Priest teaches me the art of Gentle Fist

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(Hakkeshou Kuuten) - 8 Trigrams Heavenly Sky

* How you'll perform them(be elaborate explaining what hand you use and which part you hit in details)
You gather chakra in every tenketsu and then spin rapidly, while releasing the chakra. But you also add shape transformation to make the sphere of chakra razor-sharp.

* When and what situation you are likely to utilize them
You would use this more to attack because the chakra is sharp but you could still use it when you need to defend.

* What you think of it. Have you a better way of using it creatively?
You could use the sharp chakra to cut things.

* Its pros and cons
Pros:
The chakra is razor sharp
Larger than Hakkeshou Kaiten

Cons:
It's limited to close range
The user has to be spinning
Can not defend against strong attacks because of low rank


(Hakke Kuushou) - 8 Trigrams Air Palm
* How you'll perform them(be elaborate explaining what hand you use and which part you hit in details)
You target the enemies' chakra points with the Byakugan, then you raise your hand and blast chakra out of your palm with a high speed thrust.

* When and what situation you are likely to utilize them
You are likely to use this when you need to attack an enemy at a longer distance

* What you think of it. Have you a better way of using it creatively?
You could use it to attack multiple targets at once by sending some of the chakra in different directions

* Its pros and cons
Pros:
Longer range
Can be used at high speed

Cons:
Range still limited


(Shugo Hakke Rokujuuyonshou) - Protective 8 Trigrams 64 Strikes

* How you'll perform them(be elaborate explaining what hand you use and which part you hit in details)
You attack the opponent in a series of palm strikes that block off 64 tenketsu.

* When and what situation you are likely to utilize them
You are likely to use this when you want to disturb opponents chakra system

* What you think of it. Have you a better way of using it creatively?
Nope

* Its pros and cons
Pros:
It's an attack and a defence
The opponent can't mold chakra aftterwards because you disturbed the chakra flow in their body

Cons:
Close range


(Byakugan Sanashige) – Byakugan three Kicks

* How you'll perform them(be elaborate explaining what hand you use and which part you hit in details)
You kick the opponent on their knee and then kick them on the face and then do an uppercut kick to send them upward

* When and what situation you are likely to utilize them
You use this when you want to send the enemy into the air

* What you think of it. Have you a better way of using it creatively?
Can't think of any

* Its pros and cons
Pros:
You can use this to send the opponent into the air
The kick to the knee could make them lose balance which makes performing the face kicks easier

Cons:
Teh opponent might stop your leg and attack it


(Byākugan Sandageki) – Byakugan Three Strikes

* How you'll perform them(be elaborate explaining what hand you use and which part you hit in details)
You grab the opponent's arm and then flip them around so they arr facing away from you. Then you strike them three times on their back.

* When and what situation you are likely to utilize them
When you want to attack the opponent's back

* What you think of it. Have you a better way of using it creatively?
Nope

* Its pros and cons
Pros:
The opponent's back is turned so you could also use another jutsu on them while their back is turned

Cons:
Can't think of any



Question: What is the difference between using Byakugan Three Kicks and saying "I kick you once on your knee and then twice on your face." ? How does it use Byakugan?
 

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Okay

While you finish training for the day, you head home. Its almost night and the light is becoming dimmer as your shadow gains weight. Unknown to you, some ninjas are hating and jealous of your new found power and they seek to eliminate you before you complete your training.

Scenerio 1: As you pass through a place with several mesh of trees which they hid, they toss a kunai to your feet to signal the bullseye and a sign for other to commence attack, then this is followed by hundreds of kunai being hurled at you, not at once but concurrently.
Your byakugan is not activated as you head home so you won't notice anything before the first kunai.
You can't use rotation.
Use what you have learnt so far in jyuken to defend yourself from the mayhem of kunais.

Scenerio 2: Instead of hurling kunai at you, they jump out and surround you, 4 of them! Disable of all them with jyuken and freeform without using rotation and 64 strikes.
You can use taijutsu if you have it.

Scenerio 3: while you make your way through the woods, you are secretely put in a genjutsu where your sense of direction is taken away. You byakugan is not activated and as you move through the forest thinking you are going home, you are unknowingly to you moving towards a cliff which bottom is full of hot lava. You will fall into the creamy magma and melt away. Find a way to bring yourself out of the situation, ofcos you need your byakugan but you should find a way to activate it creatively without God-modding.^^

Scenerio 4: My clone awaits you with all those invaders out in the blue, then she wants to fight you too, seems she is in a state of madness. Attack me with just 3 moves comprising of 2 jyuken moves and one any other move you think you can combine with it.


