Poem - Joyous bliss within the spring bound rain

[GrimReaperoftheHiddenLeaf]

This is pretty much the first poem I wrote.

"Joyous bliss within the spring-bound rain"

1 Sound of the hidden rain
2 Comes out like thunder
3 But shatters hitting the drain
4 Going down under
5 The ground booming with lightning
6 Never striking the same spot twice
7 As we dance in the rain kissing
8 Cold as the winter ice
9 Not so much as a care
10 In the world about
11 The deadness of the crisp air
12 Without a shadow of a doubt
13 Blooming with the warmth
14 Of the sunny rainbows
15 Shivering and huddling around the hearth
16 Crackling with twigs from the willows
17 Grandma brings in heart-warming stew
18 After eating bowlfuls
19 We are left alone, just me and you
20 Can't resist getting mouthfuls
21 Of caressing compassion
22 Bound together by love
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[Ldude]

Good, but you don't need to number lines when it's so short.