tenketsus. Opponent can't mold chakra at all for one turn, why?


(Byakugan Sanashige) – Byakugan three Kicks
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user kicks the opponent once on their knee, and then kicks them twice on
their face in rapid succession, sending them
spiraling upwards.
how will you creatively do this on a clone of mine? Also use the template.


(Byākugan Sandageki) – Byakugan Three
Strikes
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user grabs the opponents extended arm, flipping them around and then
strikes them thrice on the back, sending them
flying.
Neji used this on Naruto. First you find a way to grab the opponents arm then you flip/toss him to a direction making sure his back is facing you then jab him three times on his back.
 

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Just like the first rotation I preformed, I start to spin and, at the same time, I open up my chakra points and begin to release chakra from them. As the chakra is released, I start to manipulate the pure chakra to begin to straighten out and and begin to get sharper. In this process the large sphere that was created last time, is now also a shere, but now it is made up of many slender razor like strips that form into a sphere around me. Sort of like a rubberband ball.

I would most likely use this when I am close to my opponent and want to use a quick attack, without giving my opponent a chance to retaliate. This can also be used to protect myself from kuni and small ninja tools. It is a good move to use at close range and it can cause serious damage to the opponent, but you need to be in very close proximity to the opponent to cause any real damage.



I straighten my right hand out in front of me, and open all my chakra points in my hand. As I raise it, I face my palm, with my fingers together, forward in front of me. I then release out a small blast of chakra that can be used to push back objects.

This can be useful for getting away from your opponent, even though the Hyuga are mst effective at close range, but if you do need to regroup you can push them back using this technique. It is also useful to try and speed up a kuni that you have thrown. And the obvious reason to push away your opponent shuriken and kuni.


Using the practice I had from rapidly pounding the trees, I walk toward a dummy, and begin to hit its chakra points in its chest are. I do this by extending my fingers on both of my hands, and strike the individual points using my palms, and send my chakra through my palms into the dummy's chakra points.

The chakra is blocked because of the interference of your own chakra. If a part of the chakra system is cut off or disrupted, it messes up the whole system, much like the blood stream. If one artery or vein is clogged, other parts of the body doesn't receive enough blood. This is a very effective move because it can pretty much give you a victory if you can effectively take advantage of an opponent that can't mold chakra for a turn. There is not much they can do when the first hit happens.



I come towards your clone and send a side kick with my right leg toward your clones left knee. As the knee raises in reaction to my kick, I use my left leg to propell me into the air. After I am in the air, I curve my back causing my body to rotate as it is rotating, I lead with my right leg in the air to kick your clone on the bottom of the chin. As this kick connects, I follow with my left leg ,which is not far behind the right leg, to send another hit to the bottom of your clones head causing it to fly backwards. As I contine to flip backwards, I bring my knees to my chest and when my chest is facing toward my opponent, I straighten my legs succesfully landing the flip.

This is a useful technique because it uses multiple attacks to cause the most damage. With the first kick, there are so many different ways you can follow up with the other two head kicks. This technique could be used easily to cathc your oppoent off guard if you can cover your first kick well. By using this tech and being able to land and get close to your opponent again, you can follow it up with another technique as your oppoent would probally be dazed. As with almost all Hyuuga techniques, the close range of the moves make completing them difficult. But other than that, if connected, the user would be able to easily follow up with another move.


I walk toward a training dummy, and extend out its arm, after I have done this, I grab it and use my shoulder to flip the dummy over me. As it is being flipped, I know that it would be facing me, so I make a quickadjustment and twist its arm as I fip it over me. By doing this the dummies back is faing toward me. I then send a quick succesion of 3 jabs to its lower/middle back sending it flying into a tree


This last technique is easily concealable, as there doesn't need to be n offensive gesture from the user to use the move. It allows the user to use it in an assortment of different situations. This is a major pro in my eyes, because its hard to get into close range so if you can conceal your attack it would be in the best interest of the user.
 

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Use something to demacate every technique.
Okay

While you finish training for the day, you head home. Its almost night and the light is becoming dimmer as your shadow gains weight. Unknown to you, some ninjas are hating and jealous of your new found power and they seek to eliminate you before you complete your training.

