Poem about Itachi T__T

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in front of my eyes there is nothing you can hide
for i am Itachi Uchiha, my vision is wide
i am one of konohas heroes, hiding in the dark
attending a dark organisation, teamed up with a shark

i watch over my beloved village, where my brother lives
i do what is necessary, considering all "buts" and "ifs"
going as far as to kill all of my own clan
under the circumstance to spare but one little man

my beloved little brother, who should be the future hero
i will make him kill me, to bring our clans sins to zero
as the master of illusion, i am second to but one
shisui my best friend, who rather died, though he could've won

in front of my eyes, no one can stand
as there is no attack anyone could land
for i have the yata mirror, an ultimate defense
as well as the totsuka blade, my strongest offense

it is my responsibility, to save our clans name
to makee sure i was the only one to blame
so that our village could live without any war
so that i was the only one getting a deep scar

eating me up inside out with unbearable pain
i made sure all the powers i have my brother would gain
so that one day he could be safe when im gone
only then will my lifes task be done

its true, i wished for another life
i wished for friends, kids and a wife
but my fate was destined to be another
for i had to protect my only brother

i hope until his death he never finds out
what my whole life and the uchiha were about
i want him to live happily without any pain
i hope all my actions are not in vain

now it doesnt matter, as im about to die
i only wished i could tell him before i lie
that no matter what happens, we're always together
and that i will love him always and forever....

</3 T__T what do you guys think?
 
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I cri evrtim :,(

But seriously, great poem.
 

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Nothing special. + rep anyways
 

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cool poem i like it
 

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Interesting read. Good job.
 
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Amazing!!!! Thanks for writing about me;-; I love you guys, specially you, Sasuke!
 

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Yuse

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really good man
 

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i made it in like 12 mins^^ i will show you a special one in the future U_U

dont worry about it he is just an extremely jealouse person,because he has no talents except to whine and nag.
 

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Very beautiful and inspiring!

Thank you for sharing it with me.
 

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Very nice...keep up the good work :D
 

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It's really nice. Thank you for posting that. :)
 

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Not a bad read. Nicely done. You told his story quite well.
 

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not very good given the majority of it is wrong.
i am one of konohas heroes, hiding in the dark
HAHAHAHA. pretty sure hes a violent torturing psychopath who helped destroy konoha

i made sure all the powers i have my brother would gain
so that one day he could be safe when im gone
itachi tortured sasuke into insanity and crushed him psychologically and mentally. in no way was he ever "Safe" and giving powers to an evil traitor is stupidly endangering innocent people. the only people who give villains more power intentionally are also villains.
 
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