Lets see how you fair!
 

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Scenario 1:
As he head home from training with Nel, Neji walks through a place with lots of trees and bushes, perfect places to hide. He notices a kunai being tossed near his feet and then suddenly a barrage of kunai knives start flying at him. After doing the necessary handseals, Neji activates his Byakugan. Then, he does Protective 8 Trigrams 64 Strikes instead of 8 Trigrams Heavenly Spin/Rotation to block the deflect the waves of kunai flying towards him

Scenario 2:
Neji sees four of his attackers surround him. He can see all of them due to his 360 vision. He begins by blowing away one of them with Air Palm. One of his attackers tries to punch him, but Neji intercepts the blow with his arm and grabs his opponent's hand, then flips him. After flipping the man, Neji defeats him by striking him on the back thrice (Byakugan Three Strikes). Neji faces one of his other assailants and runs towards him. Then, Neji uses Hyuga Style Taijutsu to attack 16 of the man's chakra points. After doing this, Neji kicks the man on his knee and then on his face twice in quick succesion to send him spiraling into the air (Byakugan Three Kicks). The last man tries to attack Neji from behind but Neji can see him. Neji drops to the ground and does a sweeping kick to the man's legs. While the man is on the ground, Neji delivers a fatal blow to his heart, by using Chakra Point Pound.

Scenario 3:
Neji is walking through the forest and begins to lose his sense of direction. But Neji is sure that he is going the right way so he does the Byakugan activation handseals to activate his Byakugan to see what is going on. He sees that his chakra network has been tampered with by external chakra (genjutsu). He bites off a chunk of his lip, using the pain to break out of the genjutsu. Then he sees what would have happened if he hadn't broken out of the illusion.

Neji: What the hell! LAVA?

Scenario 4:
Neji sees Nel waiting for him. He realizes that she wants to fight him. He grabs her arm and flips her so her back is facing him. Then he strikes here three times. While he is still behind her, he kicks her in the knee with his heel bringing her to her knees. Then he sends her into the air by kicking her in her face twice. While she was falling, Neji jumps into the air and wraps his arms and legs around her. Then he piledrives her into the ground, Then Neji sees Nel disperse, realizing it was just a clone.
 
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Good I liked it, especially the scenerio 2. Your scene 3 however, you should be careful about genjutsu detection, what i had tought you could say was, you see the time it takes for you to get out of the forest is longer than usual and you think something is amiss, then you activate your byakugan to be sure if you did not misinterprete the road, then that is when you see your chakra being disturbed....tada!

Any question?
 

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Okay, you have proved enough to move to the next rank


(Hakke Shinten Kuushou) - 8 Trigrams 4
Heavenly empty palm
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Close-MId
Damage Points: 40(+8 if opponent hits an
object)
Description: A burst fire of empty palms that do more damage.

A larger version of the palm thrust blast, but this is fast and multiple can be done with both hands. Each hand is weaker but the potency is the blasts combined.
 

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* How you'll perform them(be elaborate explaining what hand you use and which part you hit in details)
You do the same thing you do with air palm with this one, you repeatedly fire the chakra out of both of your palms.

* When and what situation you are likely to utilize them
You are likely to use this when you need to attack an enemy at a longer distance

* What you think of it. Have you a better way of using it creatively?
You could use it to attack multiple targets at once by sending some of the chakra in different directions

* Its pros and cons
Pros:
Longer range than normal Jyuken
Can be used at high speed
More powerful than Hakke Kuushou
You could use this to block projectile attacks

Cons:
Range still limited
You can't use this to block elemental chakra attacks because raw chakra<elemental chakra
You can't use this
 

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Good!

Now to the next.

(Hakke Hyakunijuuhachishou) - 8 Trigrams 128
Strikes
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: Attack that closes 128 tenketsu and limits chakra to half for three turns after
the opponent is hit by it.

You simply increase your number of strikes compared to the 64 strikes you did before.
Also describe how you will creatively do this and its effect on your opponent.
 

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* How you'll perform them(be elaborate explaining what hand you use and which part you hit in details)
You get in the standard Gentle Fist stance and then attack 128 of the opponent's tenketsu by injecting your chakra inside them.

* When and what situation you are likely to utilize them
When you want to limit the opponents chakra flow so they can't use powerful techniques]

* What you think of it. Have you a better way of using it creatively?
You could use this multiple times in a row to close all 361 tenketsu in the opponent's body

* Its pros and cons
Pros:
Closes 128 tenketsu
Limits chakra flow
You could use it to deflect projectiles like when Neji deflected those spiders away from him

Cons:
Limited to close range


Question: A question about Gentle Fist. If the opponent flows elemental chakra through their body, will gentle fist strikes work?
 