Scenerio 1: As you pass through a place with several mesh of trees which they hid, they toss a kunai to your feet to signal the bullseye and a sign for other to commence attack, then this is followed by hundreds of kunai being hurled at you, not at once but concurrently.
Your byakugan is not activated as you head home so you won't notice anything before the first kunai.
You can't use rotation.
Use what you have learnt so far in jyuken to defend yourself from the mayhem of kunais.

Scenerio 2: Instead of hurling kunai at you, they jump out and surround you, 4 of them! Disable of all them with jyuken and freeform without using rotation and 64 strikes.
You can use taijutsu if you have it.

Scenerio 3: while you make your way through the woods, you are secretely put in a genjutsu where your sense of direction is taken away. You byakugan is not activated and as you move through the forest thinking you are going home, you are unknowingly to you moving towards a cliff which bottom is full of hot lava. You will fall into the creamy magma and melt away. Find a way to bring yourself out of the situation, ofcos you need your byakugan but you should find a way to activate it creatively without God-modding.^^

Scenerio 4: My clone awaits you with all those invaders out in the blue, then she wants to fight you too, seems she is in a state of madness. Attack me with just 3 moves comprising of 2 jyuken moves and one any other move you think you can combine with it.


Lets see how you fair!
 

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As I have my Byakugan deactivated, the kuni lands in front of my feet. As this happens in look to the corner of my right eye and see that there is a group of three kuni heading toward me. As they continue closer, I open the chakra points in my right hand, and use a burst of chakra that deflects every one of them. I then turn my back just in time to notice even more kuni heading toward me. I open the charkra points in my left hand as well, and I release another blast of chakra which deflects the kuni. I continue to rotate in a circle to deflect the incoming kuni until they come to a halt

As the ninja fall into formation around me, I turn toward the one to my top right, assuming they make a square around me. I run toward him, and I then send a kick on the side of his knee causing him to heel over in pain. As he bends slightly, I flip backwards and send a succession of kicks ,starting with my right foot, into his chin sending him flying backwards. Then behind me one of the ninja runs at me with a kuni, I turn slightly just in time for the ninja to miss. As the path of the attack continues, I grab the ninjas straightened arm and flip him over my body using my shoulder. I then twist his arm slightly causing him to turn over ont his back. At this point I am facing toward the ninja that is to my top left. I then send three jabs into the ninjas back causing him to flying to ninja to my top left. I finally turn to my last opponent and rush toward him. I jump forward with my feet aimed toward his abdomen, and land a dropkick. As I am falling toward the ground I catch myself with my left arm supporting my landing, and I turn slightly so that my open legs are facing the ninja. I then put down my right arm, and kick upward causing myself to be back on my feet. I then rush toward my opponent and jab him on the area around his heart, at the same time I release chakra through my fingers into his hearts' chakra point.

As I am walking, I start to feel a slight heat increase in the air. As I continue forward, I slow my pace and listen carefully to my surroundings. I hear a slight crackling noise. To look at my surroundings to see what was going on, I activate my Byakugan. (I do this because as you know the Byakugan has the ability to allow the user to see long distances and through objects.) In doing this, I notice that my own chakra system is being disrupted, so I pull out a kuni and cut my self in the arm.


As you go on about wanting to fight me, and the menacing ninja behind you, I figure that the only way to stop you is to injure you. So, I rush toward you very quickly, and send a barrage of strikes to your torso, and every hit I send a bit of chakra into your system causing you to be unable to mold chakra for a moment. As this happens, I then point my hand toward you and release a burst of chakra from my right hand the pushes you into the air flying backwards. Once you are in the air, I cause 4 stone spikes to rise from the ground and time the spikes perfectly to impale you in your arms and legs.
 

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I stop reading in the first scenerio. Please read the instructions very well. They are vital and one of the reasons people suceed or fail.

You did not activate your byakugan so you can't use any jyuken that you think you use. Also I said you can't use rotation.

Retry and make sure you post any jutsu used.
 
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