Poem

[Punk Hazard]

Sometimes i just feel incredible
you dudes just edible
like a vegetable
no wonder you green
without me being obscene
the only place you beating me is in your dreams
cuz lyrically
this is a tyranny
That will leave you critically
as i lay this down to a page
i swear to be the best of my age
cuz i feel like a beast in a cage
and when im freed
the force is unleashed
like a dog running around the streets
just wanna be the guy killing the beats
and to have more feats
than a centipede
recognition? I want plenty please
Dont wanna be the guy with so many fees
i just feel like i can rip out trees
Force against me means nothing like a trap full of beez
if i got down to my knees
you wouldn't be on my level
im a boulder you're just a pebble
On the Shore
just like them tanned whores
Roast you like smores

Not done, but this is what I have so far. :|

 

[Filo]

couldnt really like sing it right in my hed does this go to a beat?

 

[-Carnage-]

alot of slang on this "poem" its more like a rap....cool....+rep man xd

 

[Punk Hazard]

couldnt really like sing it right in my hed does this go to a beat?

It goes to Echo by Bad Meets Evil. You might not be able to "follow" it since it's supposed to go at alternating "speeds".

alot of slang on this "poem" its more like a rap....cool....+rep man xd

It is, it's supposed to be called Echo, but I put Poem as the thread title for some reason.

 

[KobayashiShane]

Not bad. I got one of my own for ya

Tendencies of redundancy not the way to come at me
Better keep your gun in reach and move cautiously thru the streets
Better watch you step, yeah check your feet
No reason to start with me cos I kill the cow before there's beef
And if destruction is all you seek, then your soul is mine to keep
The way I spit is so natural I do it mindlessly, countdown to your death, 1 2 3
Times ran up no where to run, no place to go, just your coffin where you will sleep
And be imprisoned in a false reality, cos that's what it's like if you think that you can beat me
What I do; I do it masterfully, spit a whole verse with the same rhyme scheme and did it flawlessly
When I spit words I do so precisely with a surgical vocabulary
Cos the more precise I am the less messy
More of a chance for you to pass with some dignity
But you see, you can't be taken seriously; no way you can beat me lyrically; no way you can survive facing me

Sorry for the length hope you like it!

 

[kmrasengan]

It goes to Echo by Bad Meets Evil. You might not be able to "follow" it since it's supposed to go at alternating "speeds".


It is, it's supposed to be called Echo, but I put Poem as the thread title for some reason.

i have this music in my phone. anyway nice job riker as always.

 

[Punk Hazard]

Not bad. I got one of my own for ya

Tendencies of redundancy not the way to come at me
Better keep your gun in reach and move cautiously thru the streets
Better watch you step, yeah check your feet
No reason to start with me cos I kill the cow before there's beef
And if destruction is all you seek, then your soul is mine to keep
The way I spit is so natural I do it mindlessly, countdown to your death, 1 2 3
Times ran up no where to run, no place to go, just your coffin where you will sleep
And be imprisoned in a false reality, cos that's what it's like if you think that you can beat me
What I do; I do it masterfully, spit a whole verse with the same rhyme scheme and did it flawlessly
When I spit words I do so precisely with a surgical vocabulary
Cos the more precise I am the less messy
More of a chance for you to pass with some dignity
But you see, you can't be taken seriously; no way you can beat me lyrically; no way you can survive facing me

Sorry for the length hope you like it!

I like it.

 

[KobayashiShane]

Thanks man

 

[Yuka]

i really liked it good-work