poem2...

[KuroKaze]

I'm broken deep inside.
I can't take much more.
You lie about everything.
I hate you to the core.

At once I felt your love,
But it turns out a lie.
I've lost all your trust,
So leave now and go die.

You tricked me so easily,
I couldn't believe it.
You were just so clever,
It's hard to admit.

Now that you're leaving,
I do feel some guilt,
But my anger never faded.
My heart started to wilt.

Two emotions kill my life.
I blame you for it all,
But why do I keep it up,
After all my tears fall?

 

[Azearl]

very emoic but nicer than twilight.....

 

[Fusion Reborn]

Still a better love story than Twilight.

 

[ziggyZ]

Thats a bit aggressivexd But I liked it.

 

[Form]

Your poem describes how I feel about my alter ego.

 

[KuroKaze]

sorry i posted this in wrong section...

 

[Scooby Doo]

Hm, it's good