Samoan Ninja of the Cloud
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This is in short, the background, coming from the girls perspective of the story...currently writing up the reasons, and the situation of the Boy.... XD
Childhood friends, boy and girl (in the 3rd grade) grow up together for 3 years, but then something happens (family member of the boy does something that victimizes the girls family, making her and the public feel nothing but hate for the boy), and the girl begins to treat the boy like trash. this continues till now which is the beginning of High School and the world still thinks of him as trash, and the low views they have of him are even lower due to his absences from school, and even when attending school, the public perception is always the same, but news has been spreading of a vigilante who has caught the eye of the Girl, and soo the attention draws to this awesome guy who goes about defeating bad guys and bringing justice to those who have been without… but then, one day, a hostage situation occurs at a shopping mall, and the Girl is currently in the bathroom when the commotion starts. confused and scared she hides in the stall until a group of men checking for people hiding find her and start to act pervertedly towards her, but as they begin to get into the mood, more commotion occurs, gunfire is heard, and shouting of the Vigilante being there and killing the men responsible for the heist, now in this building surrounded by police, the question lingers, “how did he get in?” but that ends up being the last thing on their minds as the men are being killed one by one.
closing the toilet door, the men with the girl, holding their guns aimed at the door, the men hold the girl down, “now missy shut up, and we’ll make this quick and easy” the men signal to each other that they’ll proceed with their original motive, and pause when the commotion outside quiets down, they ready their guns again at the door, and one of the men subduing the girl tries to continue and causes girl to scream out for help. The men surprised quickly shut her mouth but its too late, the door smashes open almost as if someone strapped a whole lot of C4 on the door and lit it up, guns start firing at the shadow in the smoke, but the shadow still stands, the shadow disappears and then reappears to take down one of the men instantly twisting the guys neck killing him, 1 down, 3 to go, the other one runs into the smoke while the other two hold the Girl down and aiming their guns. but in a flash, the guy in smoke drops down on the floor revealing his arm through the smoke. the two shiver as they hold down the Girl, then one of them dashes for the door leaving the other one holding the Girl down to get killed instead but that ends in a Loud cry leaving the last guy with one thing to do, and that was to put the gun to the Girls head and threaten to kill her, but as his had stopped at aiming the gun at her head, a shadow is seen holding the guys hand and taking the gun away, aiming it back at the guy, he then, moving the Girl away by her hand so that she doesn’t see and after she has no line of sight, he pulls the trigger.
All the hostages walk out in a daze, not sure what they had witnessed, but with the knowledge that they were safe now. The Hero, and the Girl still in the bathroom, still surrounded by smoke, the Hero stands at the door, looks back at the Girl and say’s something that gets her interest and with that said he leaves her and disappears from the Hostage site, and all that the Girl can think about is her Childhood Friend, the Boy, and how his image has become the one thing her mind has begun to revolve around. Feelings of Confusion, Fear and Excitement, the Girl cannot make out what had just happened.
a few weeks passed, and the Boy had not come to school since that heist, and the Girls feelings begin to wander off into questions concerning the Boy. the Boy returns to the ridicule by peers and almost all the staff who can’t be bothered putting up a facade towards him. he has become in essence, the meaning of the term, “Loner”. but, the Girl see’s more than what she saw before, she see’s someone who made it all on their own, riding on the shame of a family member, accursed by the world and forced to live alone, feel alone, and ultimately die alone. This girl finds herself with a choice. continue to live her life, looking down on the one who saved her, or look up to him and find out what lies behind the eyes of a Boy whom she once shared everything with.
closing the toilet door, the men with the girl, holding their guns aimed at the door, the men hold the girl down, “now missy shut up, and we’ll make this quick and easy” the men signal to each other that they’ll proceed with their original motive, and pause when the commotion outside quiets down, they ready their guns again at the door, and one of the men subduing the girl tries to continue and causes girl to scream out for help. The men surprised quickly shut her mouth but its too late, the door smashes open almost as if someone strapped a whole lot of C4 on the door and lit it up, guns start firing at the shadow in the smoke, but the shadow still stands, the shadow disappears and then reappears to take down one of the men instantly twisting the guys neck killing him, 1 down, 3 to go, the other one runs into the smoke while the other two hold the Girl down and aiming their guns. but in a flash, the guy in smoke drops down on the floor revealing his arm through the smoke. the two shiver as they hold down the Girl, then one of them dashes for the door leaving the other one holding the Girl down to get killed instead but that ends in a Loud cry leaving the last guy with one thing to do, and that was to put the gun to the Girls head and threaten to kill her, but as his had stopped at aiming the gun at her head, a shadow is seen holding the guys hand and taking the gun away, aiming it back at the guy, he then, moving the Girl away by her hand so that she doesn’t see and after she has no line of sight, he pulls the trigger.
All the hostages walk out in a daze, not sure what they had witnessed, but with the knowledge that they were safe now. The Hero, and the Girl still in the bathroom, still surrounded by smoke, the Hero stands at the door, looks back at the Girl and say’s something that gets her interest and with that said he leaves her and disappears from the Hostage site, and all that the Girl can think about is her Childhood Friend, the Boy, and how his image has become the one thing her mind has begun to revolve around. Feelings of Confusion, Fear and Excitement, the Girl cannot make out what had just happened.
a few weeks passed, and the Boy had not come to school since that heist, and the Girls feelings begin to wander off into questions concerning the Boy. the Boy returns to the ridicule by peers and almost all the staff who can’t be bothered putting up a facade towards him. he has become in essence, the meaning of the term, “Loner”. but, the Girl see’s more than what she saw before, she see’s someone who made it all on their own, riding on the shame of a family member, accursed by the world and forced to live alone, feel alone, and ultimately die alone. This girl finds herself with a choice. continue to live her life, looking down on the one who saved her, or look up to him and find out what lies behind the eyes of a Boy whom she once shared everything with.
this is just a story i have in mind for a one-shot manga... im developing the monologue as well as the Boy side of the story... i should have put more emphasis on the hell the Boy went through on here but then the idea of the Boy's perspective came in and so i'll try to make is as hell-like, degrading, and human as possible with his one XD laterz
by the way its too big resize or you'll get infraction in violation of rules 