GrimReaperoftheHiddenLeaf
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I've been sorta hearing
bells
that weren't meant for me all day
Probably because of my sorrow being intensified
The lightning rose wilted and lost its last petal
My eyes have finally lost its light
and now mired in darkness and despair
This is a true poem straight from my head(to toe if u like xd)
EDIT: just now, I noticed this. Bells have a similar shape to roses. Adding the lightning flash effect to a wilting rose has a nice display, drying up and losing petals one by one, till the last one stays a little longer, then floats down to a pond. Ripples spread(and the rinnegan came to mind, so: ) fading to black leaving the ripples white and clear, resembling the eye opening, and then turning pale(losing its light) filling up with a look of despair and finally all fades to darkness.
Probably because of my sorrow being intensified
The lightning rose wilted and lost its last petal
My eyes have finally lost its light
and now mired in darkness and despair
This is a true poem straight from my head(to toe if u like xd)
EDIT: just now, I noticed this. Bells have a similar shape to roses. Adding the lightning flash effect to a wilting rose has a nice display, drying up and losing petals one by one, till the last one stays a little longer, then floats down to a pond. Ripples spread(and the rinnegan came to mind, so: ) fading to black leaving the ripples white and clear, resembling the eye opening, and then turning pale(losing its light) filling up with a look of despair and finally all fades to darkness.
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