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be more descriptive in the "How you'll perform it" columm.

As for your question, the answer is no. Gentle fist harvest your chakra in its purest form and uses shape manipulation and precise chakra control to be able to use. Elemental chakra is as a result of nature manipulation of pure chakra which is not gentle fist.
 

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Question: I meant, say the opponent flows elemental chakra throughout their body. Will Jyuuken affect them? (raw chakra<elemental chakra)
 

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it depends, if its a jutsu, its not possible to channel elemental chakra all over your body in freeform.

For example, A-rank jyuken might not affect B-rank chakra body coat like earth-spear, earth-armor and the likes for other elements. Except for some special jyuken like Kaiten and twin lion fist which is equal in power compared to elemental defense.
 

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Now for the next three, you will be dealing powerful strikes that is able to damage tenketsus and organs at the same time.

(Jūkenpō: Shiroikiton) - Gentle Fist Style:
White Spirit Release
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user performs a series of high- speed strikes before charging they chakra into
their hands and releasing it in a burst.
You will do two forms of Jyuken here, precision and blast. Strike continously the chakra points of the opponent then at the end charge blunt chakra into one of your hand and blast him to oblivion damaging his entrails.

(Hakke Kakuu Raishuu) – Eight Trigrams Aerial Attack
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user runs at the enemy at full speed before jumping and hitting one of the
foe’s vital organs. Alternatively the user may
jump from a high distance and palm the foe
continually until all chakra points blast.
You will run at full speed towards your opponent(when he is open) then jump and as you land, jab one of his vital organ severing it completely with one hit, otherwise after you run(compulsory), jump and jab continously the tenketsus until they burst.
Quiz: What is the reason behind the bursting of the tenketsus?

(Hakke Seirei Hirate) – Eight Trigrams Spirit
Palm
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user grabs the enemy on the chest and sends them flying. Then they strike
with a powerful hit with their palm.
Grab you enemy on the chest with one hand while charging chakra into the other, then sink the chakra into him to damage his internals and send him flying.
 

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(Jūkenpō: Shiroikiton) - Gentle Fist Style:
White Spirit Release


* How you'll perform them(be elaborate explaining what hand you use and which part you hit in details)
You get close to the opponent and start attacking them with a series of gentle fist strikes before charging chakra into your hand and firing it at your opponent.

* When and what situation you are likely to utilize them
When you need to attack?

* What you think of it. Have you a better way of using it creatively?
Nope

* Its pros and cons
Pros:
Could damage opponent's chakra system

Cons:
Short range


(Hakke Kakuu Raishuu) – Eight Trigrams Aerial Attack

* How you'll perform them(be elaborate explaining what hand you use and which part you hit in details)
You run at the opponent at full speed and jump into the air. When you land, you strike one of their vital organs, to damage it, or you repeatedly jab thier tenketsu until they burst

* When and what situation you are likely to utilize them
When you need to attack from the air or when something on the ground is stopping you from attacking.

* What you think of it. Have you a better way of using it creatively?
The jump could be used to avoid an attack

* Its pros and cons
Pros:
It can damage vital organs, which are very important parts of the body
It can burst tenketsu open
You can use the jump to avoid an attack, giving the technique defensive qualities.

Cons:
Short range
The opponent could attack you when you're in the air

Quiz: The tenketsu burst because you keep injecting them with chakra, so there is too much chakra inside and they burst. Kind of like when a balloon pops when you blow too mch air into it.


(Hakke Seirei Hirate) – Eight Trigrams Spirit
Palm


* How you'll perform them(be elaborate explaining what hand you use and which part you hit in details)
You grab the opponent's chest and then throw them away, while gathering chakra in your other palm. Then you hit them with a powerful strike that causes internal damage

* When and what situation you are likely to utilize them
When you want to send the opponent away from you

* What you think of it. Have you a better way of using it creatively?
Nope

* Its pros and cons
Pros
Sends the opponent flying
Causes them internal damage

Cones:
Short range
 

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Um disapponted. >.<

You can do more than just giving me back the description of the jutsu.
Gimme detailed description as if you are using it on an opponent.
Also stop with the "No way of using it creatively. You should think real deep, there is always a way of doing something different with a jutsu.

now get to work. Hence, you must be very detailed in our future training
 
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