poem12

[KuroKaze]

The eyes in the shadows, they stare out at me
In the dark and dreary of my room there you must be
They talk to me in silence and fear that I feel
It all Swells up inside me, my thoughts begin to reel
The death you tell me of, keep away
I pretend to be dead
I take myself away, far away
Somewhere safe
I cry in the night so nobody will see
In the fear and the desperation
That now belong to me
You haunt me and robbed me of life
Fright is your victim of my innermost fear
Control me is what you shall always do
For the eyes in the shadows must belong to you

 

[Uchiha Josephus]

Roses are red,
Violets are purple,
Why did you think they were blue?
Who started that???

OT: nice

 

[Scary Yamato]

You did a good job with the dark theme. Is there a real title to this other than "poem12"?

It seems your rhyming scheme fell apart near the end. I dont know if it was intentional or not. I just found it odd that the whole thing rhymed except for the two bolded lines.
I cry in the night so nobody will see
In the fear and the desperation
That now belong to me
You haunt me and robbed me of life
Fright is your victim of my innermost fear
Control me is what you shall always do
For the eyes in the shadows must belong to you

 

[Scooby Doo]

Not bad. Keep up the good work